Finished short story in one post
A cold and intelligent girl in front of others and a cute and cute girl in front of others and a mature and evil man
The writing is a bit confusing.
Intention: There is no need to be grand, it will have its own perfection.
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Finally, a female baby is pampered [crying]
Sister Yunyun is kissed by me, why is she so cute [biting handkerchief] Such a baby should be pampered and pampered
"'Liar!' I pulled open the blindfold and screamed subconsciously." The language and action descriptions describe the new emperor's shock at Fu's death, and the new emperor's concern for Fu. Although he knew that Chang Xun was unlikely to lie, he still didn't want to believe it.
"The garden that was bustling just now became quiet, terrifyingly quiet." Comparing it with the busy garden just now, it highlights the sudden and rapid silence in the garden, creating an atmosphere of suppressed sadness.
"People die so quickly." Through psychological description, it shows the loneliness and sadness in the heart of the new emperor, and reflects the fragility of life.
"I haven't spoken to her yet. I haven't said it yet -" The psychological description once again adds a touch of pathos/color to this tragedy.
"In a moment, words that can be said and things that cannot be said are indulged, struggled, and reappeared repeatedly in the mind, becoming a mess." It shows the complexity of the new emperor's mind and mood, exaggerating a sad and depressing atmosphere.
"Flowers fall, butterflies fly. The sound of cicadas comes with the wind, flowing and spreading in the green flowers." Flowers fall, butterflies fly, cicadas sing, green flowers and colors, from near to far, static and dynamic blend, auditory and visual blend. It is a very beautiful and peaceful scene, which is in sharp contrast with the sadness in the heart of the new emperor, making the sad silence of the new emperor more powerful.
"Step by step, the lights on the corridor bring out deep and shallow shadows on my side. I am alone, thin, helpless and helpless." Actions and psychological descriptions, as well as scenes, blend to describe the new emperor's loneliness, powerlessness, loneliness and sadness at this moment. It shows that the new emperor's body is thin, which foreshadows the following.
"His hug became a little tighter, but his voice was gentle and restrained." It describes General Dou's closeness and cherishment of the new emperor. Only in front of the new emperor would he be so gentle.
"'These two are Weichen's disciples, Dou Suiyuan and Dou Suiying. They have just accepted the imperial appointment. In the next few days, Weichen will not be in the palace, so they will guard the palace.'" The identities of the two new characters were introduced, indicating one of General Dou's intentions, and paving the way for what follows.
"The sound of water dripping is not the sound of rain, nor is it leaking." It is suggested to be the sound of falling blood, which creates a depressing and weird atmosphere.
Take a look at the articles written by me, a young author.
Finally, a female baby is pampered [crying]
Sister Yunyun is kissed by me, why is she so cute [biting handkerchief] Such a baby should be pampered and pampered
"'Liar!' I pulled open the blindfold and screamed subconsciously." The language and action descriptions describe the new emperor's shock at Fu's death, and the new emperor's concern for Fu. Although he knew that Chang Xun was unlikely to lie, he still didn't want to believe it. "The garden that was bustling just now became quiet, terrifyingly quiet." Comparing it with the busy garden just now, it highlights the sudden and rapid silence in the garden, creating an atmosphere of suppressed sadness. "People die so quickly." Through psychological description, it shows the loneliness and sadness in the heart of the new emperor, and reflects the fragility of life. "I haven't spoken to her yet. I haven't said it yet -" The psychological description once again adds a touch of pathos/color to this tragedy. "In a moment, words that can be said and things that cannot be said are indulged, struggled, and reappeared repeatedly in the mind, becoming a mess." It shows the complexity of the new emperor's mind and mood, exaggerating a sad and depressing atmosphere. "Flowers fall, butterflies fly. The sound of cicadas comes with the wind, flowing and spreading in the green flowers." Flowers fall, butterflies fly, cicadas sing, green flowers and colors, from near to far, static and dynamic blend, auditory and visual blend. It is a very beautiful and peaceful scene, which is in sharp contrast with the sadness in the heart of the new emperor, making the sad silence of the new emperor more powerful. "Step by step, the lights on the corridor bring out deep and shallow shadows on my side. I am alone, thin, helpless and helpless." Actions and psychological descriptions, as well as scenes, blend to describe the new emperor's loneliness, powerlessness, loneliness and sadness at this moment. It shows that the new emperor's body is thin, which foreshadows the following. "His hug became a little tighter, but his voice was gentle and restrained." It describes General Dou's closeness and cherishment of the new emperor. Only in front of the new emperor would he be so gentle. "'These two are Weichen's disciples, Dou Suiyuan and Dou Suiying. They have just accepted the imperial appointment. In the next few days, Weichen will not be in the palace, so they will guard the palace.'" The identities of the two new characters were introduced, indicating one of General Dou's intentions, and paving the way for what follows. "The sound of water dripping is not the sound of rain, nor is it leaking." It is suggested to be the sound of falling blood, which creates a depressing and weird atmosphere.
Take a look at the articles written by me, a young author.