Demining: 1. Be 2. Slow emotional line 3. Just random writing, write what you dreamed of, logic cannot withstand scrutiny 4. Possibly OOC 5. Primary school student writing style 6. Everyone has their own preferences for radishes and vegetables, don't criticize if you don't like them
Text:
Severus met her for the first time in 1967 at Flourish and Blotts Bookstore.
In 1970, they were sorted into Slytherin at Hogwarts.
In 1977 at Yaxley Manor, Severus lost her forever.
Severus saw her again in The Screaming Shack in 1998, but it was also the last time.
He would never see her again.
Copywriting one:
"If you don't teach me how to make potions, I will tell Lily about the last time you bullied Mary," Ellon said casually, playing with his hair.
"..." Snape knew that she was not well-meaning. The eldest daughter of the Yaxley family liked to stab others gently. He had known that for a long time. Damn it!
"You'd better hope your stupidity doesn't waste my time," Snape said viciously.
"Would you say that to Lily?" Ellon walked past Snape with a smile.
"..." She really should sew her mouth shut, Snape was furious.
Copywriting two:
"What do you smell?"
Ellon came closer and smelled the love potion. They all smelled it, but she didn't. What was wrong?
"….. No"
Elon's hair was close to his cheek, and he could even feel her breath hitting his neck. Elon was too close to him, but she kept moving forward. Snape felt that he was excited because of Elon's approach, but his heartbeat was getting faster and faster. He was nervous and could only stay away from Elon.
He smelled something, he smelled Ellon.
A taste unique to Ellon.
Intention: Self-reliance and bravery