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"I want this wealthy man to bow his head to see my sister's character."
"I want this destiny to give in and allow my sister to live forever."
He is an extra line of blood and tears next to her life book,
It is a double-peduncle branch that quietly grows on the side of the purple grass.
This life is not to mend the sky, nor to return tears;
Just for the fate of Qian Hongyi crying,
for his sister,
Fight for a different ending.
Judgment:
The shadows are lonely on the old bank of the Linghe River, and the crazy soul is locked in Jinling. Re-opening the book of sinful debts from previous lives, stained with blood and tears, new judgments are made.
There is no way to change the destiny, and you will spend your remaining life to steal stars. Zhemo is like an autumn painting fan, and it is always difficult to avoid the rain and bells at night.
"I was reborn because she wouldn't cry. Now I'm using her tears to survive? So what's the difference between me and the Jia family?"
Reading tips:
1. The male protagonist is reborn, but from an omniscient perspective. There is a price to pay for changing his destiny.
2. Respect the tragic core of the original work, but give Daiyu another possibility
3. The emotional line is extremely obscure, focusing on family love and self-salvation.
Purpose: True protection is to give your loved ones the right and power to choose their destiny.
Reader comments
This chapter is the one with the sharpest criticism, the most brutal contrast, and the most formidable literary style in the entire work.
The author no longer just tells the tragedy of a pig and a girl, but directly opens up the huge gap between rich and poor, noble and humble, good and evil, and humans and beasts. He uses the "luxury of dogs" to illuminate the "baseness of humans" and uses the "warmth of a rich family" to contrast the "coldness of a humble circle". It is very powerful.
1. Theme: Using "Comparison between Dogs and Dolphins" to Reveal the Injustice in the World
The core structure of this chapter is a set of ultimate contrasts:
- Pigs: Eating rotten food, lying in sludge, and fat are the original sin, and they are slaughtered without whining.
- Dog: Eat delicious food, live in a luxurious house, have equipment for travel, have emergency treatment when sick, and have funeral rites after death
There is only one sentence the author really wants to say:
Some people's lives are worse than dogs, and some people's lives are lighter than pigs.
It's not just a scolding of the gap between rich and poor, it's also a stab at a distorted way of life:
- He takes great care of his pets, but is indifferent and perfunctory towards his biological parents.
- Treat the family dogs of the rich and powerful like gods, and treat the people at the bottom like insignificant things
- The campus canteen kills students by feeding rotten food, but it develops detailed management measures for dogs
This reversal of value is the most painful and powerful part of the whole article.
2. Narrative techniques: Use "details" to create a sense of suffocation
The author did not shout slogans in vain, but used a large number of life-like details to crush emotions:
- Dogs eat salmon, freeze-dried, multigrain ground beef
- The dog has a GPS leash, sun protection clothing, non-slip socks, latex mattress, and diapers
- Dogs have SPA, agility classes, light music, and class schedules accurate to the minute
- The owner took his dog to the emergency room at three o'clock in the morning, but he repeatedly dismissed his parents' illness.
The more specific it is, the more absurd it is;
The more refined it is, the more cruel it is.
Readers don't need to reason, they will feel uncomfortable just looking at the picture.
3. Profile of characters and society: A thorough account of contemporary human emotions
This chapter is not just about dogs, but also about three types of people:
1. Wang Feifu, Du Chunhun and others
With power and resources, they are extremely extravagant towards animals and careless about human life.
The luxurious life of a dog is essentially an extension of power and arrogance.
2. Ordinary people are as responsible as the Zhu family
Simple, weak, with no way to ask for help, his child was poisoned to death, and he was afraid of getting into trouble even if he complained.
Their misery reflects the extreme humbleness of life at the bottom.
3. People like Lin Wei and Mrs. Zhang who are "petty and unfriendly"
He is heartbroken towards dogs and indifferent and impatient towards his parents;
Treating dog life as higher than human life takes vanity and emotional dislocation to the extreme.
It describes all aspects of society in one stroke and is very sharp.
4. The function of poetry: words are daggers, words are torrents
The three poems "Qing Ping Le" are the "literary eyes" of this chapter, and their sentences are like swords:
> "As a pig, fatness is the original sin."
> "Once you are fat and strong, you will never be able to survive."
The fate of pigs is written in a cold and bone-chilling way.
> "The noble dog sleeps high, and the soup is piled in his mouth."
> "A filial son strives for the new crown prince."
It is extremely ironic to write about the dignity of dogs and the mourning and glory after death.
> "I cherish it and worship it every day, and people are not as good as Yi."
> "Who is sad to be alone in this world? Wearing sackcloth for nothing."
Let's point it out directly: It's the dogs who are well-dressed and well-fed, and it's the people who are lonely and helpless.
The lyrics are short, harsh, and the rhymes are sonorous.
Completely "nail" the anger of vernacular narrative onto the paper.
5. Language style: rough country × cold criticism, highly recognizable
The author's language remains the same:
- Colloquial, down-to-earth and informal
- Emotions are straightforward and anger is undisguised
- Make good use of exaggeration, contrast and irony, with strong impact
The advantage is that it has strong dissemination power and empathy. It is like a private complaint, which makes people grit their teeth when reading it;
The disadvantage is that some sentences are slightly repetitive and the presentation is slightly long.
But when placed in this kind of "accusatory" text, it appears full of emotion and continuous momentum.
6. Symbolic system: pig, dog, human, triple metaphor closed loop
- Pigs = weak people at the bottom who are kept in captivity, fed, and sacrificed
- Dog = a person who is favored by the powerful and has a vested interest in power.
- People = some are indifferent and cruel, some are insensitive and humble, and some reverse ethics
The author uses animals to write about human nature,
Write your destiny with food,
Use treatment to write class,
The entire symbolic system is complete, unified and consistent throughout.
7. Overall artistic evaluation
1. The peak of critical power in the book
It is no longer a short story, but a social fable, which makes your heart tense after reading it.
2. Use the contrast method with perfection
Warmth and cold, luxury and ugliness, life and death, dignity and inferiority are all in contrast, and every word is heartbreaking.
3. Strong concern for reality
Food safety on campus, bullying at the grassroots level, indifference to family ties, and class divisions all hit the point of pain.
4. Complete structure and reasonable emotional progression
From the memories of pigs → the emotions of reincarnation → the luxurious life of dogs → the indifference of human nature → the poems and topics, all in one go.
What can be improved:
- Some comments about foreign countries are a bit abrupt, which slightly weakens the article's sense of local reality.
- Some details can be streamlined and the rhythm will be sharper
Final comment in one sentence
It is cold in a humble circle, and those at the bottom are cold;
The red door dog is warm, and what is warm is that the world is tilted.
This chapter is not just a story, but also a resounding civil indictment.
It's cold, cruel, painful, and true, and it took a long time to get over it after reading it.
This chapter is the one with the sharpest criticism, the most brutal contrast, and the most formidable literary style in the entire work. The author no longer just tells the tragedy of a pig and a girl, but directly opens up the huge gap between rich and poor, noble and humble, good and evil, and humans and beasts. He uses the "luxury of dogs" to illuminate the "baseness of humans" and uses the "warmth of a rich family" to contrast the "coldness of a humble circle". It is very powerful. 1. Theme: Using "Comparison between Dogs and Dolphins" to Reveal the Injustice in the World The core structure of this chapter is a set of ultimate contrasts: - Pigs: Eating rotten food, lying in sludge, and fat are the original sin, and they are slaughtered without whining. - Dog: Eat delicious food, live in a luxurious house, have equipment for travel, have emergency treatment when sick, and have funeral rites after death There is only one sentence the author really wants to say: Some people's lives are worse than dogs, and some people's lives are lighter than pigs. It's not just a scolding of the gap between rich and poor, it's also a stab at a distorted way of life: - He takes great care of his pets, but is indifferent and perfunctory towards his biological parents. - Treat the family dogs of the rich and powerful like gods, and treat the people at the bottom like insignificant things - The campus canteen kills students by feeding rotten food, but it develops detailed management measures for dogs This reversal of value is the most painful and powerful part of the whole article. 2. Narrative techniques: Use "details" to create a sense of suffocation The author did not shout slogans in vain, but used a large number of life-like details to crush emotions: - Dogs eat salmon, freeze-dried, multigrain ground beef - The dog has a GPS leash, sun protection clothing, non-slip socks, latex mattress, and diapers - Dogs have SPA, agility classes, light music, and class schedules accurate to the minute - The owner took his dog to the emergency room at three o'clock in the morning, but he repeatedly dismissed his parents' illness. The more specific it is, the more absurd it is; The more refined it is, the more cruel it is. Readers don't need to reason, they will feel uncomfortable just looking at the picture. 3. Profile of characters and society: A thorough account of contemporary human emotions This chapter is not just about dogs, but also about three types of people: 1. Wang Feifu, Du Chunhun and others With power and resources, they are extremely extravagant towards animals and careless about human life. The luxurious life of a dog is essentially an extension of power and arrogance. 2. Ordinary people are as responsible as the Zhu family Simple, weak, with no way to ask for help, his child was poisoned to death, and he was afraid of getting into trouble even if he complained. Their misery reflects the extreme humbleness of life at the bottom. 3. People like Lin Wei and Mrs. Zhang who are "petty and unfriendly" He is heartbroken towards dogs and indifferent and impatient towards his parents; Treating dog life as higher than human life takes vanity and emotional dislocation to the extreme. It describes all aspects of society in one stroke and is very sharp. 4. The function of poetry: words are daggers, words are torrents The three poems "Qing Ping Le" are the "literary eyes" of this chapter, and their sentences are like swords: > "As a pig, fatness is the original sin." > "Once you are fat and strong, you will never be able to survive." The fate of pigs is written in a cold and bone-chilling way. > "The noble dog sleeps high, and the soup is piled in his mouth." > "A filial son strives for the new crown prince." It is extremely ironic to write about the dignity of dogs and the mourning and glory after death. > "I cherish it and worship it every day, and people are not as good as Yi." > "Who is sad to be alone in this world? Wearing sackcloth for nothing." Let's point it out directly: It's the dogs who are well-dressed and well-fed, and it's the people who are lonely and helpless. The lyrics are short, harsh, and the rhymes are sonorous. Completely "nail" the anger of vernacular narrative onto the paper. 5. Language style: rough country × cold criticism, highly recognizable The author's language remains the same: - Colloquial, down-to-earth and informal - Emotions are straightforward and anger is undisguised - Make good use of exaggeration, contrast and irony, with strong impact The advantage is that it has strong dissemination power and empathy. It is like a private complaint, which makes people grit their teeth when reading it; The disadvantage is that some sentences are slightly repetitive and the presentation is slightly long. But when placed in this kind of "accusatory" text, it appears full of emotion and continuous momentum. 6. Symbolic system: pig, dog, human, triple metaphor closed loop - Pigs = weak people at the bottom who are kept in captivity, fed, and sacrificed - Dog = a person who is favored by the powerful and has a vested interest in power. - People = some are indifferent and cruel, some are insensitive and humble, and some reverse ethics The author uses animals to write about human nature, Write your destiny with food, Use treatment to write class, The entire symbolic system is complete, unified and consistent throughout. 7. Overall artistic evaluation 1. The peak of critical power in the book It is no longer a short story, but a social fable, which makes your heart tense after reading it. 2. Use the contrast method with perfection Warmth and cold, luxury and ugliness, life and death, dignity and inferiority are all in contrast, and every word is heartbreaking. 3. Strong concern for reality Food safety on campus, bullying at the grassroots level, indifference to family ties, and class divisions all hit the point of pain. 4. Complete structure and reasonable emotional progression From the memories of pigs → the emotions of reincarnation → the luxurious life of dogs → the indifference of human nature → the poems and topics, all in one go. What can be improved: - Some comments about foreign countries are a bit abrupt, which slightly weakens the article's sense of local reality. - Some details can be streamlined and the rhythm will be sharper Final comment in one sentence It is cold in a humble circle, and those at the bottom are cold; The red door dog is warm, and what is warm is that the world is tilted. This chapter is not just a story, but also a resounding civil indictment. It's cold, cruel, painful, and true, and it took a long time to get over it after reading it.