Harry Potter had a red-haired sister who became the first witch of the Dursley family.
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After entering Hogwarts, I met a rebellious teenage roommate, a teammate who went crazy playing Quidditch, twins who made pranks a career, a melancholic and good girl classmate, and a professor who said weird things to me...
The Riddler, the white-bearded principal, smiled and told me that love is the greatest magic; the dark potions professor always stared at me with a sinister look on his face during class.
After my savior brother entered school, strange things happened around us one after another.
Help, there is indeed something wrong with the Magical Story of My Youth
Demining:
1. Mary Sue, the protagonist is a gifted wizard, an atypical Gryffindor, has moral flaws, and has a different attitude towards her family and other people.
2. Family and friendship are very popular. There is no formal love relationship in the text because the protagonist's personality tends to be ambiguous. There are other original female characters
3. The protagonist is a senior and participates in the original main plot in a different way. The story line and emotional line will be offset due to the protagonist.
4. A long mixed generation. The middle generation is mainly about the Evans sisters, who have been teachers and students for generations, and finally return to the children's generation to dominate the family line of Harry and the Dursley family.
5. The protagonist is the daughter of the Dursley family. She has a close affection for the Dursley family. Harry's childhood is also different from the original work, so his personality is different.
6. Mixed perspectives and narrative techniques. Mainly the third perspective but will switch to the main perspective
What would Petunia think if she found out that her favorite daughter was a witch? How would the story develop if Harry had a doting sister who stayed with him from the Dursleys to Hogwarts? This work was created with this kind of thinking.
In order to facilitate the development of the plot, the story begins when Harry enters school and the protagonist is in third grade. There is an information gap between the protagonist and the reader in the early stage, which will be completed as soon as possible through extra chapters and interludes.
Concept: Love is the greatest magic
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