If you love someone, do you have to give up all your self-esteem and pride for him?
Is it true that if you love someone, you don't have to care about the world's eyes?
But why can't I get your love even if I give up these things?
What am I in your heart?
I'm tired and don't want to go down anymore. I wish you get the world you want.
Mouxuan: This is my first time writing an original story, so please give me your advice.
Author's note: This article is described in the first person and there are other points. If you are shocked, please click the red cross in the upper right corner to save yourself.
Conception:
Reader comments
It's finally over. . Very mighty. . Write some extra stories. . Is it really okay for someone to be in poor health? .
It's so mean! Gong is so scum that he can be blown away by the wind! Damn, I think it's unfair for everyone to say that you are also angry! Can't you just fight back?
I think Young Master Ling Yue's comments are quite profound, so his writing must be very good. D should accept it with an open mind. If you have time, you can ask him for a text.
By the way, you will get mentally ill if you watch something you don't like.
D's writing is quite good, please work hard.
It's very well written, I hope I won't get into trouble.
I guessed it right, it's so bloody.
Why do you say you forget the person you fall in love with so quickly? Isn't it too fast to fall in love with this one? Why do you feel like you can't find the feeling?
Congratulations on the completion
But... This is too fast!!!
Does the title "A bloody time travel and rebirth" sound like it's for a serious drama? It's obviously more on the lighter side. It's clear at a glance!
As for the author, your writing style, the perspective of your article, and the first-person "I" statement are taboos/minefields for a large number of readers.
Many novice articles and complaints adopt this form. Your article gives me the impression that it tends to make complaints. It's a style, and if you stick to it, it's not a bad thing. But your positioning is not accurate!
And you can't even listen to the different opinions of readers. Do you think that when you write very seriously, readers seem to feel relaxed? Isn't this normal? ? Not to mention you, old writers of classics may write articles that are different from what readers feel.
This may be true for any author, after all, there are issues with different backgrounds, perspectives, preferences, etc. And you, because the readers have different opinions than you, scold the readers for not having read it and deliberately talking nonsense! ! You use the heart of a villain to judge the heart of a gentleman, which makes other readers feel chilly!
Author, you want to write a serious drama, but give readers the feeling of being relaxed, even a novice! This is just an objective fact. I didn't say that white texts are bad. Many red texts are white texts. May I ask why you are so small-minded?
Why do you say I didn't read the article? ! Saying that I "wrote a bunch of words that seemed to give opinions but obviously didn't read the article" how could you distort the readers' views in this way? Treat readers like this? !
As for the comment below, I read this chapter, your copywriting and table of contents, and seriously made my comments. I give you 2 points for saying this!
Now I have no choice but to follow objective standards. The -1-point evaluation includes the inability of your article to express the drama you want to express, the deviation of the classification, and your attitude towards readers.
Among the large number of serious, rigorous and atmospheric articles in ancient times, this article just seems not that rigorous and seems to be a novice. (It's still a bloody time travel! You admit it yourself.) If you put this sentence in your evaluation, it is correct no matter how you look at it.
It's finally over. . Very mighty. . Write some extra stories. . Is it really okay for someone to be in poor health? .
It's so mean! Gong is so scum that he can be blown away by the wind! Damn, I think it's unfair for everyone to say that you are also angry! Can't you just fight back?
I think Young Master Ling Yue's comments are quite profound, so his writing must be very good. D should accept it with an open mind. If you have time, you can ask him for a text. By the way, you will get mentally ill if you watch something you don't like. D's writing is quite good, please work hard.
It's very well written, I hope I won't get into trouble.
I guessed it right, it's so bloody.
Why do you say you forget the person you fall in love with so quickly? Isn't it too fast to fall in love with this one? Why do you feel like you can't find the feeling?
Congratulations on the completion But... This is too fast!!!
Does the title "A bloody time travel and rebirth" sound like it's for a serious drama? It's obviously more on the lighter side. It's clear at a glance! As for the author, your writing style, the perspective of your article, and the first-person "I" statement are taboos/minefields for a large number of readers. Many novice articles and complaints adopt this form. Your article gives me the impression that it tends to make complaints. It's a style, and if you stick to it, it's not a bad thing. But your positioning is not accurate! And you can't even listen to the different opinions of readers. Do you think that when you write very seriously, readers seem to feel relaxed? Isn't this normal? ? Not to mention you, old writers of classics may write articles that are different from what readers feel. This may be true for any author, after all, there are issues with different backgrounds, perspectives, preferences, etc. And you, because the readers have different opinions than you, scold the readers for not having read it and deliberately talking nonsense! ! You use the heart of a villain to judge the heart of a gentleman, which makes other readers feel chilly! Author, you want to write a serious drama, but give readers the feeling of being relaxed, even a novice! This is just an objective fact. I didn't say that white texts are bad. Many red texts are white texts. May I ask why you are so small-minded? Why do you say I didn't read the article? ! Saying that I "wrote a bunch of words that seemed to give opinions but obviously didn't read the article" how could you distort the readers' views in this way? Treat readers like this? ! As for the comment below, I read this chapter, your copywriting and table of contents, and seriously made my comments. I give you 2 points for saying this! Now I have no choice but to follow objective standards. The -1-point evaluation includes the inability of your article to express the drama you want to express, the deviation of the classification, and your attitude towards readers. Among the large number of serious, rigorous and atmospheric articles in ancient times, this article just seems not that rigorous and seems to be a novice. (It's still a bloody time travel! You admit it yourself.) If you put this sentence in your evaluation, it is correct no matter how you look at it.