Charming
粲然
by When the Moonlight Falls (月光坠落时)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 232k Words
- Chapters
- 63
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 6mo ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Stats
Tags
- ThemeLove
- POVDual POV
- Age18+
- Campus
- Daily Life
- Happy Ending
- Slow-Burn Love
Synopsis
(Full text archive completed) You stand on the bridge and look at the scenery, and people watching the scenery are watching you upstairs. The bright moon decorates your windows, and you decorate other people's dreams. ——Bian Zhilin's "Fragment of Chapter" Xiao Yunqing's perspective: Jun Can in high school was a misty figure in the painting. He was independent from the world and became an immortal. He stopped for it and could not touch it. After the reunion, Jun Can is still the same, with only a little more concern and popularity, but the viewer is no longer satisfied, just like what Xiao Yuqing said: strong perseverance, almost stubborn, thick-skinned, almost shameless. So he was sure of victory, after all, where there's a will, there's a way. Juncan's perspective: He came to his mother's hometown alone just to solve the mystery she left behind; in two years, following his mother's notes and his own feelings, he fell in love with this place and found the love for himself that his parents almost lost. Because of this longing, he returned to his hometown many years later, but he didn't want to meet the person he loved at that time. With Xiao Yunqing's unabashed and continuous efforts, he still gained the love that was seven years late. Volume 1 (Chapter 37) Campus Daily: Careful and considerate × indifferent and confused Volume 2 (Chapter 18) Falling in Love Again: Straight Ball, Bad, Persistent Attack × Sharp Avoidance, Tolerance and Acceptance ———————————————— Here are some thoughts: Overall, the book is relaxed. In the first volume, Jun Can came here on his own initiative and described the scenery and special foods of the four seasons in the north from his perspective. In the setting, he is a southerner who hates rainy days. He has never been to the north, so his feelings are mostly curiosity. Please don't think that he is ignorant. It is the author's problem. In the end, it is more like writing about scenery... Most of them are the author's own experiences and are not objective. I don't know why, but I can write more than thirty chapters on this matter... The second volume is Xiao Yunqing's active pursuit, so it is mainly from his perspective. Although there are only eighteen chapters, the author really writes it beautifully, and I don't know what the world is. It wasn't until I finished writing that I realized it was a bad thing, because the emotional part at the end was basically flowing, but the first volume was always stuck, and I had to think about what to fill in, so there was so much nonsense... Although it was foreshadowing the vinegar of making dumplings, it was too long, but I bit the bullet and finished it, so I posted it directly. I was too lazy to change it again, after all, I changed it several times at the beginning. So it's no surprise that it didn't happen. Now that I think about it, all I want to write is the content of the second volume, but I also want their relationship to flow smoothly and smoothly. Instead, it's like a running account, which is a bit boring. I still need to practice more. I almost want to release the entire first volume and just use the second volume to catch up on the serialization... Today I thought again, since there is a problem, why not change it? If it is really just for self-admiration, then why publish it, so I changed the first ten chapters and deleted the content of three chapters. There may still be some inaccuracies. Please understand. It was said that I wanted to fall in love, but in the end I felt that I had been holding on to those little dots to write, which was a bit boring. Their thoughts were too sensitive and delicate in my writing, but I still wanted to write, and the left and right brains were fighting each other to finish it. I also admire myself. Now that I'm writing my second book, I find that I can't write big scenes and grand narratives at all. Being able to write down a running account of anything is also a skill... It really has something to do with the author's knowledge. This article probably won't be revised again. My level is limited and I also want this story to end completely. The idea of releasing the first volume at once is still swirling in my mind, but it's hopeless. The writing is novice, the author has no common sense, no culture and no logic. Purpose: Find yourself and grow yourself