[The outspoken and optimistic little sun heroine × the gentle, inferior and love-minded male protagonist]
Yu Qingyuan, the only daughter of Yu Ji Qianzhuang, returns from studying martial arts and learns that her marriage has been decided. However, her dream of becoming a hero has not yet come true. How can she marry young?
On a night when apricot blossoms were fragrant, Qingyuan left home and became a bodyguard, but the bodyguard escaped on his own...
He risked his life several times to save her.
His silver darts are superb.
He was born beautiful, but unfortunately he was crippled.
——————————————
When Qiu Lingshu was seven years old, he witnessed his biological mother being burned alive for a sword. From then on, he knew that he was also a pawn in his father's restoration of the country.
But he was confident that he would get close to her before the wedding and find the whereabouts of the secret book from her.
He didn't find the secret book.
He learned early on that he didn't deserve anyone's love.
But he fell hopelessly in love with her.
——————————————
"You don't care about me, so why are you so nice to me?"
Tears fell from her eyes: "Why do you come to save me so many times?"
"How can a mutilated ghost deserve the love of a goddess?" His eyes became dim.
"I'm sending you to Pingxiang just to help you survive better."
"So what if I'm disabled?"
Her eyes were shining: "You deserve to be loved by anyone."
——————————————
The heroine is innocent in the early stage, but will grow up in the later stage, her personality will change significantly, and she will take control of the emotional line.
The male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist at first sight and looked at his wife to death all year round.
——————————————
Final reflection:
①The character creation is not clear enough and the personality change is not natural enough. For example, the contrast between the male protagonist's lack of love and indifference but his preference for the female protagonist is not reflected, and the sense of unity that the heroine's personality changes when she encounters an accident but her personality remains the same is not reflected.
②The plot is too simple, the villain's motives are not explained enough, and the logic is not rigorous enough.
③The emotional changes are not natural enough and the emotional portrayal is not delicate enough.
④ There is no theme or entry point that resonates with contemporary people, and the sense of substitution is insufficient.
Next, I will seriously reflect and work hard to improve.
Thank you everyone for your support and love❤️
Purpose: To be self-reliant and self-reliant in adversity, and to promote the narrow spirit of women
