Shi Yue came to the unknown universe, saw the galaxy where ancient beasts were raging, witnessed the fall of the immortal, and inherited the authority of the immortal in the ashes of destruction. He became the new envoy, using the broken star track as the road, and carved eternal footprints in the long river of time.
He transformed from a ball of light into a descendant of the dragon.
I didn't think about the rest of the story, but I realized it when I wrote it. It turned out to be really difficult, and my own writing skills couldn't support this world view, but I really like them! There was too little food, so I had no choice but to be enthusiastic, even though I just wanted to eat meat. Why does it feel so difficult? .
There are many private facilities. To study the history of Bengtie, let me take the public examination. T v T
Purpose: Want to change the imperfect story
Reader comments
Shiyue is a cosmic light protagonist who comes to rescue the suffering Guanyin Bodhisattva in this world [bad laugh]
The writing is very good. It is the dream of Chinese people to travel through time and become a dragon. However, the protagonist accepts the remaining power of the immortal star god and becomes an immortal envoy. A skinny camel is bigger than a horse. Even the remaining power is enough to promote the protagonist to an emissary.
I don't have to worry about my imagination. It's not watery or nonsense. Isn't it great? When it comes to the main plot, I can write it in more detail. As someone who is deeply persecuted by certain authors, I really like this crisp and neat writing method.
Is this going to enter the main plot?
I just realized that I can't comment in paragraphs, but the light of the universe is so good as the second grade title [bad laugh]
I only went to 8 articles to raise [dog head]
I'm curious about the reaction of the people of the Mighty-Dharma-Dragon-born community when they find out about the existence of the protagonist [bad laugh]
The review speed is pretty good [dog head]
I really like this article and have been following it [dog head holding roses][dog head holding roses][dog head holding roses]
Shiyue is a cosmic light protagonist who comes to rescue the suffering Guanyin Bodhisattva in this world [bad laugh]
The writing is very good. It is the dream of Chinese people to travel through time and become a dragon. However, the protagonist accepts the remaining power of the immortal star god and becomes an immortal envoy. A skinny camel is bigger than a horse. Even the remaining power is enough to promote the protagonist to an emissary.
I don't have to worry about my imagination. It's not watery or nonsense. Isn't it great? When it comes to the main plot, I can write it in more detail. As someone who is deeply persecuted by certain authors, I really like this crisp and neat writing method.
Is this going to enter the main plot?
I just realized that I can't comment in paragraphs, but the light of the universe is so good as the second grade title [bad laugh]
I only went to 8 articles to raise [dog head]
I'm curious about the reaction of the people of the Mighty-Dharma-Dragon-born community when they find out about the existence of the protagonist [bad laugh]
The review speed is pretty good [dog head]
I really like this article and have been following it [dog head holding roses][dog head holding roses][dog head holding roses]