One of the series of ancient and modern love collisions
"The Flying Bride"
Shi Leer/Written
There is no way out in the mountains and rivers, but there is another village with dark willows and bright flowers.
Who would have thought that a girl from the 20th century would use her natural "superpower" to fly to the "distant" ancient times!
Who would have thought that she would actually have "wrong thoughts" about her "savior" and "bodyguard"!
Who would have thought that she would accidentally "get" a "thief" from the twentieth century!
But - what will she gain?
Is it a man? Or——
(Note: Because it is a fabrication, the history and customs contained in it cannot be trusted.)
(This story is purely fictitious and any similarity is purely coincidental.)
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This is a virgin work written by a little girl at the age of 18.
The writing is immature, please forgive me~
Since I have finished the manuscript, I am now redoubling my efforts to turn it into an electronic version~
Publishing this article is also a dream come true. I hope my readers will be more than just classmates and friends. Hehe~ I hope it is not an extravagant wish~
Here, the author is squatting in the corner, drawing circles and praying~~~~Please comment, please collect, please not let go, please not abandon~~~ Holding fists in gratitude~~~
Intention:
Reader comments
To be honest, reading the whole story, it was too Mary Sue. The plot is a typical romance novel routine.
High school students may like to read this kind of novel, but older people simply think it is a thunderbolt. . .
It's just your work as the author, so I think you'd better keep working hard!
I would like to make some comments:
1. Look at the works on JJ that are rigorously written and have complete story structures. Such as: Escape from the World, etc.
2 If you take the Mary Sue route, I won't mention it for now. But if you don't take the Mary Sue route, you must pay attention to the description and shaping of the storyline and characters. The route of the female protagonist and male protagonist in romance novels that cannot be formatted. To be clear, the characters must have flesh and blood.
3. For the development of the story, there must be a line, such as time travel → what to do next → after stabilization, the development of the plot → step-by-step story tally →...
For example, if you travel through time, for example A, silver was a relatively valuable circulation tool in ancient times. In the Tang Dynasty, 1 tael of silver was equal to approximately 10,000 RMB, and in the Qing Dynasty, it was approximately equal to 2,000 RMB. The story in the article is from the Ming Dynasty, so it should be about 4,000 to 5,000 yuan.
Another example is B, road guide and household registration. How come a parachute person doesn't have an "ID card" to go to the county government office when he gets married? OTL. Be careful of the Jinyiwei of Dongchang and Westchang in the Ming Dynasty = =+
All of the above.
All need to be carefully considered. If you travel through time at will and still do well, you will be like Mary Su Tianlei.
Work hard! When a novice writes, there will always be one or two articles. Haha, I hope you will get better and better as you write.
Www I like this article so much. I feel heartbroken when I read the 17-year-old article?
To be honest, reading the whole story, it was too Mary Sue. The plot is a typical romance novel routine. High school students may like to read this kind of novel, but older people simply think it is a thunderbolt. . . It's just your work as the author, so I think you'd better keep working hard! I would like to make some comments: 1. Look at the works on JJ that are rigorously written and have complete story structures. Such as: Escape from the World, etc. 2 If you take the Mary Sue route, I won't mention it for now. But if you don't take the Mary Sue route, you must pay attention to the description and shaping of the storyline and characters. The route of the female protagonist and male protagonist in romance novels that cannot be formatted. To be clear, the characters must have flesh and blood. 3. For the development of the story, there must be a line, such as time travel → what to do next → after stabilization, the development of the plot → step-by-step story tally →... For example, if you travel through time, for example A, silver was a relatively valuable circulation tool in ancient times. In the Tang Dynasty, 1 tael of silver was equal to approximately 10,000 RMB, and in the Qing Dynasty, it was approximately equal to 2,000 RMB. The story in the article is from the Ming Dynasty, so it should be about 4,000 to 5,000 yuan. Another example is B, road guide and household registration. How come a parachute person doesn't have an "ID card" to go to the county government office when he gets married? OTL. Be careful of the Jinyiwei of Dongchang and Westchang in the Ming Dynasty = =+ All of the above. All need to be carefully considered. If you travel through time at will and still do well, you will be like Mary Su Tianlei. Work hard! When a novice writes, there will always be one or two articles. Haha, I hope you will get better and better as you write.
Www I like this article so much. I feel heartbroken when I read the 17-year-old article?