& He is now very proud.
& He now has a successful career.
& It is said that a beautiful couple like flowers cannot withstand the passage of time, but after seeing each other again, years have passed, but he still seems to be the same as before.
& Mo Ran knows that she will never be invincible. Memories are for remembrance, and the boy who remembers Li Erya smiles and greets her across time.
&... Mo Ran. Go forward. Don't look back.
& It was such a very quiet moment, as if in the rushing time, the murmuring sounds were infinitely amplified.
& Su Rongkang lit a cigarette and said, let's get married. His expression was blurred in the lingering smoke.
& He remembered that he opened the book a long time ago, and the writing on the bookmark that fell down was blurry and hard.
& ——From beginning to end, keep your heart in mind. Gather your sleeves and return, I hope you will go well.
***Solemn promise: A small amount of abuse will make you happy, but a big abuse will hurt your body. We will definitely implement [HE]...***
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I saw the author's update and couldn't help but read it. I found some problems and wanted to talk to you. First of all, Corpse Party felt very confusing to me. Maybe it's because I haven't read the original work. In the second chapter, I jumped directly to the point where the protagonist enters the world. I've seen the movie "Li Gui Jiangying". It's a Thai ghost movie that was well shot. However, I felt that the description of a little girl hiding in a cupboard and about to be discovered by Fuso made me feel uncomfortable. It's a bit weak, "She noticed something was wrong again", this description makes Fuso's IQ a bit low. Either she felt that there must be something wrong with the cabinet or she intuitively felt that the person was still in this room, otherwise she found out that the little girl's luck was low based on the feeling that something was wrong. Fuso is a big boss and cannot have such a convenient golden finger as the protagonist's halo. Finally, the overall writing style feels a bit verbose. The author can write an outline. The main line must revolve around the protagonist's skull, and other sub-lines must be added bit by bit. In this way, the written article will probably have a sense of rhythm and will not make other readers who have not read the original work feel confused.
Okay, the above are my personal opinions. I hope it can be helpful to the author. In any case, the copywriting settings are great.
I saw the author's update and couldn't help but read it. I found some problems and wanted to talk to you. First of all, Corpse Party felt very confusing to me. Maybe it's because I haven't read the original work. In the second chapter, I jumped directly to the point where the protagonist enters the world. I've seen the movie "Li Gui Jiangying". It's a Thai ghost movie that was well shot. However, I felt that the description of a little girl hiding in a cupboard and about to be discovered by Fuso made me feel uncomfortable. It's a bit weak, "She noticed something was wrong again", this description makes Fuso's IQ a bit low. Either she felt that there must be something wrong with the cabinet or she intuitively felt that the person was still in this room, otherwise she found out that the little girl's luck was low based on the feeling that something was wrong. Fuso is a big boss and cannot have such a convenient golden finger as the protagonist's halo. Finally, the overall writing style feels a bit verbose. The author can write an outline. The main line must revolve around the protagonist's skull, and other sub-lines must be added bit by bit. In this way, the written article will probably have a sense of rhythm and will not make other readers who have not read the original work feel confused. Okay, the above are my personal opinions. I hope it can be helpful to the author. In any case, the copywriting settings are great.