My love story has really been updated, and I respond to all requests [biting the handkerchief][biting the handkerchief][biting the handkerchief]
The polaroid is very cute, the picture in my dream [like][like][like][like]
Finally, finally, when I first saw Director Qiu, I felt from the conversation that this high-flying ghost is definitely not a good ghost, and this wave is easy to catch [Like] [Like]
Happy holidays (even though it's the next day…)
Is it okay to eat like this [please] [please] [please] [please] [orange candy] I got it
Based on my experience of reading more than 300 books, I would like to make some suggestions, because I think the author will definitely write better in the future, which is very promising. First of all, the author's writing style is very lyrical and slow, which is very suitable for prose. The novel lacks power, which is reflected in the fact that the turning points of the plot seem to be forced to have twists and turns, and the emotional outbursts of the characters are a bit inappropriate or even too much. Some emotions do not necessarily have to be piled up in words, but can really make people feel the inferiority, pain, longing and breathless heartache from the heart. You can learn from the writing methods of other authors. In addition, regarding the setting of the protagonist, there may be some consideration at the character level. It is obvious that the author's description after the protagonist enters society is more realistic. The previous chapters are a bit suspended, which makes the previous plot and character emotions appear "hypocritical". It is also because of the immature writing style. It is obviously a novel close to 380,000 words. I read it surprisingly quickly. I think the author needs to think about how to write the novel more deeply. The last dozen chapters here seem to have made a lot of progress. No malice, I just hope the author will get better and better [Blue Heart][Blue Heart]
弃文了吗，也不说下[猫头]
My love story has really been updated, and I respond to all requests [biting the handkerchief][biting the handkerchief][biting the handkerchief]
The polaroid is very cute, the picture in my dream [like][like][like][like]
Finally, finally, when I first saw Director Qiu, I felt from the conversation that this high-flying ghost is definitely not a good ghost, and this wave is easy to catch [Like] [Like]
Happy holidays (even though it's the next day…)
Is it okay to eat like this [please] [please] [please] [please] [orange candy] I got it
Based on my experience of reading more than 300 books, I would like to make some suggestions, because I think the author will definitely write better in the future, which is very promising. First of all, the author's writing style is very lyrical and slow, which is very suitable for prose. The novel lacks power, which is reflected in the fact that the turning points of the plot seem to be forced to have twists and turns, and the emotional outbursts of the characters are a bit inappropriate or even too much. Some emotions do not necessarily have to be piled up in words, but can really make people feel the inferiority, pain, longing and breathless heartache from the heart. You can learn from the writing methods of other authors. In addition, regarding the setting of the protagonist, there may be some consideration at the character level. It is obvious that the author's description after the protagonist enters society is more realistic. The previous chapters are a bit suspended, which makes the previous plot and character emotions appear "hypocritical". It is also because of the immature writing style. It is obviously a novel close to 380,000 words. I read it surprisingly quickly. I think the author needs to think about how to write the novel more deeply. The last dozen chapters here seem to have made a lot of progress. No malice, I just hope the author will get better and better [Blue Heart][Blue Heart]
Very nice [Orange Candy] I tried it
Forgot to wish you a happy birthday [cake]