Cen Feng met Mo Yan and Peng Yuzhi when they were in junior high school. In their first year of high school, Mo Yan and Peng Yuzhi transferred to another high school to study. In their second year of high school, they transferred back to class five of high school with Nan Jiqing and met Cen Feng.
... After sitting together...
"Classmate Cen, please give me your advice."
... After confessing...
New classmates transfer in, love rivals add 1
Concept: Love is not limited to men and women, men and women can also be romantic
Reader comments
I didn't see many actions after reading it, and there were a lot of voice descriptions. The characters need actions and language to create their image. Maybe I looked too quickly and didn't know which one was male and which one was female. Introduction: Write down the name of the recipient, what kind of yin is the recipient?
Damn it, it's ugly. The whole story is like a blurb. It does require a lot of action descriptions and language descriptions to describe the characters, but there are too many dialogues between the characters and there are not many action descriptions. And there are so many names in the first chapter that you can't tell their gender. The introduction is so colloquial and it directly attacks and receives. I really don't understand it.
Is it too much to write a 100-word review for a mistake made in the second year of high school? [][]
Excuse me for the first time, and practice again.
Is this shit? It makes my stomach hurt from laughing.
I haven't gone to school or written a review. I suspect that half of my shoe size is above your age.
Can you first learn to use punctuation marks when breaking up a sentence? What is a 100-word review? [Applause] [Applause] That's awesome. Can you write the essay first and then write the novel? Use a bunch of them and then and then. This is not even at the composition level of a junior high school student. If you have a few fans on Douyin, you will feel that you can reach the sky in one step. You should first look at what you write.
I really think it's okay to study hard when you're young and not deal with these things all day long. Chapter 1 What are you writing about? What does it mean to throw a bunch of people here? Are these people useful or useless? Why don't you describe it in detail? It's useless. Why throw it out to disturb other people's vision? The first three chapters are all just a running account. I didn't see anything. Then someone suddenly confessed, as if they were trying to imitate a certain famous book. And the text is also very simple. It doesn't use any power to describe, but it wants to touch the readers' hearts.
Your article doesn't even have an outline. I write wherever I dream. I don't see any love or longing. Can the power of negative comments cover up the fact that your basic skills are not solid and your writing has no foundation? . Instead of struggling to write a thankless article, you might as well study hard and discuss these passions later.
Most high schools should have a 45-minute class, and the dialogue should also be connected with some words. You can't just write dialogue throughout the article.
Go to high school first and then write campus essays. If that doesn't work, I'll start with junior high school as the background. . .
Isn't this a big problem? When you first introduce yourself to the top three students in grade, couldn't you describe your appearance? Write about how beautiful and handsome you are. 💔When writing about a school bully, it is even more necessary to describe his appearance and demeanor to support his character. . 💔Originally, the school bully and so on were just shy. . Oh my God, the character of the school bully fell apart in the first chapter 😂 People are already the school bully and they still greet a new teacher? It shouldn't be a pushover. . What does "the school bully dare not do anything in front of the teacher, so he can only honestly say hello and say hello to the teacher, and then leave"? [Pink Heart][Caidog]
"High School" "One Hundred Word Review"
After 40 minutes, I got the answer. It was ugly [cracked].
The punctuation marks are not used correctly.
The teacher's writing is very good, but there are some typos. Remember to check it next time! When will you update? Want to see [lop-eared rabbit head]
You can pay attention to the layout, come on [Cat Claw]
I feel like I can lay some foreshadowings, and then I can practice my own writing style. It's a bit too popular and not very attractive.
Practice your writing more, it will become a little easier
Ah ah ah ah please keep writing, I feel happy after reading it, my whole family is waiting for your update [bad laugh]
My writing style needs to be improved, please use more punctuation marks, please work harder [Purple Sugar]
Big cheers for the author! It's much better after the change
Why are there so many people all of a sudden? I can't remember. Four were posted at first, and then two or three more. As I was reading, a paragraph of school rules came out. I really committed PTSD. Strengthen your writing. Use periods. Don't make typos.
There is really no need for a comment section. Everyone has their own passions. If you say bad words to a new person, are you holding back too much anger in your life? Pointing is not like this. Is what you write perfect from the beginning? Isn't this how you came? Once you make some progress, you start forgetting your roots and pretending to be a senior.
Every time I read a novel, I like to pay attention to the villain. Shen Fuzhou's inner drama is also very complicated. Help me, I'm so perverted haha
I didn't see many actions after reading it, and there were a lot of voice descriptions. The characters need actions and language to create their image. Maybe I looked too quickly and didn't know which one was male and which one was female. Introduction: Write down the name of the recipient, what kind of yin is the recipient?
Damn it, it's ugly. The whole story is like a blurb. It does require a lot of action descriptions and language descriptions to describe the characters, but there are too many dialogues between the characters and there are not many action descriptions. And there are so many names in the first chapter that you can't tell their gender. The introduction is so colloquial and it directly attacks and receives. I really don't understand it.
Is it too much to write a 100-word review for a mistake made in the second year of high school? [][]
Excuse me for the first time, and practice again.
Is this shit? It makes my stomach hurt from laughing.
I haven't gone to school or written a review. I suspect that half of my shoe size is above your age.
Can you first learn to use punctuation marks when breaking up a sentence? What is a 100-word review? [Applause] [Applause] That's awesome. Can you write the essay first and then write the novel? Use a bunch of them and then and then. This is not even at the composition level of a junior high school student. If you have a few fans on Douyin, you will feel that you can reach the sky in one step. You should first look at what you write.
I really think it's okay to study hard when you're young and not deal with these things all day long. Chapter 1 What are you writing about? What does it mean to throw a bunch of people here? Are these people useful or useless? Why don't you describe it in detail? It's useless. Why throw it out to disturb other people's vision? The first three chapters are all just a running account. I didn't see anything. Then someone suddenly confessed, as if they were trying to imitate a certain famous book. And the text is also very simple. It doesn't use any power to describe, but it wants to touch the readers' hearts. Your article doesn't even have an outline. I write wherever I dream. I don't see any love or longing. Can the power of negative comments cover up the fact that your basic skills are not solid and your writing has no foundation? . Instead of struggling to write a thankless article, you might as well study hard and discuss these passions later.
完结撒花完结撒花完结撒花 摩多摩多番外拜托了！ 。 超喜欢分支二的后日谈，所有人的命运被改变，小悟和乱步还是亲人TAT啊啊啊啊啊 “离开蓄谋已久，庆祝久别重逢”，明明正文后半段剧情加速细腻描写少了很多，我为什么还这么真情实意啊呜呜呜呜呜呜
Most high schools should have a 45-minute class, and the dialogue should also be connected with some words. You can't just write dialogue throughout the article.
Go to high school first and then write campus essays. If that doesn't work, I'll start with junior high school as the background. . .
Isn't this a big problem? When you first introduce yourself to the top three students in grade, couldn't you describe your appearance? Write about how beautiful and handsome you are. 💔When writing about a school bully, it is even more necessary to describe his appearance and demeanor to support his character. . 💔Originally, the school bully and so on were just shy. . Oh my God, the character of the school bully fell apart in the first chapter 😂 People are already the school bully and they still greet a new teacher? It shouldn't be a pushover. . What does "the school bully dare not do anything in front of the teacher, so he can only honestly say hello and say hello to the teacher, and then leave"? [Pink Heart][Caidog]
"High School" "One Hundred Word Review"
After 40 minutes, I got the answer. It was ugly [cracked].
The punctuation marks are not used correctly.
The teacher's writing is very good, but there are some typos. Remember to check it next time! When will you update? Want to see [lop-eared rabbit head]
You can pay attention to the layout, come on [Cat Claw]
I feel like I can lay some foreshadowings, and then I can practice my own writing style. It's a bit too popular and not very attractive.
Practice your writing more, it will become a little easier
Ah ah ah ah please keep writing, I feel happy after reading it, my whole family is waiting for your update [bad laugh]
My writing style needs to be improved, please use more punctuation marks, please work harder [Purple Sugar]
Big cheers for the author! It's much better after the change
Why are there so many people all of a sudden? I can't remember. Four were posted at first, and then two or three more. As I was reading, a paragraph of school rules came out. I really committed PTSD. Strengthen your writing. Use periods. Don't make typos.
There is really no need for a comment section. Everyone has their own passions. If you say bad words to a new person, are you holding back too much anger in your life? Pointing is not like this. Is what you write perfect from the beginning? Isn't this how you came? Once you make some progress, you start forgetting your roots and pretending to be a senior.
Every time I read a novel, I like to pay attention to the villain. Shen Fuzhou's inner drama is also very complicated. Help me, I'm so perverted haha