This article is also called: Time Traveler Playing System: Save That Man!
The timid old man who loves to cry is once bound to the performance system.
The first stop: the male protagonist of the starting point of breaking off the engagement
Social fear of the heroine × breakup of the engagement broke up the hero, the owner of the Ten Thousand Devils Pit was forced to stick to redemption
Second stop: The gloomy male protagonist reborn in the apocalypse
Plant-based healing heroine
The third stop: The Western Fantasy God, the male protagonist who is drunk in life and dreams of death.
(Not sure if I can write it)
Fourth stop:…
After completing the mission and returning to your hometown, get the money and live a good life.
Demining: 1. Describe the slow heat! The plot progresses slowly! The body progresses relatively quickly! ——The progress of the body is greater than the progress of the mind! The plot is very slow! Young couples interact more!
2. It may not be a double knot! Probably not He!
3. The character is not perfect.
4. The essence may be a love cookie, but a different kind of love cookie? The male and female protagonists of the first stop are both very young children, and the female protagonist is really, really timid. Some of the descriptions in the first two chapters are very repetitive, and the full text is probably very rough. It is a nonsensical and white text. Some of my descriptions are very detailed, which will cause the rhythm to be a bit slow.
5. I don't guarantee what surprises readers may have before it's finished.
6. I feel like my article portrays the male protagonist more.
7. Because this writer likes to revise and revise articles, I am even slower at coding the number of words.
But if I, as a writer, delay revising the article, it may be slower, but if I revise it and then revise it, it will be even slower.
And I like to write and revise, so before I finish it, I may make major or minor changes.
If I find that I have written two chapters, but I feel very uncomfortable in these two chapters,
I feel that there are rhythm problems or some other problem, so I will make a modification to these two pictures. This modification may be a relatively large change, or it may be a relatively small change.
Small tips: Updates vary. I hope it will be updated every two days or three days (most likely the number of pigeons is 1k). If it is updated once a week (the number of pigeons that eat more is 2k), Slow Planet written by Slow Star (PS this article is particularly slow)
2026.4.19 Sunday 15:19
Concept: Love is the most incurable poison