This is my first time writing an article. Please tell me if there are any shortcomings. Thank you.
This article will revolve around Shen Yanci and Lu Jinghan at the border. The main plot is that Shen Yanci has the scars of the capital and his background as a young man from an aristocratic family, while Lu Jinghan has the responsibility of the border and the toughness of a soldier. The two initially had differences in stance and temperament. But in the crisis after crisis, we gradually saw the essence behind each other's shell, and finally went from being dissatisfied to each other's only reliance. When I was writing, I wanted to write that Shen Yanci would not be simply exiled, but that there might be a frame-up behind it, and then this would threaten the interests of some people, and the two of them would fight together. The environment on the border is cruel, but the feelings will appear pure. Without the restraints of the capital's ethics, there is only the sacrifice of one's life to protect each other in critical moments. Finally, they found each other's stability and destination among the falling snow in the green mountains. The story will not be too bloody, but more about using the background of the border to describe the mutual warmth of two lonely souls, and the power of sticking to one's heart and friendship in troubled times, pure love? Yes, the protagonist's family must not really make a mistake, is it framed? If there are any surprises, I will make it clear in advance: Shen Yanci's think tank character is too suspended, for example, he often makes clever calculations but lacks foreshadowing, which may appear unreal; if Lu Jinghan's guardianship is not grasped when I write it, Well, it can easily become over-intervention, appear too controlling, and deviate from the "respect" background; if there are too many side plots, such as old family cases and border secrets, it may make the bond and growth of the main line two people out of focus; if the emotional line is advanced too fast, for example, a sudden intimate interaction lacks preliminary foreshadowing, it will appear blunt; if the villain (such as the manipulator behind the scenes) has a weak motive and is only "bad" for "bad", he can easily become a tool man and weaken the tension of the conflict. Anyway, the writing is not very good, sorry, thank you?
Purpose: Taking the wind and snow at the border as the backdrop, it tells the story of two lonely souls trying to save each other in troubled times: Shen Yanci can maintain his character as a scholar, while Lu Jinghan can protect his family, country and his sweetheart. It is ultimately proved that the toughest protection is the tenderness hidden in the light of a sword; the purest affection can melt the snow on thousands of mountains.