［ [Bu Jingyun X Nie Feng] the Situation Is Wrong ［步惊云X聂风］风云错 by Yanxiao (妍笑) StatusCompletedLength2k WordsChapters1GenreDanmei (BL)EraAncient EraUpdated15y agoSourceJJWXC Request a translation Stats 57Favorites15.6kClicks / chapter12Comments Tags ThemeEastern FanworksPOVBottom-Lead (Shou)Age13+AngstMartial ArtsSerious Drama Synopsis The second fragment of the "Wind and Cloud" fan series. Conception: Show more Reader comments 加油！总觉得大大描写人物的行为语气现代感太重，都木有汉朝时代感。还有大人这个称呼在那时是父亲的意思。女主称卫青为将军或君侯都比大人合适。历史小说不是那种架空古言什么朝代想法可以随意穿插，既然是汉朝你就要把汉朝时代感写出来。Show moreWell written, but it's a pity that there is no more contentShow more Load more comments More by this author ［ [The Legend of Zhen Huan | Wei Wen] Unparalleled Yanxiao ［ [Peerless Twins｜yanjiang] Romantic Night Yanxiao ［ [Yang Jian Yanxiao ［ [Yitian | Xiaoting] What Can I Do in This Life? Yanxiao ［ [Xiao Li Flying Knife | Huan Zhuo] Qing Deng Xing Yanxiao ［ [Xiao Li's Flying Knife|double Li] Past Mistakes Yanxiao ［ [Yitian｜xiaoting] One Night in the World Yanxiao ［ [Sneak Love]'s Sister Yanxiao ［ [Crooked Love] Lover Yanxiao ［ [Shaobao San | Pang Zhan] Ten Years Yanxiao ［ [Xiao Li Fei Dao | Huan Zhuo] Let's Grow Old Together and Cherish the Passing Years Yanxiao ［ [Wulin Foreign History | King Shen] Young Master Lianhua Yanxiao
加油！总觉得大大描写人物的行为语气现代感太重，都木有汉朝时代感。还有大人这个称呼在那时是父亲的意思。女主称卫青为将军或君侯都比大人合适。历史小说不是那种架空古言什么朝代想法可以随意穿插，既然是汉朝你就要把汉朝时代感写出来。Show more
加油！总觉得大大描写人物的行为语气现代感太重，都木有汉朝时代感。还有大人这个称呼在那时是父亲的意思。女主称卫青为将军或君侯都比大人合适。历史小说不是那种架空古言什么朝代想法可以随意穿插，既然是汉朝你就要把汉朝时代感写出来。
Well written, but it's a pity that there is no more content