A freshman's nagging after his father's death.
This article is fortunate to receive private comments from my mentor.
He said that the writing was okay, but some parts could be further revised, and the style was quite special. He called it an "emotional novel", but I will brag about it and call it "Zi Jin" style.
This is what I think about whether to revise or not: the original intention of this article is to recall my father in daily life. Although it is not perfect, the emotions are pure. As for modifications, let's see in a few years when I can really face my father's death calmly and no longer be afraid of an empty home!
Recollective prose.
Intention: Cherish family ties. Don't let it become a reality that "the tree wants to be quiet but the wind doesn't stop, the child wants to be raised but the family doesn't wait" becomes a reality.