After Failing to Pretend to Be a Passerby in the World of Kexue

此刻夜深人静，记录我灰色的心情pades 《蕾拉的噩梦》这本，看的人闷闷的，不开心。 有几个问题想和自己讨论一下 首先是全文结尾 看的我久久发愣，恍然大悟之后，心钝钝的痛，一瞬间万语千言涌上脑海，不断翻腾，乱七八糟，默默的翻看评论寻找共鸣，然后怔怔的发了一会呆。 蕾拉是穿越的，她来自21世纪，这个时代虽然有不少缺点，但对比之前，已经很不错了，起码大部人都能安全的生活，大部分家庭都有爱。 突然从这样的地方来到一个书中的魔法世界，伏地魔大势，外面充满死亡的威胁，而在家里，蕾拉来到的是一个食死徒家庭，父母哥哥只把她当工具，她渴求过爱，但得不到一丝一毫，于是她渴求自由，费力周旋，把自己都算计进去，终于好不容易得到了看似幸福的生活。 有两个爱她的孩子，有钱，漂亮，也结了婚，周围无论谁看到都会感慨她现在的幸福生活。但是，她是穿越的啊，在这个世界，她历经种种，努力得到现在的生活，真的比得上她前世本来就拥有的吗？真的是她想要的吗？ 试想一下，你生活在一个和平安全的世界，周围有相爱的家人朋友，突然来到一个充满死亡威胁，没有任何爱意的，虚拟的陌生的魔法世界，即使最后达成了你的目标，完成了你的筹划，你会觉得幸福吗？不，这仍旧是一个噩梦。 评论区有一位朋友说的很好，她说她大学军训，一天的军训结束时，洗完澡吃完饭，安逸歇息，她觉得这时很幸福，但她知道这不是真正的幸福，明早起来仍旧是噩梦。 都说蕾拉是典型的斯莱特林，攻于心计，是能将父母哥哥送去死的恶女。但是蕾拉她不想长成这样，她就想当一个阳光快乐的女孩，像莫丽一样，她想有一个有爱的家。但是那样的生存环境，迫使她掘弃这些想法，一边害怕一边逼迫自己长成一条毒蛇。 即使到最后，有了爱她的孩子，有了安全的环境，有了自由，但那又怎样？突然来到陌生的环境，失去以前的一切，有过希望，又一次次失望，在害怕痛苦中逼着自己向前，背离曾经所有的想法，一直孤立无援，清醒的看着自己变成另外一个样子，天，这就是一场可怕的噩梦，或许，这真的能不能只是一场噩梦。太恐怖了，光是想想就感觉绝望了。 再来讨论第二个问题——感情线，蕾拉和西弗勒斯的感情线，我先表态，我觉得他俩最后走到一起，之间有爱，但应该只有一点点，同时蕾拉的爱要多一点点。 他俩的感情更像是疲惫的人需要栖息的地方，而两个人刚好合适，所以就一块过了。但不可否认，他们于对方都是特殊的，这里我挺同意评论区一位朋友的观点，爱情不只有一种模样，当那个人对你来说是特殊的，不可替代的，你们能长久相伴，这其实也够了。 关于蕾拉对西弗，肯定有爱，但是她害怕她警戒，尤其是西弗对她那样的态度，她不能也不敢把自己全交出去。 至于西弗对蕾拉，年轻的时候可能有一瞬会为贵族小姐的示好沾沾自喜，但又时刻提醒自己这不过是贵族小姐的把戏。他自卑，并一直对蕾拉抱有很强的偏见，他就觉得蕾拉是个满腹算计的黑心女人。所以他厌恶蕾拉，但厌恶之下可能也藏着来自年少时就有的，参杂着炫耀和沾沾自喜的心动，毕竟蕾拉是个漂亮的贵族小姐。但这一点点喜欢，在斯内普那里是完全不够看的。 直到知道孩子是自己的，对孩子的责任和爱护拉进了他们的关系，但依旧进展缓慢，但他们之间已经出现了类似家人的纽带。接着，斯内普在推测蕾拉的遭遇时产生了怜惜，他对她的态度缓和了很多。一部分偏见被怜惜压倒，一点点心动浮现出来，家人的纽带越来越粗，危机解除之后的疲惫之下，他们好累，所以他们走到了一起，给彼此一个家。 但是他们之间依旧充满了谎言和偏见，斯内普的怜惜大多来自他的推测，而他不会问，蕾拉也不会说。斯内普的思想依旧禁锢在当时男女地位不平等的观念中，蕾拉在贺卡上把名字写在他前面也会生气。斯内普依旧喜欢戳人痛处，踩人痛脚，依旧对蕾拉抱有很大的偏见，他不相信蕾拉是真的想做一个简单快乐的人，他只觉得这是黑暗女巫的新装扮。 而面对这样的斯内普，蕾拉也不会坦白她的过往，她小心的保全自己的心，时刻堤防着不落下风，面对一些误解即使解释也不会被相信，她真的很累了，就先这样把这个噩梦做完吧，总有一天会醒来的。

I still admire the author. I have written nearly 100,000 words on this incident and I haven't finished it yet, but I don't have the patience to read any more. People's speculations and speculations took up a lot of space, which made me very upset (I didn't know it was called Dihua before, but now I know). Maybe I am not the audience for this type of novel. [Hold fist][Hold fist]

Great, I saw the extremely correct usage of double quotes...!

Many chapters have passed, and the protagonist seems to be invisible, with no sense of existence at all, and only appears in the last few paragraphs. The whole text is full of various interpretations of the protagonist, and speculations about the protagonist from various forces, but there is very little content about the protagonist himself. The author is always writing about other people's feelings and thoughts. After a few chapters, there is only a little bit of plot from the protagonist's perspective. One thing is described repeatedly from each character's perspective, but there is not much description of the protagonist himself. I have been waiting for the performance of the protagonist, but I can't see it chapter after chapter. It makes people feel frustrated. What about the highlights of the protagonist? Are these foreshadowing descriptions so important? It gives people a feeling that the number of words is too low.

The plot is procrastinating and the transitions are abrupt. Every highlight moment is transitioned to an insignificant place. It's a waste of money. It's neither good nor good. Please change the timing of transitions. There's also too little plot about the protagonist.

It feels like hydrology through various perspectives...

I hope there will be more plot in Qianli and the protagonist will be more angry [crying]

It turns out that this is what it looks like on the zero-zero perspective rooftop. At first, I simply understood it as zero misunderstanding of Akai and Jingguang. Later, I interpreted it as Touko's anger towards everyone on the rooftop, plus some national complex between the United States and Japan. From the perspective of my wife's writing, there is also some moral kidnapping (not in a derogatory sense) of "you are right there, why don't you do something". That shot from the rooftop broke the hearts of three people...

Big! Short! Hungry [crying] [crying]

It's really a magical world of famous detectives.

Qianli, I'm sure I'll be eaten by Akai.

I hope to add more next time, a big fat seal can also be used [empty bowl] [empty bowl] [empty bowl]

It was indeed mentioned in the original work, but I forgot which part, that Akai entered the organization with the help of his sister, but the anime version changed a lot of content because of the child supply.

Ah, this article is too long

Will Qianli regain his memory? [Question mark][let me be healthy]

The deceased seemed to have committed suicide at that time.

Additional update Regarding the issue of whether to add more updates in the next few days, please collect your opinions below in this comment. It is expected that an additional chapter will be added at 9 o'clock tomorrow morning. If everyone clearly expresses their desire to see the next plot as soon as possible, we will continue to add [Dog's Head Holding a Rose] in the next few days. However, whether to add it just this time or add it several times depends on everyone's feedback [Hold your thighs] I hope to get a lot of feedback from everyone!