2026.6.20 Modification of copywriting
Some readers are asking about the club, so write here:
Brescia—AC Milan—Chelsea
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Delan Beretta has always felt that he was just an ordinary player with a bit of ordinary talent, playing in an ordinary club, and later playing in an ordinary national team.
He kept kicking and kicking until one day the coach pointed at the Hercules Cup in the distance and asked him to win it.
Ah? Me?
Later, he didn't expect that he would save Italy and the club again and again, win many trophies, become a legend, and be called the new football emperor.
And Delan looked at the Internet in confusion: Strange, I just played football honestly, when did I get the yellow robe?
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Media before the game: Italy's stars are dim this year, and the most famous one is their coach
Media after the game: It doesn't matter if it's dim, after all they have found a new sun!
Fans before the game: This year they spent a lot of money to buy a center again. The club knew it was going to be doomed just by looking at the lineup. When is the most promising year?
Fans after the game; this year is the most promising year! Although we only have one attacker, you are all surrounded by us! It has been said that the center can save the team!
Description:
It's a purely refreshing story, Delan will grow up little by little, there will be plots of losing, and in the end Delan will win many, many championships.
Starting with the Brescia youth training and the Italian national team, the article will be relatively slow.
Hope to write an interesting story.
Purpose: Overcome difficulties and strive to grow
Reader comments
Yes, the news about Martin Jr. This week is what saddens me the most. The person who has been with us through so many difficult years has to say goodbye after receiving the honor. The ability of the uniform team is not worthy of our good locker room. Our factory salesperson always respects the players' wishes, but this time they have to ask the head coach to persuade the players' wishes "with emotion and reason". Berta did this very emotionally. I'm still upset that Martin left than Zaka did not renew his contract. Finally, I wish him a big contract and earn high wages for a few years, maintain good condition and return to the five major leagues. I wish him happiness in playing football away from injuries.
I've almost finished reading it, so here's a few comments. It's my personal opinion, very subjective.
The world that I don't have the best impression of is "Yiko's World", maybe because the plot is rather erratic and feels incomplete; the best one is "The Good Marriage", although I don't understand who the good match is, but in this world Xie Yi is too bad and cute, which is very lovable.
Reading the whole book is like reading a complete outline, which is a bit dry. The author could consider adding more words to improve the plot, or add some additional descriptions, such as the protagonist's appearance/surrounding environment/world view/psychological changes, such as showing the identity gap/position/temperament through the differences in the characters' clothes.
Next is the wish-making session. I hope the author will be a little bit interested in cultivating immortals/western fantasy/abo/military academy/orcs/supernatural/zerg (not a special offer), such as the God of Light and Darkness in Western Fantasy, the sneaky and scary little ghosts in supernatural, etc. Also, in this chapter, the author mentioned the system's status as an assistant, and whether there is the possibility of re-employment after being laid off by the system in the next city. The Ming Sao system, which can only talk about pleasure, and the JJ ascetic style will feel very harmonious.
[Purple sugar]kswl[Purple sugar]kswl
We Italians are very fashionable🤌
Oh my god, a flash of inspiration, super giant
I really like this article. My wife's writing is very good, but it made me cry. It's really great that the two of them got together in the end.
Poor, warm and funny Brescia
Ha? ! What happened? It's over.
It's so funny. There are all kinds of accomplices, but the main culprit is only 2 out of 10,000.
Violet Lily once again ushered in the sun and the moon [Lop-eared Rabbit Head] It's a pity that we didn't win the game [covering face and laughing and crying]
Purple Lily, Sun and Moon hugged each other tightly when they met, and they were in sweet love again [Glasses]
Come on!
Bottles of nutrient solution inject full vitality!
Good-looking, really good-looking!
Snort! ! Look, since you work so hard to update, I'll give you more nutrient solution! Yes, come on! ! !
[Please] Hart is soft
I met a close friend in the mountains and rivers [dog head]
Has it been updated today? More. Is the nutrient solution watered? Watered.
"Now... The third Mizukage..." This is a big bug for the author~ It should be the fourth Mizukage.
This is your nutritional solution, take it now~
Ask me how deeply I love you, the nutrient solution represents my heart~
Finish spreading flowers
Boss, boss, your writing is very good. Can you update it?
A thousand words can't express my feelings, I can only try my best to water you with nutrient solution. You can feel my endless affection!
Scatter flowers
A thousand words can't express my feelings, I can only try my best to water you with nutrient solution. You can feel my endless affection!
If Zhang Juan cleans up now, will it be difficult to obtain evidence of the crimes of those people? I hope that none of their crimes will be missed.
Has it been updated today? More. Is the nutrient solution watered? Watered.
Yes, the news about Martin Jr. This week is what saddens me the most. The person who has been with us through so many difficult years has to say goodbye after receiving the honor. The ability of the uniform team is not worthy of our good locker room. Our factory salesperson always respects the players' wishes, but this time they have to ask the head coach to persuade the players' wishes "with emotion and reason". Berta did this very emotionally. I'm still upset that Martin left than Zaka did not renew his contract. Finally, I wish him a big contract and earn high wages for a few years, maintain good condition and return to the five major leagues. I wish him happiness in playing football away from injuries.
I've almost finished reading it, so here's a few comments. It's my personal opinion, very subjective. The world that I don't have the best impression of is "Yiko's World", maybe because the plot is rather erratic and feels incomplete; the best one is "The Good Marriage", although I don't understand who the good match is, but in this world Xie Yi is too bad and cute, which is very lovable. Reading the whole book is like reading a complete outline, which is a bit dry. The author could consider adding more words to improve the plot, or add some additional descriptions, such as the protagonist's appearance/surrounding environment/world view/psychological changes, such as showing the identity gap/position/temperament through the differences in the characters' clothes. Next is the wish-making session. I hope the author will be a little bit interested in cultivating immortals/western fantasy/abo/military academy/orcs/supernatural/zerg (not a special offer), such as the God of Light and Darkness in Western Fantasy, the sneaky and scary little ghosts in supernatural, etc. Also, in this chapter, the author mentioned the system's status as an assistant, and whether there is the possibility of re-employment after being laid off by the system in the next city. The Ming Sao system, which can only talk about pleasure, and the JJ ascetic style will feel very harmonious.
[Purple sugar]kswl[Purple sugar]kswl
We Italians are very fashionable🤌
Oh my god, a flash of inspiration, super giant
I really like this article. My wife's writing is very good, but it made me cry. It's really great that the two of them got together in the end.
Poor, warm and funny Brescia
Ha? ! What happened? It's over.
It's so funny. There are all kinds of accomplices, but the main culprit is only 2 out of 10,000.
Violet Lily once again ushered in the sun and the moon [Lop-eared Rabbit Head] It's a pity that we didn't win the game [covering face and laughing and crying]
Purple Lily, Sun and Moon hugged each other tightly when they met, and they were in sweet love again [Glasses]
Come on!
Bottles of nutrient solution inject full vitality!
Good-looking, really good-looking!
Snort! ! Look, since you work so hard to update, I'll give you more nutrient solution! Yes, come on! ! !
[Please] Hart is soft
I met a close friend in the mountains and rivers [dog head]
Has it been updated today? More. Is the nutrient solution watered? Watered.
"Now... The third Mizukage..." This is a big bug for the author~ It should be the fourth Mizukage.
This is your nutritional solution, take it now~
Ask me how deeply I love you, the nutrient solution represents my heart~
Finish spreading flowers
Boss, boss, your writing is very good. Can you update it?
A thousand words can't express my feelings, I can only try my best to water you with nutrient solution. You can feel my endless affection!
Scatter flowers
A thousand words can't express my feelings, I can only try my best to water you with nutrient solution. You can feel my endless affection!
If Zhang Juan cleans up now, will it be difficult to obtain evidence of the crimes of those people? I hope that none of their crimes will be missed.
Has it been updated today? More. Is the nutrient solution watered? Watered.
Finished with flowers~~
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