Cultivation of Immortality Advances and Retreats Millions of Miles
修仙进退百万里
by Gaoliang (㞮蓍梁)
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 2k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Stats
Tags
- ThemeMartial Arts
- POVBottom-Lead (Shou)
- Age18+
- Angst
- Forum-Style
- Happy Ending
- Power Couple
- Sweet Story
- Xianxia Cultivation
Synopsis
Characteristics of writing style: The first draft was written entirely in simple classical Chinese, but due to reader feedback, the final version was changed to white and white; the grand ancient battles and tragedy sections were written in classical Chinese to give a sense of weight, and the daily interactions and dialogues were in popular vernacular. The writing skills are different from the ancient style online articles written in vernacular throughout. The two protagonists: Yi Linggu (sufferer) and Shen Qingyue (attacker), both of whom are the same age and fifteen years old, start the story World view core setting In the ancient times, there was a dispute between the three realms. Yi Linggu, the nine-tailed fox king, was the supreme controller of the demon clan. He had a long life and was immortal. He single-handedly killed the three innate gods, the God of Literature, the God of Martial Arts, and the Supreme God. In one battle, he tore apart mountains and rivers for millions of miles. He was the evil god who was known to all the immortal families. When he died, everyone in the three realms was very happy. At that time, the ordinary Shen family was just a small family farming and studying in the mountains, and Shen Qingyue had not yet been born. There was no dispute between the two. Yi Linggu's soul is immortal, and his broken soul is reincarnated. However, he encounters changes when he is reincarnated into a physical body at a young age: his biological parents died early. A branch of the Yi family, greedy for family property, abandoned him in a back alley because he was injured by a stone on the head and had a chaotic and crazy mind. The complete plot of the main line 1. First encounter: Being bullied when living in exile, accidentally entering the Shen family After rebirth, Yi Linggu lost all the seals of his demonic power, and was left with only a frail mortal body of fifteen years old. His personality became out of character, timid and lacking in love. He was afraid of the dark, ghosts, and corpses. He would cry alone when he was wronged. While living in an alley, he was surrounded, slapped and beaten by rich men. In a panic, he snatched the merchant's horse and fled, accidentally entering the back hill of the Shen family. The dandy chased him into the mountains. That night, someone secretly sacrificed a ghost-bending talisman and used the evil spirits in the mountain to kill two bullies. He deliberately left the talisman to blame Yi Linggu. The young stewards of the Shen family, Shen Xingyu and Shen Siyi, moderated and allowed everyone to stay temporarily in another courtyard. That night, Yi Ling went into the mountain alone and bumped into a wild ghost. When he returned, he bumped into two corpses and collapsed in shock. The next day, the deceased's parents came to his door, insulted him indiscriminately in public, and framed him for driving evil spirits to kill people. Shen Qingyue, the legitimate son of the Shen family who is the same age, abides by the etiquette and rules, and the words "Shen's family is forbidden to make noise" calmed the whole audience, silently seeing all the grievances of the young man. Yi Ling was speechless and locked himself in his bedroom at night, crying bitterly. Shen Qing heard the cries across the wall and felt pity in his heart. The Yi family was unwilling to take him in because of his unstable mind, so he was entrusted to the strict Shen family and given to the discipline of Shen Yanyuan, the elder of the Shen family. From then on, he lived in the Shen Mansion and began to spend time with Shen Qingyue day and night. 2. Getting along: The pull between a family of rules and a fox cub The Shen family has many and strict rules. Shen Yanyuan is often angered by Yi Linggu's mischievous behavior and constantly adds new rules to restrain him. Shen Qingyue has been influenced by etiquette since he was a child. He never contradicts his elders and acts restrained and reserved. He always complains about Yi Linggu's ignorance of the rules, but he secretly favors him in every way: secretly giving his pass sign and cakes to Yi Linggu, and silently paying attention to his mood late at night. Yi Linggu has an outspoken nature and loves to act coquettishly. He always likes to tease Shen Qingyue, pull out his hair, beg for drinks, and frankly says that Shen's rules restrict his body and mind. He declares that he never likes men, but subconsciously relies on Shen Qingyue's protection. When the two of them were alone in the forest, Yi Linggu was sleeping soundly on a tree. Shen Qingyue couldn't control her feelings and kissed him secretly. Yi Linggu mistakenly mistook him for a little girl without realizing it. Yi Linggu could go back to the Yi family two days a week, and he would go home to relax when he was suppressed by the Shen family's rules. He was afraid of the cold, had a thin waist and white skin, and did not dare to bathe alone at night. He always looked forward to being accompanied by someone. 3. Barrier: Life experience exposed, three years of imprisonment and separation As they get along with each other for a long time, Shen Qing becomes more aware of his own feelings and confesses his feelings to his grandfather Shen Yanyuan. Shen Yanyuan finally agrees to marry him with three letters and six matchmakers. But the identity of Yi Linggu's ancient demon fox was accidentally exposed. The Xianmen and the Shen family were afraid of his past of killing gods, and believed that he was causing trouble in the world, so they joined forces to encircle and suppress him. Yi Linggu disappeared for three years. He was forcibly imprisoned after others discovered his demon clan bloodline. He was tortured and tortured, and his body became thinner, but he still did not change his straightforward nature. After seventeen long years of separation, the two faced each other across the world of human beings, aristocratic families, and the prejudices of the three worlds, and misunderstandings abounded. 4. Consummation: the estrangement is resolved, and the matchmaker is marrying Seventeen years of entanglements have been resolved, and all conspiracies, framed murder cases, and the truth about the past in the Three Realms have been revealed. Shen Qingyue ignored the pressure from the whole clan and insisted on giving Yi Linggu the status of orthodoxy. Yi Ling sat alone in the Yi family's sedan chair and married into the Shen family with a heavy dowry. As expected, he waited for three matchmakers and six betrothals, and it was clear that the matchmaker would marry him, and he no longer had to hide their love. On the wedding day, all the restraints are removed from the bridal chamber. All the grievances, suspicions, and separation pains in the past are all healed by long-term love. Core themes 1. Two-way redemption: The cold and rigid son of an aristocratic family who is trapped by ethics and the ancient fox king who has been betrayed and covered with scars but is still sincere and unreliable fill each other's missing tenderness in life. 2. Prejudice and truth: People in the world judge good and evil based only on hearsay, and arbitrarily convict people without distinction of right and wrong, and all worldly prejudices are eliminated; only a sincere person is willing to put aside rumors and see clearly the other person's true heart. 3. Freedom and rules: The red tape of the Shen family restricts human nature, which corresponds to the unrestrained demon nature of Yi Linggu. The process of the two getting along is a reconciliation of rules and freedom. Unique highlights of the work 1. Strong character contrast: The eternal fox master, who was powerful in the three realms and killed gods and immortals, was reborn as a coward, a crybaby and a troublemaker. The contrast runs through the entire text; 2. The writing style is unique: it can control grand narratives in pure classical Chinese, and the daily plots are popular and smooth, which is different from the ancient style of cultivating immortals in vernacular in the market; 3. Balance of sweetness and abuse: in the early stage, the daily life of teenagers is relaxed and funny, in the middle stage, there is a sense of conflict in life experience, separation and imprisonment, and in the ending, the wedding is a happy healing; 4. Three-dimensional group portraits: The Shen family members, Shen Xingyu and Shen Yi and other supporting characters have clear stances, the villain's conspiracy line is complete, and the plot logic is closed loop. Intention: To advance is to kill the world, to retreat is to be gentle in the world