Embers of Evening Breeze

"Evening Breeze" Completely Filled in Submission Form 1. Title of work embers of evening breeze 2. Introduction to the work (optimized extended version, suitable for platform display, and atmospheric copywriting) She is Su Nianwan, a gentle and frail girl who was born with a serious illness and whose life is fragile; he is Shen Yuci, a cardiac surgery genius who holds a scalpel and restrains his paranoia. We first met in a hospital in late autumn. A heart failure emergency made two hearts that should not be intertwined tightly bound together. The tenderness that was stolen briefly was the only light for the rest of her gloomy life, and it was also the only weakness in his calm life. The family was under heavy pressure and he was suffering from terminal illness. She did not want to be a burden that would drag down his life. She endured her heartbreak and fabricated heartless lies, cut off the relationship with her own hands, swallowed the pain and longing alone, and survived three years of loneliness. They reunited again after three years of separation. He didn't know that there was a desperate situation behind the breakup, and all the hatred in his heart turned into harsh words and harsh words, and he repeatedly insulted her who was already on the verge of exhaustion. Misunderstandings piled up one after another, and hatred grew day by day, until the fire filled the sky and all the truth was revealed. He holds the world's top heart treatment plan, but he can only hold his lover who is gradually losing his warmth and face the eternal separation between heaven and man. There is no two-way redemption, no reunion, and the whole story is just depressive cruelty. All the love in the past was burnt to ashes, leaving the night wind behind every year. He was the only one left trapped in boundless regret, spending the rest of his life with no more love. Embers of evening breeze The total setting of the book is malaria Total text count: 400,000 words The tone of the article: The whole process is a slow-motion heart-wrenching story, with no redemption, no consummation, and no reunion. We go both ways but miss it all our lives. The male protagonist is affectionate and paranoid in the early stage → he hates the middle stage → becomes mad and regretful for the rest of his life in the later stage. The heroine hides her terminal illness, self-destructs for love, and dies alone. All the characters are BE, and no supporting characters are whitewashed. Character setting - The heroine: Su Nianwan, was born with congenital hypertrophic cardiomyopathy, accompanied by pulmonary hypertension, and was unable to have intense emotions or exertion throughout her life. Her constitution was weak and sensitive, her personality was quiet and tolerant, she was sensitive and had low self-esteem. She loved the male protagonist deeply but knew that she was not going to die soon. From the moment they met, she knew that the two of them had no ending. She was gentle and fragile, and spent her whole life saying goodbye. - Male protagonist: Shen Yuci, the top cardiac surgeon in the country. He became famous at the age of 28. He is calm and restrained. The scalpel can save thousands of people in the world, but it cannot save the one he loves. In the early stage, he was all eyes on the heroine. He is paranoid and single-minded. After being broken up, he completely turned into a black man. He is cold and heartless. He hurt the heroine with his own hands. After learning the truth, he went completely crazy. He lived alone with the heroine's belongings for the rest of his life. Core abuse point 1. The male protagonist is a heart doctor, but he cannot cure the female protagonist's heart disease. The doctor is powerless and his fate is tragic. 2. The female protagonist took the initiative to break up because of love, deliberately indifferent and hurtful, and suffered the pain and longing alone. The male protagonist had no idea about it and tortured each other with hatred for three years. 3. Family pressure + the heroine doesn't want to drag down the hero and pushes away her own light with her own hands 4. The male protagonist takes crazy revenge in the later stage, and his words and attitude are extremely hurtful. Every time he is hurt, he overdraws the remaining life of the female protagonist. 5. The truth was revealed on the eve of the heroine's death. The hero watched his beloved die in his arms and completely collapsed. 6. Ending: The heroine dies, and the hero never marries. He guards the heroine's tombstone and has only endless regret for the rest of his life, never being able to atone for his sins. Complete outline of the six volumes of the book (400,000 words accurately divided) Volume 1: Night Breeze Meets Dry Bones (10,000-70,000 words) First encounter and love, stolen tender time When they first met in the hospital in late autumn, the heroine fell ill and fainted, but the hero rescued her; after a long period of healing and companionship, the cold doctor made an exception and was gentle, and the two secretly fell in love; the heroine concealed the true severity of her illness and was greedy for short-term love; the Lu family intervened forcefully, forcing the heroine to leave the hero, laying the groundwork for a breakup; the heroine suffered cardiac arrest for the first time, faced the fear of death, and made up her mind to let go. Volume 2: Hypothetical words about mountains and seas (70,000 to 150,000 words) Breaking up decisively, hatred taking root The heroine cruelly fabricated lies, pretended to be in another relationship, was tired of the male supervisor's control, and broke up in public; the hero broke down to try to stay, and was stabbed by the heroine again and again; the hero saw the illusion deliberately arranged by the heroine with his own eyes, and was completely heartbroken, and love gave birth to hatred; the two completely broke off, and the hero closed his heart, became cold and violent, and had no emotions except for the operation; the heroine was hospitalized alone, and her condition deteriorated rapidly, and she was plagued by illness every night, and she missed her terribly. Volume 3: Look coldly upon each other (150,000-240,000 words) Confrontation again, tormenting each other We met again three years later. The heroine's condition worsened and she returned to the hero's hospital for medical treatment. She happened to be assigned to the hero's department. The hero didn't know the truth and believed that the heroine was ruthless and unjust back then, so he began to retaliate with extreme coldness. He deliberately made things difficult for her in official affairs and made harsh words in private, poking at the heroine's sore spots with every word. The heroine silently endured all the harm, not daring to defend herself or expose her illness. The hero was retaliating but could not control himself and fell into a love-hate relationship. Volume 4: Deep Love Hidden on the Tip of a Knife (240,000-320,000 words) Secret heartache, fragments of truth The male protagonist frequently encounters the female protagonist's sudden illness, and sees her pale and faint, unable to sleep all night, and the hatred in his heart begins to loosen; he secretly investigates the female protagonist's current situation, and finds out that she has been hospitalized for a long time and is in extremely poor health, which makes him suspicious. Volume 5: It's too late to know the wind and snow (320,000-380,000 words) The truth is revealed, and heaven and man are separated forever The male protagonist found out the whole truth: the female protagonist was terminally ill, forced by her family, let go for love, and endured the pain and longing alone for three years; he knew that all his revenge in the past three years was to hurt the person who loved him the most; the male protagonist completely collapsed and went crazy to look for the female protagonist, putting aside all pride and humbly trying to save her; the female protagonist's life came to an end, and refused the male protagonist's attempt to stay, not wanting him to watch her die with his own eyes; in her final confession, all misunderstandings were resolved, and her love was revealed. Volume 6: The remaining embers of my life (380,000-400,000 words) If I don't see you in this life, I will regret it for the rest of my life. The female protagonist passed away quietly in the arms of the male protagonist; the male protagonist had the best heart treatment plan in the world, but there was no chance of treatment; the male protagonist resigned from all positions, closed himself off, stayed in the house where the female protagonist lived, and kept all her belongings; he never married, and lived in self-blame and regret all his life; the final outcome: the night breeze remained the same for the rest of his life, there was no more Su Nianwan in the world, his love and the rest of his life were all reduced to ashes.   Text Volume One: Evening Wind Meets Dry Bones [Chapter One: Cold Autumn Wind Meets Old Friends] Late autumn, November in Jiangcheng. The cold wind rolled up the withered yellow sycamore leaves and swept across the sky. The clouds were very low and there was no sunlight all day long. The air was damp and biting, and even breathing felt cold and painful. At the City's First People's Hospital, people were coming and going outside the cardiac surgery outpatient building. The smell of disinfectant filled every inch of the air, cold and numb. Su Nianwan leaned against the cold wall, clutching the clothes on her chest tightly with her fingertips, and the fine cold sweat instantly soaked the thin knitted sweater on her back. There was a sharp and suffocating dull pain in her heart, as if an invisible hand was holding her heart tightly, and every time it beat, there was a tearing pain. She bent over and gasped violently. Her face was as pale as paper, and her red lips instantly lost all color and became lifeless. Another attack. From birth, congenital hypertrophic cardiomyopathy was like a shackle, tightly binding her short life. Doctors have said countless times that her heart is several times more fragile than ordinary people. She cannot catch cold, be emotional, be tired, or have emotional fluctuations of great joy or sorrow. Her life was marked out from the beginning. There is no youth running wantonly, no vigorous love, and even normal joy, anger, sorrow, and joy are all a luxury hope. She is twenty-two years old and has been facing death for twenty-two years. Every extra day she lives is a stolen time. I just went out to get medicine today and encountered a strong wind that cooled me down. In just a few minutes, acute heart failure was directly induced. His vision began to darken, the voices in his ears gradually became blurred, his limbs completely lost strength, and his body fell straight towards the ground. The cold and hard ground as expected did not come. The next moment, a strong, clean arm with a slightly cool temperature firmly held her falling body. The crisp and clean cold fragrance of pine wood, mixed with the faint smell of medical disinfectant, penetrated into the nasal cavity and suppressed the suffocation feeling in her chest. A low, cool, and calm male voice slowly sounded above the head, calm and professional, with the unique calmness of a doctor: "The patient's complexion is cyanotic, his heart rate is tachy, and he is experiencing acute heart failure. He immediately pushes the rescue bed, establishes an intravenous access, and prepares for oxygen inhalation." The man's voice was devoid of any unnecessary emotion, and he gave the doctor's orders in an orderly manner, with every instruction being extremely precise. Su Nianwan opened her heavy eyelids with difficulty, and with blurred vision, she could clearly see the appearance of the person in front of her. The man is wearing a meticulous white coat. He has a tall and slender figure, sharp shoulder lines, and a clear and upright posture. The short black hair is neatly styled, the eyebrows are deep and three-dimensional, the bridge of the nose is high, the thin lips are pressed tightly, the whole face is handsome and sharp, but there is no warmth at all. There was a coldness and alienation around him that kept strangers away from him, and his dark eyes were calm and calm, as if all the separations of life and death in the world could not shake him in the slightest. It's Shen Yuci. A genius cardiac surgeon who is well-known in Jiangcheng's medical circles. He is twenty-eight years old. He has firmly established himself as the director of cardiac surgery at a young age. He has performed numerous difficult cardiac surgeries and has snatched countless lives back from death. He is the god of the heart and the only hope in the eyes of all heart disease patients. But unfortunately, he could save thousands of broken hearts in the world, but he could not save hers, which was born with a broken heart and was already destined to fail. Before his consciousness completely sank, Su Nianwan looked at his cold and beautiful eyebrows, and a turbulent and hopeless heart beat uncontrollably in her heart. It turns out that she will encounter such a beam of light in the rest of her barren and gloomy life. Even if this light was cold and distant, never belonging to her, even if it was close to him, it would only make her already fragile heart even more vulnerable. But the heartbeat is uncontrollable, and love is born blind. When I woke up again, I was in the VIP single care unit. There is a white ceiling above my head, the regular and steady beeping sound of instruments is in my ears, and the lingering smell of disinfectant is still on the tip of my nose. The sky outside the window has completely darkened, night has enveloped the entire city, and the cold wind slaps the windows, making a whining sound. The pain in the chest has been mostly relieved. There is an infusion needle attached to the wrist, and the cold liquid slowly flows into the body along the blood vessels. The ward door was gently pushed open. Shen Yuci walked in, took off his surgical clothes, and was only wearing a simple white shirt. The cuffs were neatly rolled up to his forearms, revealing his clean and beautiful wrists with clear joints. He held her medical record in his hand, walked to the bedside, looked down at her, his eyes fell on her pale and bloodless face, and his tone was still calm: "Are you awake?" Su Nianwan blinked slightly, and her voice was weak and hoarse, as thin as a gnat: "Thank you, doctor." "I have read your medical records." Shen Yuci opened the thick medical records in his hand, and his fingertips lightly ran across the shocking lines of examination reports. His eyes darkened slightly, "Congenital hypertrophic cardiomyopathy, accompanied by severe pulmonary hypertension, 22 years of medical history, multiple hospitalizations for acute heart failure, and you have never followed the doctor's advice to rest?" There was a hint of reproach in his tone, which was a normal question from a doctor to a patient who didn't value his own life. Su Nianwan lowered her long eyelashes to cover up all the emotions in her eyes, and curled her fingertips slightly. She also wanted to take a good rest and live a peaceful life, but the illness never gave her a chance to choose. "I take my medicine on time." She explained in a low voice. "Taking medicine on time is not enough." Shen Yuci raised his eyes and looked straight at her with his dark eyes, his eyes professional and sharp. "With your condition, you cannot catch cold, be emotional, be tired, or even have a violent heartbeat. Any slight stimulation may cause you to have a cardiac arrest and you will not be able to be saved." The last sentence he said was very soft, but extremely cruel and straightforward. Tell her bluntly that she will die at any time. Tell her bluntly that she doesn't deserve even a heartbeat in this life. Su Nianwan's heart felt slightly astringent, and there was a faint dull pain in her heart that was originally just fine. Yes, she can't be moved. But just a few hours ago, she had already fallen in love with the cold doctor in front of her. This heartbeat was fatal poison from the beginning. Shen Yuci looked at the girl's suddenly pale face and the flash of loneliness and vulnerability in her eyes, and her heart moved inexplicably. He has seen countless heart disease patients, crying, desperate, collapsed, numb, and all kinds of others. But I have never seen such a quiet little girl. Even when the pain is extreme, he won't cry, and he won't show his sadness. He just lowers his head quietly, like a dead leaf that can be blown away by the wind at any time, so fragile that it will break at the touch. He put back his chaotic thoughts, suppressed the irrelevant strange emotions in his heart, and returned to his duties as a doctor: "I will adjust your medication plan in the future, and you will be hospitalized for three days of observation. You will come to me for a review every month. Do not stop taking the medicine without permission, and do not go out alone." "Okay." Su Nianwan nodded obediently. The man said no more and turned to leave the ward. When he reached the door, he suddenly stopped, turned his head, looked at the girl curled up quietly on the hospital bed with his peripheral vision, and added lightly: "Living well is more important than anything else." The words fell and the door closed. The ward became quiet again. Su Nianwan was lying on the hospital bed, looking at the closed door, slowly raising her hand and gently covering her weakly beating heart. Live well. But after meeting him, she seemed to not want to just live well. She wanted to be close to him, wanted to have a moment of tenderness, and wanted to have a love of her own in the rest of her limited life. Even if this love will hasten her death. Even from the beginning, it was destined to be doomed. Chapter 2 Review every year, falling step by step In the following days, Su Nianwan would come to the hospital for review on time every month. Every time, Shen Yuci received the treatment in person. At first it was just a simple doctor-patient relationship. He inquired, she answered, he wrote a prescription, and she took the medicine. There were very few conversations throughout the process, and they were both polite and distant. Shen Yuci has always been indifferent and treats all patients equally, without any more care or less responsibility. But Su Nianwan cherished every time they met. She would go out long in advance and put on the gentlest and cleanest clothes carefully. Even if she was weak, she would put herself in good condition and just want to look her best in front of him. She would sit quietly on the chair in the consulting room, silently watching him work. Watching him lower his head to write medical records, his side face is cold and beautiful; watching him patiently comforting a patient who is suffering from emotional breakdown, there is a rare gentleness in his eyes; watching him take off his glasses and gently press his eyebrows, revealing the fatigue hidden under his calmness. The world knows that Dr. Shen is cold and ruthless, his scalpel is cold, and his heart is even colder. But only Su Nianwan could see that underneath his cold shell, there was extreme tenderness and compassion. He would stay on the operating table for more than thirty hours for a difficult heart surgery; he would help patients from poor families reduce their medical expenses free of charge; and he would patiently comfort every patient who was afraid of death. He is not Purpose: Lovers have irresolvable misunderstandings due to fate, illness, and worldly persecution, and explore the helplessness of fate and the regret of missing out; once love is missed, no matter how deep regret is, it cannot restore the lost life and time.