I saw Zhang Qiling supporting his body with a knife and limping toward me, just like the man in Banai at that time, with wounds all over his body. The clothes on the shoulders were torn apart by the bloody corpse and turned into pieces. The unicorn tattoo was unusually red as if it was burning. The most serious thing was a scratch on his chest. The wound was so deep that even the fat was pulled out, and it was bleeding profusely. I was shocked by the injuries on his body and remained motionless. He walked up to me and stopped. Then fell to the ground.
(The original short story by Xiang Qingshui was criticized for not having a back-and-forth fight, so some parts were rewritten and revised. This is the third edition)
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Great praise for Youyou's writing style, please keep up the good work -w-
Great praise for Youyou's writing style, please keep up the good work -w-