That year, his family was broken up and he was squatting alone in an alley smoking a cigarette. She "stretched out her hand and said with a smile, I'll give you a home." He chuckled, "I'll tell you when you grow up."
Later, he quit smoking and said with red eyes, "Please... Give me a home. This is what you promised me." But she never grew up.
Intention: You may have to walk the road ahead by yourself
Reader comments
""What are you doing squatting here?" He..." This is a big bug for the author~
It can be written, but it needs to be layered. Is the male protagonist and female protagonist appearing at the beginning? First person or third person
The writing is quite good, but you need to distinguish the levels. Your story starts with the male protagonist and the female protagonist, first person and third person.
""What are you doing squatting here?" He..." This is a big bug for the author~ It can be written, but it needs to be layered. Is the male protagonist and female protagonist appearing at the beginning? First person or third person
The writing is quite good, but you need to distinguish the levels. Your story starts with the male protagonist and the female protagonist, first person and third person.
Good looking, update soon (^３^)╱~~