Wrong Encounter

Nearly ten years later, I still can't forget this article

Great writing, keep it up!!

Please give me more quickly! I'll block it when the sky comes down Just code it

Come on, this article is very well written. Listen to what I mean, are you moving? Where to move?

Perhaps my greatest advantage is that I can afford to pick up and put down

Brief review--"Wrong Encounter" Reviewer: River Crab~Yin To be honest, when I first clicked on the author's copy, I really can't remember my feelings at the time. I only know that I clicked, exited the copy, and continued to drift away. Later, I wandered around He Xie's post office for a long time, and accidentally clicked in. I thought it was fate~ (Pfft, thank you for telling me.) So I swiped the mouse and carefully looked at the chapter titles, the summary of each chapter, and other details, etc., And found that the author may not be familiar with the organization of chapters because he is a newbie, causing problems such as "merging this chapter with the previous chapter", making the overall article look messy, making it inconvenient for readers to read the article, and affecting the "aesthetics" of the article. But this is not a big problem. So the following will be some of my opinions on "The Wrong Encounter". Well, it has mixed reviews. I hope the author and readers will forgive me if there are any shortcomings. (Start rolling up sleeves~) Copywriting---Copywriting is undoubtedly the most important. A good copywriting should be attractive. Just The author's writing seems to be pretty good. The author added red "Meeting the wrong person at the right time is a kind of sadness; meeting the right person at the wrong time is a kind of sigh." Although it is simple, it fits the title of the book very well, making readers want to find out. Chapter One---If an article wants to attract readers' attention, in addition to the engaging copy, the first chapter is also very important. From my personal point of view, the author's first chapter describes the heroine Fang Jing's work and living conditions after returning to China in a very detailed way. Well, this is pretty good. But sometimes if this "meticulousness" is not grasped well, it will lead to "procrastination" and "lengthy" consequences. The author can take appropriate suggestions in future revisions and carefully refine those paragraphs. The second half was obviously much better, so I started sliding the mouse down with some joy. So the male protagonist was "born out of the blue" when Fang Jing was frustrated, but it didn't spark sparks immediately and then the vigorous and bloody plot began to spread, but it was slowly unfolded and eloquently told. The emotional drama also begins to develop gradually, which will not make the story seem shallow. The article extensively describes the psychological activities of the heroine Fang Jing. From Fang Jing's study, life, work, love, marriage and even her attitude towards life encounters and troubles in life, it can be seen that the author spent considerable energy to carefully carve out Fang Jing's character, making her very stubborn, brave and longing for true love. As for Fang Jing's personality development, I think fairly speaking that it is generally acceptable for a fledgling character. On the other hand, there are still many shortcomings. For example, in the emotional scene with the male protagonist He Wenhao, there is too much "focus" - slow heat, which means that the reader is not made to feel a very strong emotional climax, or the emotional scene is not strong enough. Furthermore, the portrayal of various characters in the article tends to be "idealized", which makes the characters' images look too literary. Another thing is that it is too "subjective". A good article must learn to "take into account all aspects" (I am incompetent with words~), I think, think about it, you not only have to write from Fang Jing's perspective, but also take into account the indispensability of the male protagonist He Wenhao, and the second male lead. Although as the author, he has already set "who will fall", but for In order to make the plot more "thick", catch the attention of readers, and make them think about "who will embrace the beauty", and then willingly pursue it, you have to "sprinkle blood" at the right time, but you have to grasp the "degree". After all, this is a slow-burning warm-hearted novel, and the author's original intention cannot be ruined. Other minor supporting characters should also try their best to enrich their images so that the text will be full and the readers will have a sense of reality and life. After talking about the aspects that I think are lacking, let's take a look at some aspects of "The Mistake" that I think are very good. In terms of writing skills, he is very mature and has a very urban literary style. In many emotional scenes, the author creates a very warm and delicate atmosphere, as if people are bathed in sunshine. Some of the passages are very literary and artistic when read. Although they are not very cute, when you think about it, you will nod your head and say: Uh~ It's very touching. This is the warm and touching love in the noisy city. This kind of love is not soaked in the feasting and feasting of the external disturbance, so it is far away, faint, and touching. (Ignore my own word creation o(╯□╰)o) When I started reading the article, because Xiang Xiang didn't organize the text very well, I had a preconceived idea that this article would be like many authors who have just written an article. The more they write, the more biased they become, and even lose the original "backbone." I am almost at a loss for words when I write this. Haha, if there are any shortcomings in the above non-professional ideas or the author feels that he does not agree with them, I hope you will forgive me or just ignore them~~

So lively! Is this child a Cancer? I heard that Cancerians all have Oedipus...

I would like to ask what kind of gender conversion is this and where is it done?

Flowers flowers flowers flowers

No update today, I want to see the ending.

I think it's generally okay. It's my first time writing, and I'll try my best next time.

The heroine Hongxing cheats The male protagonist is waiting for Hongxing outside the wall...

Let's open a new pit... Then... Happiness is really not easy...

Write more scenes where the heroine interacts with the hero and the children.

Sofa... It's not easy to meet the right person at the right time...

Well written. I thought it was a tragedy when I read the title. Fortunately, although I encountered it at the wrong time, I didn't miss it in the end.

Flowers, flowers, flowers, dear, thank you for your hard work.

Oh my god, this is really awesome. Xinwen continues to support it.

Thank you for submitting my essay. Please rate and save it first, then sit down and read it slowly.

Good to read: Read it in one sitting...

Flowers flowers flowers flowers

Of course, the more important thing was that he didn't want to follow Fang Jing's trace too obviously, so he readily agreed to Song Rou's request. Catching insects... It must be Song Rou...