The friend who put on the wedding dress should be blessing her, but why, I was so dizzy that I didn't notice the oncoming car...
Where is this? Why am I here in this weird place?
Marry? Wait, someone is getting married today, but it's not me. What's going on with all this?
Reader comments
Rarely good article. Although I felt the ending was a bit too rushed.
What I love most is the sense of history, so real and charming. Even the old songs from that time that I loved people too
Comments on "How to Live Longevity"
Please don't be surprised when Ali sees the unfamiliar name of Cold Sauce. It's not that hot sauce abandoned you, nor that she deliberately forgot. But Chijiang really likes your article so much that she can't think of anything else to give you except flowers. So, I hope that a hard-hearted guy like me will try to provide some objective opinions.
Hot sauce's joy is very tenable, and I can find many reasons to support her. The writing is smooth, the words and sentences are carefully chosen (occasionally there are jumps, it doesn't hurt if you have time to revise later), the plot is advanced smoothly, the image of the white face is vividly portrayed, etc. What is particularly worthy of praise is that Ahri has properly grasped the essence of public case romance, with the public case at the front and the romance at the back. As the tense and exciting case progresses, tenderness slowly penetrates. Compared with rushing to unfold the theme of love, this kind of treatment makes the relationship more natural and valuable.
Some people think this article is protracted, but I don't entirely think so. Many detective stories, even the most famous ones, are often not so straightforward at the beginning, and are filled with a lot of miscellaneous and seemingly insignificant explanations. But a clever author will gradually unravel the cocoon and pluck the thread later, allowing readers to understand the intention through thinking. Detective writing pays attention to the accumulation of details, leading readers to slowly discover the truth of the incident on their own. Just like doing math problems, readers can enjoy the fun of inquiry through thinking. It would be great if, in the end, the author could raise his flag a little higher and frighten the readers. It's just that such a structure is always difficult to achieve, and it requires very high requirements for writing, logic, and conception. If someone really does it all, then Bing Xin will probably set off firecrackers, and JJ will also have Higashino Keigo. :)
It is obvious that Ahri is familiar with Kindaichi and is also familiar with Detective Conan. The outline is deeply influenced by Japanese mystery novels, and it follows the path of incredible and bizarre cases. From the modus operandi to the motive, everything is unexpected and beyond the reach of ordinary people. Where the power of immortality cannot be reached, the white-faced monster power is still needed to help. This kind of plot arrangement is very popular for children (hot sauce, please don't choose your own seats). At the end of the book, readers learn that the case is so weird. They always want to think that such a thing exists in the world, and they cannot help but applaud the author's imagination. However, looking back, many of the modus operandi can only exist in human imagination and cannot be implemented into actions. There are too many coincidences and accidents to withstand careful examination. For example, the first concubine case that Changsheng solved, the mechanism of hanging a cup from hair. I did a hair load-bearing test in junior high school physics. One hair can bear 1.5 N, and two cups should not be a problem. So, I tried it, but the result was not very satisfactory. It either slipped or broke, or the candle fell over due to uneven load-bearing. (It's really scary to have a serious reader like me.) Cases that are unlikely to occur in real life will have a much weaker impact on readers. Sometimes, I wonder, is it easier to write a series of short stories, or is it better to write a big, complete suspense?
In fact, Lala Zaza said so much, it cannot be regarded as a commentary in the strict sense, but more like a discussion of reasoning articles. For Ahri, who is writing a mystery article for the first time, my requirements are a bit too high. I just feel that Ahri definitely still has a lot of potential to be tapped, and I always feel that you deserve a better story, so I just said everything I thought, and you can just take a look.
I took another look at it. When will there be an update? I'm still highly curious about Xiaoxiang and Xiaobao.
Hey, what's going on at the top of the Forbidden City?
Leave traces behind! Come on
Brother Zhiyuan. . . But the position is really not firm
Come on, I've finally achieved positive results, haha
Louda, you finally updated! ! ! Tears streaming down my face………
People cannot choose their birth or their past, but they can choose their future. For a strong person, strength is his business card; for a selfish person, selfishness is his motto.
I like the heroine in it. Although she is in adversity, she never bows her head or admits defeat.
But I still think the heroine is a bit too naive, and I hope she can be stronger. There is no one in the world that cannot survive without anyone. I think the heroine can completely leave here and start over in a brand new place, so that she can develop herself without any scruples.
Going to other places is not to escape, but to give yourself a buffer time. When the heroine comes back with a new look in the future, appearing like a princess and queen, with a stable and proud career, that will surprise everyone.
I like a saying I saw by Zeng Jin, which says that only by being worse than the bad guys can you protect yourself. I think this sentence makes sense. Sometimes, if you are kind, you will be rewarded. It is no longer popular to say that good deeds will be rewarded. The heroine wants to take revenge and develop a queen-like character. She still hopes to truly have such a consciousness and have such an environment.
If you struggle like Shancai in the face of adversity, you will definitely be able to get what you want. After all, Shancai's luck is still in the minority in this world.
The author might as well consider this suggestion to prevent the heroine from suffering such setbacks, as it feels like Cinderella. But Cinderella, even if she puts on a gorgeous dress, the magic can only be broken before twelve o'clock. Even if she was rescued by the prince, it would not change her past destiny and the lower-class temperament she cultivated. Because of rough work and rough hands, no matter how good a face you have, it is useless.
Therefore, I think it is better to let the heroine understand the frustrations from the front, and then give her such an environment and cultivate her well later. I think so. Of course, this is just my personal suggestion, and it still needs to be written according to the big settings.
When I was a child, I watched Meteor Garden and saw Shancai in it. I felt really envious. Although she was born badly, she still met her lover and got a lot of money. But when I grow up, I feel that even if Shancai can fall in love with her lover, can they really be together? Their values and concepts of life are always different. When there is love, it is time to accommodate each other, but how long can love last? When love is no longer there, what do they rely on to maintain this marriage. Therefore, if the heroine really wants to take revenge as mentioned above and let everyone who once looked down on her take a good look at her, then don't care about what others say, treat yourself well, and cultivate yourself well. I believe that gold always shines.
Moreover, although it is a good motivation and method to work hard to change yourself for other reasons, I still hope that it is because of herself that the heroine changes her inner temperament and truly breaks away from the spiritual level, which is really good.
Criticism: After reading the article, I think the settings are pretty good. However, from a reader's perspective, everyone always wants to torture less and torture others more. Before reading this chapter, most of them were about the heroine Shancai's life, which made me feel a little disappointed. We like a shiny way of life. Although I know that Da Da Da wants to reveal the truth of life through the heroine's constant setbacks, but after reading it, readers feel that it is so cruel and useless, and they really can't stand it.
The above are my little complaints and suggestions, which are incoherent. Please forgive me, thank you~~!
Yiyi, I like you so much! Hoho~~~~~~
I really like all the male protagonists in Yiyi! ! !
Decisive sofa. . .
I have a strong love for this article! Love! !
More. . . . . . . . .
I need new comfort!!!
I always feel that since the first, second and last paragraphs are all addressed as "you", and the middle paragraph also uses "you" instead of "him", it will feel better...
Rarely good article. Although I felt the ending was a bit too rushed. What I love most is the sense of history, so real and charming. Even the old songs from that time that I loved people too
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Comments on "How to Live Longevity" Please don't be surprised when Ali sees the unfamiliar name of Cold Sauce. It's not that hot sauce abandoned you, nor that she deliberately forgot. But Chijiang really likes your article so much that she can't think of anything else to give you except flowers. So, I hope that a hard-hearted guy like me will try to provide some objective opinions. Hot sauce's joy is very tenable, and I can find many reasons to support her. The writing is smooth, the words and sentences are carefully chosen (occasionally there are jumps, it doesn't hurt if you have time to revise later), the plot is advanced smoothly, the image of the white face is vividly portrayed, etc. What is particularly worthy of praise is that Ahri has properly grasped the essence of public case romance, with the public case at the front and the romance at the back. As the tense and exciting case progresses, tenderness slowly penetrates. Compared with rushing to unfold the theme of love, this kind of treatment makes the relationship more natural and valuable. Some people think this article is protracted, but I don't entirely think so. Many detective stories, even the most famous ones, are often not so straightforward at the beginning, and are filled with a lot of miscellaneous and seemingly insignificant explanations. But a clever author will gradually unravel the cocoon and pluck the thread later, allowing readers to understand the intention through thinking. Detective writing pays attention to the accumulation of details, leading readers to slowly discover the truth of the incident on their own. Just like doing math problems, readers can enjoy the fun of inquiry through thinking. It would be great if, in the end, the author could raise his flag a little higher and frighten the readers. It's just that such a structure is always difficult to achieve, and it requires very high requirements for writing, logic, and conception. If someone really does it all, then Bing Xin will probably set off firecrackers, and JJ will also have Higashino Keigo. :) It is obvious that Ahri is familiar with Kindaichi and is also familiar with Detective Conan. The outline is deeply influenced by Japanese mystery novels, and it follows the path of incredible and bizarre cases. From the modus operandi to the motive, everything is unexpected and beyond the reach of ordinary people. Where the power of immortality cannot be reached, the white-faced monster power is still needed to help. This kind of plot arrangement is very popular for children (hot sauce, please don't choose your own seats). At the end of the book, readers learn that the case is so weird. They always want to think that such a thing exists in the world, and they cannot help but applaud the author's imagination. However, looking back, many of the modus operandi can only exist in human imagination and cannot be implemented into actions. There are too many coincidences and accidents to withstand careful examination. For example, the first concubine case that Changsheng solved, the mechanism of hanging a cup from hair. I did a hair load-bearing test in junior high school physics. One hair can bear 1.5 N, and two cups should not be a problem. So, I tried it, but the result was not very satisfactory. It either slipped or broke, or the candle fell over due to uneven load-bearing. (It's really scary to have a serious reader like me.) Cases that are unlikely to occur in real life will have a much weaker impact on readers. Sometimes, I wonder, is it easier to write a series of short stories, or is it better to write a big, complete suspense? In fact, Lala Zaza said so much, it cannot be regarded as a commentary in the strict sense, but more like a discussion of reasoning articles. For Ahri, who is writing a mystery article for the first time, my requirements are a bit too high. I just feel that Ahri definitely still has a lot of potential to be tapped, and I always feel that you deserve a better story, so I just said everything I thought, and you can just take a look.
I took another look at it. When will there be an update? I'm still highly curious about Xiaoxiang and Xiaobao.
Hey, what's going on at the top of the Forbidden City?
Leave traces behind! Come on
Brother Zhiyuan. . . But the position is really not firm
Come on, I've finally achieved positive results, haha
Louda, you finally updated! ! ! Tears streaming down my face………
People cannot choose their birth or their past, but they can choose their future. For a strong person, strength is his business card; for a selfish person, selfishness is his motto. I like the heroine in it. Although she is in adversity, she never bows her head or admits defeat. But I still think the heroine is a bit too naive, and I hope she can be stronger. There is no one in the world that cannot survive without anyone. I think the heroine can completely leave here and start over in a brand new place, so that she can develop herself without any scruples. Going to other places is not to escape, but to give yourself a buffer time. When the heroine comes back with a new look in the future, appearing like a princess and queen, with a stable and proud career, that will surprise everyone. I like a saying I saw by Zeng Jin, which says that only by being worse than the bad guys can you protect yourself. I think this sentence makes sense. Sometimes, if you are kind, you will be rewarded. It is no longer popular to say that good deeds will be rewarded. The heroine wants to take revenge and develop a queen-like character. She still hopes to truly have such a consciousness and have such an environment. If you struggle like Shancai in the face of adversity, you will definitely be able to get what you want. After all, Shancai's luck is still in the minority in this world. The author might as well consider this suggestion to prevent the heroine from suffering such setbacks, as it feels like Cinderella. But Cinderella, even if she puts on a gorgeous dress, the magic can only be broken before twelve o'clock. Even if she was rescued by the prince, it would not change her past destiny and the lower-class temperament she cultivated. Because of rough work and rough hands, no matter how good a face you have, it is useless. Therefore, I think it is better to let the heroine understand the frustrations from the front, and then give her such an environment and cultivate her well later. I think so. Of course, this is just my personal suggestion, and it still needs to be written according to the big settings. When I was a child, I watched Meteor Garden and saw Shancai in it. I felt really envious. Although she was born badly, she still met her lover and got a lot of money. But when I grow up, I feel that even if Shancai can fall in love with her lover, can they really be together? Their values and concepts of life are always different. When there is love, it is time to accommodate each other, but how long can love last? When love is no longer there, what do they rely on to maintain this marriage. Therefore, if the heroine really wants to take revenge as mentioned above and let everyone who once looked down on her take a good look at her, then don't care about what others say, treat yourself well, and cultivate yourself well. I believe that gold always shines. Moreover, although it is a good motivation and method to work hard to change yourself for other reasons, I still hope that it is because of herself that the heroine changes her inner temperament and truly breaks away from the spiritual level, which is really good. Criticism: After reading the article, I think the settings are pretty good. However, from a reader's perspective, everyone always wants to torture less and torture others more. Before reading this chapter, most of them were about the heroine Shancai's life, which made me feel a little disappointed. We like a shiny way of life. Although I know that Da Da Da wants to reveal the truth of life through the heroine's constant setbacks, but after reading it, readers feel that it is so cruel and useless, and they really can't stand it. The above are my little complaints and suggestions, which are incoherent. Please forgive me, thank you~~!
Yiyi, I like you so much! Hoho~~~~~~ I really like all the male protagonists in Yiyi! ! !
Decisive sofa. . . I have a strong love for this article! Love! !
More. . . . . . . . .
I need new comfort!!!
I always feel that since the first, second and last paragraphs are all addressed as "you", and the middle paragraph also uses "you" instead of "him", it will feel better...
I feel more and more. Very nice! Come on~
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh beautiful
Dialogue chapter. . Don't know what to say. .
I'm very curious about how Xing'er got poisoned…