A sour text, old age, secret love
A shoddy short article, with one-to-three person switches.
You can point out any issues other than the writing, but don't get too hung up on the minutiae.
It's a bit cumbersome for me to write the first-person version of Pamojiji, but I feel that this is closer to real people.
Don't criticize the characters and don't criticize the author.
I just wanted to write down the story of these two people that came to my mind
Then tell it to you.
Intention: Oh oh