Time flies, and years pass by.
To this day, Kanda Yu still can't forget the last look he gave Allen before he disappeared, the look in his eyes that seemed to have already understood that such a day would come. Every time he thought of this look, he would feel an emotion that was about to come out, but he couldn't be sure if it was it. ． ． ． ． ． Love, so he thought, maybe what he couldn't forget was just the past.
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Reader comments
It also means contentment (
Oh oh oh oh I'm coming too~\\(≧▽≦)/~La la la~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Haha, prepare to stir-fry bean sprouts in the next chapter~~~~
I am so abused. Is there anything wrong? My lovely Allen. Even if he turns into Noah, I believe he will not hurt his companions.
The copywriting has a literary style,
This is the voice of the protagonist, and it is attractive to a certain extent.
But I personally think it's best to include cute points and a brief introduction to the story.
Maybe the author could add a sentence or two at the end from the protagonist's perspective as a summary.
In the first chapter, the author mostly focuses on dialogue,
And it feels like the scenes jump a little too fast, so that the plot seems to be disconnected.
Text can be used to connect scenes to each other.
The problems in Chapter 2 are similar.
Are those hey and black hearts the same styles as in the original animation?
If yes, it's no problem,
If not, it would be a bit frustrating.
Chapter 3 feels pretty good.
Maybe it's because the writing style is a little green,
So it looks a bit like white water.
In summary, the author wrote very carefully,
But the writing and plot are a little lacking.
No matter what, please support the author!
Could it be a matter of cause and effect?
Because there is no shadow Hisuhi
So I won't go back
to start a new timeline
Like this?
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It also means contentment (
Oh oh oh oh I'm coming too~\\(≧▽≦)/~La la la~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Haha, prepare to stir-fry bean sprouts in the next chapter~~~~
I am so abused. Is there anything wrong? My lovely Allen. Even if he turns into Noah, I believe he will not hurt his companions.
The copywriting has a literary style, This is the voice of the protagonist, and it is attractive to a certain extent. But I personally think it's best to include cute points and a brief introduction to the story. Maybe the author could add a sentence or two at the end from the protagonist's perspective as a summary. In the first chapter, the author mostly focuses on dialogue, And it feels like the scenes jump a little too fast, so that the plot seems to be disconnected. Text can be used to connect scenes to each other. The problems in Chapter 2 are similar. Are those hey and black hearts the same styles as in the original animation? If yes, it's no problem, If not, it would be a bit frustrating. Chapter 3 feels pretty good. Maybe it's because the writing style is a little green, So it looks a bit like white water. In summary, the author wrote very carefully, But the writing and plot are a little lacking. No matter what, please support the author!
Could it be a matter of cause and effect? Because there is no shadow Hisuhi So I won't go back to start a new timeline Like this?
This article has been reviewed. Please go to Barabala Jam Jar Shop to receive comments: //www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=767282