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To practice writing, try to write some ordinary short stories directly in one chapter.
You can give me your opinions_(:з∠)_.
It may be a little too artistic, idealistic and emotional.
But people will always do some earth-shattering stupid things without even realizing it.
So I don't think the story is unrealistic, but it's just that it's generally hard for us to meet such people.
After all, in life, you always have to rely on emotions to survive. You need to have a little obsession to face the myriad situations of the world.
Concept: Everyone is ordinary