
Youth Returns and Dreams Leave
青归又梦离
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- Ongoing
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- 35k Words
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- Danmei (BL)
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- 2d ago
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- JJWXC
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After catching up on the update, I couldn't help but write a long review! I really want to praise the author's writing style. My biggest feeling after reading this article is that it is comfortable, healing, delicate and touching. There is no piling up gorgeous and empty rhetoric, and no deliberately creating bloody conflicts. With only plain and gentle writing, a whole vivid world and three-dimensional and full characters are spread out in front of the reader's eyes, and the reading experience is directly enriched. Da Da's writing skills are really strong. Every description is just right and relaxed. It reads smoothly and naturally, and the atmosphere is perfectly grasped. People are completely immersed in the story and can't bear to fast forward every word. What gets me the most is the two-way interaction between the protagonist's attack and the protagonist's reception! The sweetness of this pair is really beyond the standard. The more you taste it, the sweeter it becomes. It is the kind of gentle sweetness that flows slowly and moisturizes things silently. It is more touching than the straightforward and ambiguous sugaring. Many readers, like me, can clearly feel that the pace of the early part of the story is slow. There are almost no explicit ambiguous scenes between the two, no deliberate physical pull, no straightforward confession of heart, and even the relationship between the two is light and restrained. But it is precisely this kind of clean and pure preliminary preparation that makes the relationship between the two people particularly solid. They went from being strange and alienated to slowly getting closer, from cautiously testing to subconsciously caring about each other. All their good feelings are hidden in the smallest details, hidden in silent tolerance, accommodation and protection. This kind of slow and slow emotional line is very real. The heartbeat of young people is not a vigorous love at first sight, but a full-hearted preference that accumulates over time. It is precisely because the early stage is restrained and delicate enough that people are looking forward to the emotional warming in the later stage! It can be clearly felt that the hidden love between the two has already taken root and sprouted, but it is temporarily restrained. When the love is fully revealed in the later stage, the sweetness of the two-way love will definitely explode. Just thinking about it makes me feel extremely excited. I am especially looking forward to the subsequent description of the emotional drama. In addition to the beautiful emotional line of the protagonist, the description of the group portraits in the article is one of the biggest highlights of this article, especially the portrayal of the fairies, which really amazed me. Many online articles will habitually focus on the protagonist's main plot, and the supporting characters are mostly tool-like and flat, reduced to a background to set off the protagonist. However, this shortcoming is completely avoided, and each fairy character is made of flesh and blood and has its own character. They each have their own personalities, obsessions, and stories. They are gentle or cold, free and easy, bright or calm. There is no stereotyped character design, and each character has its own highlights. I have always felt that excellent group portrait description is never redundant foreshadowing, but has a strong narrative significance, which is vividly reflected in this article. The vivid fairy portraits support the world view of the entire story, making this fairy world no longer a thin love background, but a complete world that is real, lively, warm, pyrotechnic, and full of character. It is precisely because of the existence of these gentle and vivid supporting characters that the protagonist's growth, encounter and love are more meaningful. All the heartbeats and bonds have the warmest background. The stories of these fairies include gentle redemption, regretful relief, and persistence in the original intention. They are independent and sober, gentle and powerful, which not only enriches the plot level, but also opens up the whole pattern of the article in an instant. It is no longer limited to the small love between two people, but has a sense of tenderness in the world and the atmosphere of all living things, making the story sweet, warm, warm and deep. All in all, this is a high-quality article with excellent writing, full characters, and a gentle and healing plot. The gentle and delicate text, the long-lasting two-way secret love, and the vivid and three-dimensional group portraits constitute the gentle character of this article. I am very grateful to the author for his careful creation. The restrained foreshadowing in the early stage, the delicate characterization, and the full world view can all be seen as full of sincerity. I really look forward to the follow-up plot in which the two protagonists completely open their hearts and fall in love with each other, and I also look forward to seeing more exciting stories of the characters. This article is worth reading carefully, pondering over and over again, and it deserves to be seen by more people! I will always stay tuned for updates and give you my full support!