The poor girl has bravely entered the online literature world. Please forgive me for the slow update. I have classes during the day and self-study at night. I am really busy. XX Gorgeous rhetoric is my style. I will slowly change it. After all, I am a newcomer. Please bear with me, hehe.
The title of the book and the names of the male and female protagonists are taken from "What is the reason for the world, Guanfeng and Yueshu". This book is also called "My senior sister is a heartthrob!"
Secret love literature + long-awaited reunion + female protagonist + pure love + group portrait + fantasy cultivation (except for special periods, the male protagonist cannot defeat the female protagonist, so the female protagonist is strong. The story also revolves around the growth of the female protagonist. The female protagonist is easy to control. The early stage is unfolded from the perspective of the male protagonist, and the middle and later stages are unfolded from the perspective of the female protagonist.)
It is said that in a distant place, there is a continent called Yanchuan Continent. This continent is full of spiritual energy, nourishing all living things. In the continuous evolution of nature, the Yanchuan continent was gradually divided into
The territory of the human race - He Ning, the territory of the demon race - Wanhua, was originally a peaceful coexistence and a good situation. However, due to the uneven resources inherited by the human and demon tribes from their ancestors, and the blurred border division between the two tribes, the first human-monster war finally broke out after many years of friction! The war lasted so long and its scope was unprecedented. Even though the demon clan possesses demon power and is highly capable, they are not as resourceful and tactically flexible as humans. In the end, the human race successfully signed the "Geng Shu Xin Chou Tribute Treaty", which forced the demon clan to cede land and pay compensation, forcibly divided the demon clan into two categories: good demons and evil demons, and stipulated that good demons and evil demons could not mix. These two provisions aroused the collective indignation of the demon clan. The war is over though. But the seeds of racial hatred have quietly sprouted...
Therefore, it is self-preservation. The predecessors of the human race devoted themselves to the study of immortal magic, and finally lived up to their expectations and established a series of immortal cultivation systems to compete with the demon clan. As for those who practice immortality, there are also people with evil intentions. The road to becoming an immortal is long, and success is hard to come by. So a disciple of the immortal sect, in order to take a shortcut, discovered a set of magic cultivation methods that made rapid progress but required human life. At this point, the human race Hening, the demon race Wanhua (the good demons were forced to live together with the human race), the immortal race, and the demon race Xuexu, stood on four pillars. The wheel of history is rolling forward, and their story is slowly beginning...
Concept: ups and downs of the story line, novel and exaggerated settings. While praising the pure and beautiful love between the male and female protagonists, it also calls for peace, attention to racial issues, and coordination of racial conflicts.
Reader comments
After reading one chapter, I feel that the author's writing style is very good, but the writing is too docile and I have no desire to read on. The text can be more concise and does not need to be too gorgeous. I hope the author will get better and better [Make Me Kangkang]
A lot of places are just piled up with gorgeous words, which makes it uncomfortable to read and has no sense of beauty. The literary foundation should be improved. Moreover, there are too many foreshadowings and descriptions of other minor characters, which affects the perception of the original plot. Well... The author should settle down more. I feel that there are too many fragmentary thoughts. Please focus more on the work. Come on~
It feels like the author is planning something big and big.
It's just that this fire is a bit far-fetched. Why did Liniang put a lamp? That candle flame will definitely burn Mo Mo to death.
If the two of them had noticed it in advance, they could have avoided this disaster by simply destroying it.
And why the candle was knocked over? Who knocked it over? Was it someone from outside? But I didn't see it.
Was Grandpa Wu's death part of the prisoner's plan, or was it an accident?
The most important thing is, who wants to kill Mo Mo. Grandpa Wu said he was the Ninth Prince, but why? Just because Mo Mo looked like his mother. If this is the case, dealing with one is almost a
Why did slave Mo Mo have to use fire in such a troublesome way?
Even if he strangled him with his own hands, it would feel more reasonable and deepen the image of the Ninth Prince.
If done well here, it can be a highlight of the plot, but if it is messed up, it will be a failure.
The character of Grandpa Wu feels like the author is trying to make him a profound character with a story. But there are only a few hundred words about him directly, and then he dies inexplicably.
He died immediately after explaining the background. This tool is very breathtaking.
It seems to appear just to give the protagonist a reason to go to Lingyu Peak.
This makes his sacrifice light.
Also because of the lack of characterization, his rescue of Mo Mo feels a bit strange.
There are also some passages where the author feels that he is explaining rather than describing. Write down a definition for someone, and that's what he is.
Why did Mo Mo lose his memory? The author should write later. But without mentioning anything, it still seemed a bit stiff.
Some passages are sensational but too deliberate. It reads as if it is forcing the reader to resonate with it.
Even though I say this, I still feel that the author put a lot of thought into it.
The characters speak very naturally and the writing is pretty good.
It feels like the author is using a literary method to create online articles.
I'm sorry if the author feels uncomfortable after seeing this. But when I first saw the introduction and preface and the brief introduction of the characters' names, I was really surprised. The author really loves the characters he writes. So when I read the text, I couldn't help but want to look more carefully.
The author must keep updating, I will keep following up.
I believe the author will write better and better!
After reading one chapter, I feel that the author's writing style is very good, but the writing is too docile and I have no desire to read on. The text can be more concise and does not need to be too gorgeous. I hope the author will get better and better [Make Me Kangkang]
A lot of places are just piled up with gorgeous words, which makes it uncomfortable to read and has no sense of beauty. The literary foundation should be improved. Moreover, there are too many foreshadowings and descriptions of other minor characters, which affects the perception of the original plot. Well... The author should settle down more. I feel that there are too many fragmentary thoughts. Please focus more on the work. Come on~
It feels like the author is planning something big and big. It's just that this fire is a bit far-fetched. Why did Liniang put a lamp? That candle flame will definitely burn Mo Mo to death. If the two of them had noticed it in advance, they could have avoided this disaster by simply destroying it. And why the candle was knocked over? Who knocked it over? Was it someone from outside? But I didn't see it. Was Grandpa Wu's death part of the prisoner's plan, or was it an accident? The most important thing is, who wants to kill Mo Mo. Grandpa Wu said he was the Ninth Prince, but why? Just because Mo Mo looked like his mother. If this is the case, dealing with one is almost a Why did slave Mo Mo have to use fire in such a troublesome way? Even if he strangled him with his own hands, it would feel more reasonable and deepen the image of the Ninth Prince. If done well here, it can be a highlight of the plot, but if it is messed up, it will be a failure. The character of Grandpa Wu feels like the author is trying to make him a profound character with a story. But there are only a few hundred words about him directly, and then he dies inexplicably. He died immediately after explaining the background. This tool is very breathtaking. It seems to appear just to give the protagonist a reason to go to Lingyu Peak. This makes his sacrifice light. Also because of the lack of characterization, his rescue of Mo Mo feels a bit strange. There are also some passages where the author feels that he is explaining rather than describing. Write down a definition for someone, and that's what he is. Why did Mo Mo lose his memory? The author should write later. But without mentioning anything, it still seemed a bit stiff. Some passages are sensational but too deliberate. It reads as if it is forcing the reader to resonate with it. Even though I say this, I still feel that the author put a lot of thought into it. The characters speak very naturally and the writing is pretty good. It feels like the author is using a literary method to create online articles. I'm sorry if the author feels uncomfortable after seeing this. But when I first saw the introduction and preface and the brief introduction of the characters' names, I was really surprised. The author really loves the characters he writes. So when I read the text, I couldn't help but want to look more carefully. The author must keep updating, I will keep following up. I believe the author will write better and better!