The new article "Killing the Yue Ming Dynasty" is in advance (the copy is at the bottom)
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[Female-centered growth × logical reasoning × unit investigation | sincere heart warms the jade stone]
One night in midsummer, a floating corpse was discovered in Qiwu Academy.
The county lieutenant who was dawdling about wanted to settle the matter hastily, but unexpectedly, Cheng Yaojin came out halfway and insisted on the case: Why did a man who was good at water drown in the water? How did the deceased pass through the insurmountable high wall after the door was locked and was killed outside the wall?
"Cheng Yaojin" seemed to be entangled in this case out of justice. Only he knew that half of his thoughts fell on his classmate who seemed gentle and calm.
However, the classmate seemed to have no concern for the case. He only said three distant but polite words to the troubled young man who tried every means to get her involved in the case: "I don't know."
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Because of a case of floating corpses, Lin Qo left the place where he grew up and embarked on an unknown road ahead.
The road ahead in this world is full of mixed emotions, people's hearts are weak, and murders occur frequently.
On a rainy night in the wilderness, some tourists died in the wild; the house is deep, and the flowers are blooming to lock the soul...
Traveling hundreds of miles from Daizhou to Meizhou, she saw hatred for the living and heard the injustice of the dead, and all she wanted was justice.
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Copywriting of "Killing the Yue Ming Dynasty":
Since the Wujiao was annihilated, the world has been peaceful for many years. Until the burial objects of the deceased wife of the heroic hero Mang King were stolen at Mangkou Pass, the long-dormant rivers and lakes suddenly stirred up a storm. All forces heard the news and gathered at Mangkou Pass, seeming to want to use the lost burial objects to make a big deal.
But suddenly a smiling girl appeared out of nowhere, claiming to know the whereabouts of the priceless funerary objects.
——No, the plan has changed.
All the forces were frightened at first: It is said that this little-known girl from the mountains has a pair of eyes that can see through all lies, and she does bad things wherever she goes;
Then I made up my mind: I also heard that this desperate poor ranger had caused a lot of trouble, and people were lining up to kill her. It seems like it's not their turn to worry...
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Yue Mingchao had been wandering leisurely in the arena for less than a year, and suddenly he realized that he had incurred a murder debt.
The evil boss wants to kill her, and the righteous boss also wants to kill her. When... When did she become so annoying?
Yue Mingchao didn't know, so he looked behind him and didn't bother to think about it. Riding a horse with a sword hanging, he maintained a steady cheerfulness and headed towards another fatal trouble with a smile.
Anyway, she has a good attitude, and there is a good person behind her who is silently helping her to clear up the trouble.
For things like Zenio, of course you have to invite your teammates.
Teammate?
The cold and handsome young man in white raised his eyebrows slightly, and looked at her with a look that was even lighter than the cold white hair in his hand. He raised the corner of his mouth with a smile, and said two words in an understatement, "Not familiar with it."
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When Ye Feixing was fifteen years old, he was already a famous young knight in the world. He had lived for nineteen years without any worries. However, this year, he was entrusted by someone to help a person clear out his troubles.
That day, he saw that the woman had just escaped from a trouble and tossed up a cinnamon candy. The amber-like cinnamon candy reflected crystal clear light in the sun. She opened her mouth and pursed her lips, then smiled happily and rolled her eyes. Little did she know that death was chasing her behind her.
After a thought, he nodded.
Then I realized that I seemed to be on a pirate ship.
I regretted it later. I regret that this vast world is so vast, and it took me nineteen years to wait for her pirate ship.
Purpose: Maintain the original intention and pursue fairness
Reader comments
"The ancestral hall and the kitchen are opposite each other,..." This is a big bug for the author~
Shanzi? Silver-like flowing water? What a strange bibaqian
"Xu Da was originally worried about being dragged into..." This is a big bug for the author~
That's it? It should be "just like that"
The names are rare, there are many characters, the perspective is unclear, and I don't know what to say. The plot advances chaotically, and the writing style is quite solid, but it's tasteless and a pity to discard.
The teacher's writing is very good, I look forward to the next book! Come on [cat head][cat head]
The first case was a bit hard to read. Maybe I saw too much about the Academy Murder Case, and I can't remember the names of the people... But the subsequent cases are getting better. Keep up the good work.
I've read half of the first chapter, and it's pretty good except for the names. It's not that the names are bad, but the names are all unfamiliar and there are too many. A small suggestion to the author. Before everyone is familiar with the character, you can use an appropriate amount of physical description to replace the name. For example, the author I like will write about a burly and sturdy woman at the beginning to replace the name of the protagonist, and wait until the reader has read part of the story before pointing out the name of the protagonist. After reading 33% of a chapter, there are too many characters, and many of their names are not important. For example, the name of the young master of the X family is not important at all.
"The ancestral hall and the kitchen are opposite each other,..." This is a big bug for the author~ Shanzi? Silver-like flowing water? What a strange bibaqian
"Xu Da was originally worried about being dragged into..." This is a big bug for the author~ That's it? It should be "just like that"
The names are rare, there are many characters, the perspective is unclear, and I don't know what to say. The plot advances chaotically, and the writing style is quite solid, but it's tasteless and a pity to discard.
The teacher's writing is very good, I look forward to the next book! Come on [cat head][cat head]
The first case was a bit hard to read. Maybe I saw too much about the Academy Murder Case, and I can't remember the names of the people... But the subsequent cases are getting better. Keep up the good work.
I've read half of the first chapter, and it's pretty good except for the names. It's not that the names are bad, but the names are all unfamiliar and there are too many. A small suggestion to the author. Before everyone is familiar with the character, you can use an appropriate amount of physical description to replace the name. For example, the author I like will write about a burly and sturdy woman at the beginning to replace the name of the protagonist, and wait until the reader has read part of the story before pointing out the name of the protagonist. After reading 33% of a chapter, there are too many characters, and many of their names are not important. For example, the name of the young master of the X family is not important at all.