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Haha, I accidentally broke jq again.
It turns out that my uncle and sister-in-law are having an affair!
Have you finished reading? Ryoko, hurry up and update.
Ha
Chinese BGM on the tip of the tongue——
Xiaoliang~ Come and add some oil! ! ! Scatter flowers
The child suggested that two chapters be merged into one. 0 0 There is an event in one chapter... This makes everyone happy~!
It's actually in the first person, so it's hard to write... This is why I like this article.
It can be seen that the author's writing style has become more and more pure, and I hope to continue to do so.
I think Feng Ke is a good name~~ I just hope the author doesn't write the kind of wavering heroine^^
"Fengqi Ballad"->(review article)
He knew it was me from the beginning.
My heart tightened with discomfort: "If I had known that it would be such a stumbling block to people's hearts, why would I not have known each other in the first place? Don't you still know what kind of person I am?"
I still couldn't help but sigh when I saw this.
It is not easy to get to know each other, but Gu Mochen appears in the middle. In fact, most readers have preconceived notions. I think I like Menglu very much.
The connection to the second chapter of "Innocent Heart" (1) of "Confusion and Confusion" (7) requires a little more effort than reading it. We are just readers and will not bother to read it.
, If you don't understand, you just can't understand. The main thing is that the point of recall is in the transition. If you are not careful, you will feel confused.
But there is no doubt that the author's writing style is very good.
Overall, the development is very slow, and the plot is still good. When I first started watching it, I thought it was pretty good. But when I see the back, I feel a little uncomfortable
Thoughts on watching it again. Meng Lu's broken leg is also relatively vague.
Some of the characters in the article are very good, but some are not satisfactory. For example, the heroine, because it is written in the first person, at least I ignore it.
If it falls out of the heroine's character, when I think about the heroine later, I will suddenly feel as if she has been covered with a veil, making her look blurry.
The number of words in this article is not very large, but I feel that there are quite a lot of characters in it. This makes me feel that I haven't remembered this person yet, and suddenly another one appears.
It started to confuse my memory, it went too fast, and the only thing I remembered was the male and female protagonist, Meng Lu. Mo Shen's mother, but I don't remember the name or the inside
A little princess, but I can't remember the name. Finally, there is a Mei Po. That Yun Qi and Qin Tian, I can't tell who is who now, but judging from their characters
I can tell them clearly, just know their names.
From the appearance of Gu Mochen. Until Feng Ke appeared in the military camp. The change is too fast. It would make more sense if Meng Lu was the male protagonist. Mainly due to Mo Chen's sudden appearance to the girl
There was not a lot of time between the Lord's departure and his departure, and there was no particularly memorable incident to give readers a heavy brush.
As for the relationship between Tao Gu and Mo Chen, it's a little vague. They say they are lovers, but Mo Chen seems to be less interested in her than the heroine, but they are not lovers.
, What is written in the article is only in the readers' imagination.
He is as good a person as Menglu, so I still like Menglu more. The plot is not in-depth enough for the author to remember it after reading it. I remember
It was the word "Feng Ke" that Feng Ke embroidered on Mo Chen's clothes when Feng Ke and Mo Chen left.
I hope the author will not be discouraged. This article also has its merits. First, the writing is good. Second, this is a long-lasting little warmth, but the only flaw is that the plot is not too engaging.
Fascinating. But the writing is quite coherent and smooth. Third, the details described make people feel particularly warm and clean.
Maybe I'm used to watching it on my mobile phone, so it's particularly uncomfortable to watch it on the computer. Finish writing well. Readers' comments are just comments, don't be influenced by them in any way.
If it affects your mood in writing, otherwise you will lose more than you gain, so let's stop commenting here. When you finish writing, I will download it to my phone and read it carefully.
Why did I become uneasy after hearing this? %? Ж…! +10086 I can't calm down anymore when someone suddenly comes to me.
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Ami, why don't you let me make a guest appearance?
Someone's birthday is coming
Haha
I must admit that the opening chapter of A Liang is not amazing. The wedge and the first chapter, I read it as a recreational article. I will find good parts, but it is not my favorite kind. But when I read the second chapter, I started to sit upright. I really like those delicate things. Even if I buy a pair of jeans, I will always pay attention to the light brown lines on the pockets. I will always be moved by some inexplicable and small things.
[But he chuckled, testing the temperature of the earthen pot with his fingertips, and prepared a bowl for the medicine: "As long as dad hears your name, all anger will disappear."] When I got to this sentence, I started to like it. It didn't mean that the elder gave up his identity and spoke to the child's beloved child as a first-class pampering. That was enough.
[I stared at the medicine in the bowl and said nothing for a long time. If I leave, who will accompany grandpa, who will cook medicine and heat the stove for him? In troubled times, surviving is a matter of luck. When you can slowly describe something, you will have such a state of mind, not overjoyed or sad, but sighing, pity, not necessarily pity for others, maybe for yourself. This kind of thinking can only be such a pure sigh when you only have pure feelings. Because you understand, you like it very much.
The reason why I don't like many articles is that they often lack words and describe everything in a superficial and formal way. But when I see the descriptions here, I immediately feel that Feng Ke and Gu Mochen are complete strangers. I need the author's guidance to get to know them. Compared with Meng Lie, I I like Gu Mochen more because he is more lively and can stay with the heroine better. It is a feeling. I feel that Menglie should only be remembered quietly in her midnight dreams, but Gu Mochen can be pulled in front of him at any time, abused, frowning, and short-tempered. In short, he can be very close.
[This courtyard seems to have nothing to do with the world, nor does it have anything to do with smoke and gunpowder. Clean and translucent. When I saw this paragraph, I planned to write a long review for Ah Liang. I have seen more beautiful adjectives than this, and I have seen more beautiful scenes than this, but this is my favorite scene, that clean and clear place that has nothing to do with the world, I yearn for it.
Ah Liang's story structure and control of the characters are very good, but her writing style is my favorite, so I won't comment on the rest. I just read Chapter 5, and I was so anxious to write a long review, so I won't say more. This is a very good and calming article, and every description can make people smile or think of many things, so I wrote a long review.
PS, in the end I still can't help but complain, Ah Liang, your copywriting is too bloody, it's not your writing style at all, please change it, haha...
Haha, I accidentally broke jq again.
It turns out that my uncle and sister-in-law are having an affair!
Have you finished reading? Ryoko, hurry up and update.
Ha
Chinese BGM on the tip of the tongue——
Xiaoliang~ Come and add some oil! ! ! Scatter flowers
The child suggested that two chapters be merged into one. 0 0 There is an event in one chapter... This makes everyone happy~!
It's actually in the first person, so it's hard to write... This is why I like this article.
It can be seen that the author's writing style has become more and more pure, and I hope to continue to do so.
I think Feng Ke is a good name~~ I just hope the author doesn't write the kind of wavering heroine^^
"Fengqi Ballad"->(review article) He knew it was me from the beginning. My heart tightened with discomfort: "If I had known that it would be such a stumbling block to people's hearts, why would I not have known each other in the first place? Don't you still know what kind of person I am?" I still couldn't help but sigh when I saw this. It is not easy to get to know each other, but Gu Mochen appears in the middle. In fact, most readers have preconceived notions. I think I like Menglu very much. The connection to the second chapter of "Innocent Heart" (1) of "Confusion and Confusion" (7) requires a little more effort than reading it. We are just readers and will not bother to read it. , If you don't understand, you just can't understand. The main thing is that the point of recall is in the transition. If you are not careful, you will feel confused. But there is no doubt that the author's writing style is very good. Overall, the development is very slow, and the plot is still good. When I first started watching it, I thought it was pretty good. But when I see the back, I feel a little uncomfortable Thoughts on watching it again. Meng Lu's broken leg is also relatively vague. Some of the characters in the article are very good, but some are not satisfactory. For example, the heroine, because it is written in the first person, at least I ignore it. If it falls out of the heroine's character, when I think about the heroine later, I will suddenly feel as if she has been covered with a veil, making her look blurry. The number of words in this article is not very large, but I feel that there are quite a lot of characters in it. This makes me feel that I haven't remembered this person yet, and suddenly another one appears. It started to confuse my memory, it went too fast, and the only thing I remembered was the male and female protagonist, Meng Lu. Mo Shen's mother, but I don't remember the name or the inside A little princess, but I can't remember the name. Finally, there is a Mei Po. That Yun Qi and Qin Tian, I can't tell who is who now, but judging from their characters I can tell them clearly, just know their names. From the appearance of Gu Mochen. Until Feng Ke appeared in the military camp. The change is too fast. It would make more sense if Meng Lu was the male protagonist. Mainly due to Mo Chen's sudden appearance to the girl There was not a lot of time between the Lord's departure and his departure, and there was no particularly memorable incident to give readers a heavy brush. As for the relationship between Tao Gu and Mo Chen, it's a little vague. They say they are lovers, but Mo Chen seems to be less interested in her than the heroine, but they are not lovers. , What is written in the article is only in the readers' imagination. He is as good a person as Menglu, so I still like Menglu more. The plot is not in-depth enough for the author to remember it after reading it. I remember It was the word "Feng Ke" that Feng Ke embroidered on Mo Chen's clothes when Feng Ke and Mo Chen left. I hope the author will not be discouraged. This article also has its merits. First, the writing is good. Second, this is a long-lasting little warmth, but the only flaw is that the plot is not too engaging. Fascinating. But the writing is quite coherent and smooth. Third, the details described make people feel particularly warm and clean. Maybe I'm used to watching it on my mobile phone, so it's particularly uncomfortable to watch it on the computer. Finish writing well. Readers' comments are just comments, don't be influenced by them in any way. If it affects your mood in writing, otherwise you will lose more than you gain, so let's stop commenting here. When you finish writing, I will download it to my phone and read it carefully.
Why did I become uneasy after hearing this? %? Ж…! +10086 I can't calm down anymore when someone suddenly comes to me.
Leave a message Leave a message... Ami, why don't you let me make a guest appearance? Someone's birthday is coming Haha
I must admit that the opening chapter of A Liang is not amazing. The wedge and the first chapter, I read it as a recreational article. I will find good parts, but it is not my favorite kind. But when I read the second chapter, I started to sit upright. I really like those delicate things. Even if I buy a pair of jeans, I will always pay attention to the light brown lines on the pockets. I will always be moved by some inexplicable and small things. [But he chuckled, testing the temperature of the earthen pot with his fingertips, and prepared a bowl for the medicine: "As long as dad hears your name, all anger will disappear."] When I got to this sentence, I started to like it. It didn't mean that the elder gave up his identity and spoke to the child's beloved child as a first-class pampering. That was enough. [I stared at the medicine in the bowl and said nothing for a long time. If I leave, who will accompany grandpa, who will cook medicine and heat the stove for him? In troubled times, surviving is a matter of luck. When you can slowly describe something, you will have such a state of mind, not overjoyed or sad, but sighing, pity, not necessarily pity for others, maybe for yourself. This kind of thinking can only be such a pure sigh when you only have pure feelings. Because you understand, you like it very much. The reason why I don't like many articles is that they often lack words and describe everything in a superficial and formal way. But when I see the descriptions here, I immediately feel that Feng Ke and Gu Mochen are complete strangers. I need the author's guidance to get to know them. Compared with Meng Lie, I I like Gu Mochen more because he is more lively and can stay with the heroine better. It is a feeling. I feel that Menglie should only be remembered quietly in her midnight dreams, but Gu Mochen can be pulled in front of him at any time, abused, frowning, and short-tempered. In short, he can be very close. [This courtyard seems to have nothing to do with the world, nor does it have anything to do with smoke and gunpowder. Clean and translucent. When I saw this paragraph, I planned to write a long review for Ah Liang. I have seen more beautiful adjectives than this, and I have seen more beautiful scenes than this, but this is my favorite scene, that clean and clear place that has nothing to do with the world, I yearn for it. Ah Liang's story structure and control of the characters are very good, but her writing style is my favorite, so I won't comment on the rest. I just read Chapter 5, and I was so anxious to write a long review, so I won't say more. This is a very good and calming article, and every description can make people smile or think of many things, so I wrote a long review. PS, in the end I still can't help but complain, Ah Liang, your copywriting is too bloody, it's not your writing style at all, please change it, haha...
It's okay, but the plot development is too slow