"Hate me? Well, I'll give you a chance to kill me."
On the day Su Xianyun came out of seclusion, Xie Jilan pointed his sword at the other party.
There was no expected fear, only a plain "kill me".
But Xie Jilan's sword did not penetrate.
It was obviously the sect that the other party brought him back to, but he was extremely cold and harsh towards him, but extremely gentle to the other disciples.
He hated Su Xianyun's different treatment, and he hated what Su Xianyun did.
He hated himself even more for putting away his sword for no reason.
The day after Xie Jilan's death, he learned that his master had used forbidden magic to block him from the catastrophe and saved his life. Just as he was about to find out what happened, he discovered that his master had died in the cold and snow.
Even at the last moment he refused to touch him.
A year later, he lay down in front of the monument and died for his love.
Why?
He doesn't know.
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At the top of the Reincarnation Stage, Xie Jilan looked at the thousands of ghosts who had been killed by his own hands, and he hesitated.
What was he reborn for?
Is it to find out the truth? Or to atone for past sins?
He doesn't know either.
But he was reborn.
In this life, he just wants to protect the master who went through fire and water for him without hesitation in his previous life. But he discovered the other party's secret of studying forbidden arts in order to save his life in exchange for his life.
He stopped Su Xianyun and stubbornly worked with him to find out the truth. No matter how many cold winters there were, no matter whether it was a dragon's pond or a tiger's den, he never let go.
Only one step away, when the sword tip lifted off the mask of the leader of the man in black, the face revealed was exactly the same as the master.
"The only way? Kill him."
Xie Jilan closed her eyes tightly and stabbed the opponent's heart with a ruthless sword.
When people die, thoughts are broken.
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"If the way of heaven insists on cutting off my return, I will defy fate and return with you."
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Xie Jilan x Su Xianyun
Paranoid, loyal dog, short-term attack x Hard-tongued, soft-hearted, stuffy
⊙At the end of the year, focus on 1v1 HE pseudo-substitute literature
⊙Double lines of past and present lives
⊙Series of suspense cases
vb: @CY
Purpose: to turn things around
Reader comments
[Spreading Flowers] The writing is so cute and clever!
I was reborn, reborn in...
I recently made a decision to write a book on ancient Chinese literature in two years.
It's a little bit taxing [changed]
But don't worry, I won't write a book every two years. When I'm not writing ancient texts, I will write other modern texts [Rainbow Fart]
This chapter is even more beautifully written [Star Eyes] [Purple Sugar] kswl
I just re-read it, and the hook at the end of the first chapter is not strong enough [Three Flower Cat Head]
Also, the first chapter is too bland, you can create some conflicts appropriately (actually I think the highlight of this chapter is Xie Jilan's rebirth), you can think of a new conflict, or you can advance the subsequent conflicts. Anyway, the first three chapters are very, very important. Sometimes BB may only have the patience for a few hundred words, so the important conflicts must appear in the first 300 or 500 words. Also, the memes must be novel, and innovation is very important (I don't know if you know this, so I said [let me be healthy]). Baby's writing is very good. It's good to be proficient in these skills. The more you write, the better your level will naturally be. It takes ten years to sharpen your sword and persevere. [Hug] Come on, come on [Hug] [Hug] [Hug]
The writing is good, the style of writing is unique, the characters are not broken, and the plot is closely linked to the past and the past, and the location of the past is just right. Overall, there are no flaws. The main problem is that the number of words in each chapter fluctuates high and low. It is recommended not to have a chapter with more than 2,000 words, and to control the number of words in each chapter to 3,000 or more.
Summary: The whole day is pretty good, the word count per chapter needs to increase and remain stable.
By chance, I was invited to read the article. It's actually really good. I look forward to more exciting stories in the future.
[Orange candy] Got it [Purple candy] kswl
[Orange Candy] arrived in Wuhu~ No updates~
Actually, I think the homeless people here can be described without quotation marks [dog head holding roses]
Sitting and waiting for the update, sisters, all the flowers I have been waiting for have faded! ! !
[Spreading Flowers] The writing is so cute and clever!
I was reborn, reborn in...
I recently made a decision to write a book on ancient Chinese literature in two years. It's a little bit taxing [changed] But don't worry, I won't write a book every two years. When I'm not writing ancient texts, I will write other modern texts [Rainbow Fart]
This chapter is even more beautifully written [Star Eyes] [Purple Sugar] kswl
I just re-read it, and the hook at the end of the first chapter is not strong enough [Three Flower Cat Head]
Also, the first chapter is too bland, you can create some conflicts appropriately (actually I think the highlight of this chapter is Xie Jilan's rebirth), you can think of a new conflict, or you can advance the subsequent conflicts. Anyway, the first three chapters are very, very important. Sometimes BB may only have the patience for a few hundred words, so the important conflicts must appear in the first 300 or 500 words. Also, the memes must be novel, and innovation is very important (I don't know if you know this, so I said [let me be healthy]). Baby's writing is very good. It's good to be proficient in these skills. The more you write, the better your level will naturally be. It takes ten years to sharpen your sword and persevere. [Hug] Come on, come on [Hug] [Hug] [Hug]
The writing is good, the style of writing is unique, the characters are not broken, and the plot is closely linked to the past and the past, and the location of the past is just right. Overall, there are no flaws. The main problem is that the number of words in each chapter fluctuates high and low. It is recommended not to have a chapter with more than 2,000 words, and to control the number of words in each chapter to 3,000 or more. Summary: The whole day is pretty good, the word count per chapter needs to increase and remain stable.
By chance, I was invited to read the article. It's actually really good. I look forward to more exciting stories in the future. [Orange candy] Got it [Purple candy] kswl
[Orange Candy] arrived in Wuhu~ No updates~
Actually, I think the homeless people here can be described without quotation marks [dog head holding roses]
Sitting and waiting for the update, sisters, all the flowers I have been waiting for have faded! ! !
Why do you still have a knife? . [Changed]