Please give me your advice on this first novel! (´▽｀)
Introduction:
On an ordinary night, Jian Jinmu, a talented hacker boy, stared at a small keyboard pendant given by his sister who came and went in a hurry and fell into endless contemplation...
Later he discovered that was the last time he saw his sister, and 72 hours after her sister disappeared, he was sucked into a place full of electronic data by his computer.
Jian Jinmu: I don't know? It's quite sudden.(−_−#)
People in the electronic world wear various costumes of characters in the game, most of them with tired faces. They pray in front of the world screen that their dungeons will be simpler, that they can clear ten game dungeons as soon as possible and then go home.
Jian Jinmu: Ten levels? I am good at playing computer games! Let me taste the salty ψ(｀∇´)ψ
The random crispy mage (hacker) at the beginning, after a long game process, was about to win. Jian Jinmu, who was sneak attacked by his teammates, died instantly, and then suddenly stood up again three seconds later.
Ling·Another teammate·Sees the whole process of resurrection·Prologue:! ! ! It's haunted! ! !
Jian Jinmu (pseudo): Your life is over! ! !
Later, Jian Jinmu discovered that his missing sister seemed to possess him every time he lost consciousness but never appeared alone. Every one of his teammates changed their past and started over. The electronic core (incomplete) secretly sought power and usurped the throne...
Jian Jinmu: This world has turned into something I didn't expect (◐‿◑)
Jane · Sunshine Hacker · Today · Genius Boy · Mu & Ling · Cold on the outside and dumb on the inside · Electronic core (incomplete) · Preface
Intention: positive energy. Trapped Players in a video game are all pawns, and data is trapped in a cage. One person, a small team and one data will work together to overcome the level, overthrow the world domination, and break away from the destiny.