[The first completed article, now it seems that the writing style needs to be improved. It is expected that the full text will be refined in mid-September, and some plots will be more tense. Thank you to all Xiaobao who support the original version. The latest series: After Abandoning the Qing Leng Immortal Lord, the following is the text of this article:
Not long after Chen Manshui became Ah Piao, he kept having a dream.
In the dream, her gentle and easy-going boyfriend was lying in a bathtub stained red with blood, with blood pouring out of his wrists.
Every day after that, she would dream about different images of her boyfriend.
Without exception, those scenes were dripping with blood and shocking.
By chance, Chen Manshui met her boyfriend who had appeared in her dreams countless times. He was the same pale man with scars all over his body, like a doll that had been violently torn apart, lifeless.
Chen Manshui, who was supposed to disappear, became obsessed with letting Lou Guanhe live and return to his former appearance.
Later, she found what the Taoist priest said was the last connection between her and the world.
As long as he burns it, he can enter reincarnation, and Lou Guanhe will forget the days of painful struggle and attempts to resurrect her.
The moment he opened the door and prepared to burn it, a group of bodyguards in black swarmed in and pinned the Taoist priest to the ground.
Lou Guanhe stood quietly by the door, listening for an unknown amount of time. His pale face was expressionless, but his pupils were dark, filled with frightening paranoia and madness.
He looked at the stunned Chen Manshui, raised the corner of his mouth with a sickly arc, and whispered: "Manman, do you want to leave me?"
……………
I know you're long dead, but it doesn't matter, I'll find you.
If you don't have any obsession, then use me as the thread that binds you to the world of heaven.
I won't let go, won't let go, won't let go, won't let go...
Long, long, long, long…
It's a long time... You will come back
Manman... You are back
[Gentle, clear-headed and delicate heroine VS crazy and life-threatening paranoid widower Shuangjie he]
Note: Full text high energy
Heavy talk! ! ! The male protagonist is crazy!
Shuangjie, the review has started
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[Sluggish, emotionally stable, wooden beauty vs. Neurotic, controlling devil]
Jiang Qing's master is an immortal from the Nine Heavens. He seems to be cold and unparalleled, with an indifferent personality, but deep down he is passionate about love and desire. Even though he was rejected by the laws of the mortal world and almost perished, he didn't care and stayed by Jiang Qing's side stubbornly and madly.
Seeing Cang Wu Ling who was about to fall due to the backlash of karma, Jiang Qing agreed to the immortal master's request.
Let him forget the memories related to himself.
After seeing him leave with the immortal master, Jiang Qing got married to King Yi in order to repay his kindness.
On the wedding night, red silk hanging high and candlelight flickering. Wearing a bright red wedding dress, she quietly watched the uninvited guests breaking into her new house.
He stood under the candlelight, his pupils looking straight at Jiang Qing's wedding dress. After looking at it for so long, his pupils were stained scarlet.
"You want to get married..." Cang Wuling's voice was very soft, as if he was talking to himself, and the smile at the corner of his mouth turned twisted and jealous. He suddenly spit out blood and walked towards Jiang Qing step by step.
"Why are you crying?" Pale lips kissed her trembling eyelashes, "This has just begun, Jiang Qing, if you make a little noise, I will let everyone present today go to the underworld to reunite, okay?"
………
In the Demon Palace, Jiang Qing was dressed in a blood-red wedding dress, quietly waiting for mercy from the demon that had destroyed most of the Immortal Continent.
According to the plan, she was supposed to send the magic weapon soaked in the immortal's blood into the demon's body, but looking at that familiar face, her breathing almost stopped.
Her hesitation fell into the eyes of Cang Wu Ling, who had taken off his immortal disguise, and was rewarded with punishment-like uncontrolled and even more excessive treatment. The golden bell that was forcibly tied to my ankle rang without interruption for more than a month.
Soon after, with the joint efforts of all the immortal masters, he was severely injured. Before leaving, Jiang Qing looked back and met his eyes in the magic circle.
Those dark, cold eyes stared at Jiang Qing with the same crazy and twisted love as always.
His lips opened and closed silently.
"There's no escape."
Intention: Positive and uplifting
Reader comments
It's so good. Actually, I kind of want to watch the side story where Lou Guanhe, who was gentle when he was a boy, can't help but feel evil towards Manman occasionally hahhhh
Poor baby! Absolutely evil plagiarism! But what you wrote is really great! Linked together, each chapter has a small climax that makes people want to stop! I hope you can adjust your mentality! Anyway! Thank you for writing this article completely! I will always keep it! [Spread flowers][Spread flowers][Spread flowers] Finish spreading flowers
Too short (shaking his head sadly)
You smell so good, Mr. Rice, I will support you for the rest of my life
This is actually a development... Please let me see the extra quickly, okay? [Crying]
You'd better explain it to me quickly! I'm scratching my head right now! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (just woke up in the quilt in the morning to review the pupa)
It's so good. Actually, I kind of want to watch the side story where Lou Guanhe, who was gentle when he was a boy, can't help but feel evil towards Manman occasionally hahhhh
It is indeed a welfare [please] [please] It smells so good, haha
You will be in a lot of trouble after we meet again, thank you very much (if you don't do this, I will chop you into pieces! Very fierce. Jpg
Can you do more?
4 Jinjiang coins... You, me, this, it, he is too short! ! ! ! ! !
I can't stand it any longer. I really want to see it.
Finished spreading flowers! Thank you baby 🥹
Super well written! It's really hard to guard against plagiarism. Keep up the good work and look forward to new works.
The plot is pretty good, but the writing and transitions need to be improved. Come on
Were those all his dreams before? Is the heroine who appears at the end a fantasy of the hero or a real heroine? It won't be an open ending, right?
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How should I fall asleep with your cold words about not updating today?
New Year's Eve! Put more! ! ! ! ! Why are you so stingy! Give it all to me! ! ! !
It's so good. Actually, I kind of want to watch the side story where Lou Guanhe, who was gentle when he was a boy, can't help but feel evil towards Manman occasionally hahhhh
Poor baby! Absolutely evil plagiarism! But what you wrote is really great! Linked together, each chapter has a small climax that makes people want to stop! I hope you can adjust your mentality! Anyway! Thank you for writing this article completely! I will always keep it! [Spread flowers][Spread flowers][Spread flowers] Finish spreading flowers
Too short (shaking his head sadly)
You smell so good, Mr. Rice, I will support you for the rest of my life
This is actually a development... Please let me see the extra quickly, okay? [Crying]
You'd better explain it to me quickly! I'm scratching my head right now! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (just woke up in the quilt in the morning to review the pupa)
It's so good. Actually, I kind of want to watch the side story where Lou Guanhe, who was gentle when he was a boy, can't help but feel evil towards Manman occasionally hahhhh
It is indeed a welfare [please] [please] It smells so good, haha
You will be in a lot of trouble after we meet again, thank you very much (if you don't do this, I will chop you into pieces! Very fierce. Jpg
Can you do more?
4 Jinjiang coins... You, me, this, it, he is too short! ! ! ! ! !
I can't stand it any longer. I really want to see it.
Finished spreading flowers! Thank you baby 🥹
Super well written! It's really hard to guard against plagiarism. Keep up the good work and look forward to new works.
The plot is pretty good, but the writing and transitions need to be improved. Come on
Were those all his dreams before? Is the heroine who appears at the end a fantasy of the hero or a real heroine? It won't be an open ending, right?
? ! ! ! ! ! ! !
How should I fall asleep with your cold words about not updating today?
New Year's Eve! Put more! ! ! ! ! Why are you so stingy! Give it all to me! ! ! !