Pseudo-Complex the House of Resentment

It doesn't matter, this life is quite long

It must be changed. Our little raccoons and little green dragons cannot bear such great grievances.

If I were asked to rate it in the first quarter, I would want to give it a 5, but now I can only give a 2. The setting of this article is quite interesting, the protagonist setting is also very likable, the plot at the beginning is interesting, and the overall plot is quite enjoyable. But the more you look at it, the more obvious the shortcomings become. First of all, the author doesn't know what to choose. It can be seen that the author has carefully conceived the plot and lyrics of the article, so he wants to squeeze everything into the article without missing a beat. The result is a poor viewing experience. There is often a long section of the plot that is purely text-within-a-play, which neither advances the plot nor shows the audience's evaluation of the show or the character's performance. I'm here to read articles about the entertainment industry. If I'm interested in the subject matter of a drama within an article, I'll look for it myself. Can you please stop me reading articles on other subjects here? Moreover, the play-within-a-story is not very good. The protagonist's first play has the theme of rebirth, and the rebirth is actually placed in the middle of the plot. It feels like creating a reversal for the sake of creating a reversal. The same goes for the lyrics. Most of the lyrics were thrown into the main text at once, and I don't know why there is a space between each lyric. If you want to write lyrics when writing for the stage, don't put the entire lyrics directly. Instead, describe the character's actions + stage design + the character's psychology and mix in a few important lyrics. If you really can't let go of the lyrics, you can put the full version into the text, but it costs money to put it into the text. I just skipped it. The lyrics without the melody look very awkward and make me laugh out loud. I basically didn't read the comments when I was reading the article. I saw an explanation in the last chapter of the text but not in the hydrology. It must be that other readers have questioned this issue. I think the author is indeed not subjective, but this is really a problem. I hope the author will improve it. I can't just let readers who can accept it continue to read and leave if they can't. What's the difference between that and a traffic star? Second, in the later stage, I felt that the portrayal of the protagonist's "dedication" was a bit too strong. When I saw the protagonist insisting on performing on stage even though he was in shock and needing oxygen, I was really dramatic. In other entertainment industry articles, the most difficult way to portray a character who is dedicated is to sprain his leg/scratches/fall but insist on performing. However, in that part of the plot, I didn't feel that the protagonist was dedicated. I just felt that he really didn't care about his body at all, and felt that he had no ability to judge his own physical condition. The third point is, I don't quite understand why a plot in which the protagonist is confessed by someone else is inserted in the middle. After thinking about it, I feel that it has no purpose other than to fit the label of being a heartthrob. Finally, there is the issue of plot proportion. The draft part takes up too much, with 72 chapters out of 160 in the main text. If this is an article focusing on auditions, then there is no problem, but this is an acting article, with 160 chapters, the beginning of the first 15 chapters + shooting the first play, 72 chapters of the draft, and 9 chapters of the stage play rewards from the draft, leaving only 59 chapters to write and shoot other scenes + being exposed and clarified + becoming more popular + winning awards, and there are also a lot of dramas within the article, which seems unreasonable when you think about it. Moreover, the best part of the entertainment industry articles lies in the fights between fans and the audience's reaction. Slapping and being slapped in the face are the most interesting parts. However, there are some in this article during the draft period, and basically none after that. The ending is also extremely rushed. It doesn't matter. To be honest, I only subscribed because I wanted to rate this article. Please finish it as soon as possible. I feel sorry for my money.

OMG, this is the first time I want Shang Jia to be in power [angry]

I thought there would be more after such a long time???·(? ?????????? )??·?

It's too short, I still want to read it.

They are all lying on the same bed, and they are just sleeping. Isn't it okay?

. Come on come on! I feel like it's very well written, so sour, I felt like my whole body was being electrocuted when I read it! So comfortable ~ [Spreading Flowers] Looking forward to the update, I'm so happy to see it, it only took two days to finish it [Purple Sugar] [Orange Sugar] [Purple Sugar] I like it, I like it, please work hard! Ww I really like this type of novel, but it seems that the current public audience is not like this [crying] It took me a long time to find this article, and I am really happy😁 When I found out that the boss is still updating, it was really refreshing [rose][rose][shy][shy]

How much more is there to be finished?

Oh my god, Bai Zhi actually rebelled.

Hahahahahaha I died laughing

I still like this very much after re-reading it

Waiting for your new article^^;

Mary Sue plot~The story is progressing~ Big cheers for the author~

[Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it

I don't know how many times I've swiped it. It's so beautiful.