This creation is based on my real experience. I would like to ask all book friends to provide your valuable opinions and suggestions. Thank you.
It's not enough. Please update more.
One day tied, the overall shortcomings are not concealed. I still hope that Jinjiang can have more non-industrial saccharine, antique articles. It feels a bit like ancient Chinese novels from the past, a little slower and more focused on the plot, and the combination of rivers, lakes, and courts. What I feel can be improved is that sometimes the motivations and logic of the characters' actions are not completely tenable, some plots are relatively common, and some changes are a little abrupt [laughing and crying]. And the description of the mutual affection between the male and female protagonists in the early stage feels like it could be a little more subtle. But the first article feels very powerful, keep up the good work.
Next book "Cleaning up the mess and rebuilding the amusement park"
If you think the name is interesting, please click on the column to read the copy~!
Omona is really awesome
The heroine is not invincible, and a little frustration is not normal. This is not a mindless novel. I think it is very good [Orange Candy].
Thanks for the limited exemption [Come on], the last chapter of the extra chapter really made me cry to death [ burst into tears ] touching [ lop-eared rabbit head ]
I have to say that the author's writing is very touching.
I hope the author will work hard to update the article
This creation is based on my real experience. I would like to ask all book friends to provide your valuable opinions and suggestions. Thank you.
It's not enough. Please update more.
One day tied, the overall shortcomings are not concealed. I still hope that Jinjiang can have more non-industrial saccharine, antique articles. It feels a bit like ancient Chinese novels from the past, a little slower and more focused on the plot, and the combination of rivers, lakes, and courts. What I feel can be improved is that sometimes the motivations and logic of the characters' actions are not completely tenable, some plots are relatively common, and some changes are a little abrupt [laughing and crying]. And the description of the mutual affection between the male and female protagonists in the early stage feels like it could be a little more subtle. But the first article feels very powerful, keep up the good work.
Next book "Cleaning up the mess and rebuilding the amusement park" If you think the name is interesting, please click on the column to read the copy~!
Omona is really awesome
The heroine is not invincible, and a little frustration is not normal. This is not a mindless novel. I think it is very good [Orange Candy].
Thanks for the limited exemption [Come on], the last chapter of the extra chapter really made me cry to death [ burst into tears ] touching [ lop-eared rabbit head ]
I have to say that the author's writing is very touching.
I hope the author will work hard to update the article