These days, Wei Xiaobao is not the only one who has such a happy life.
Missing her Yun Dabao, I don't know what kind of bad luck she had.
The beautiful men are falling down one after another,
The two thatched huts in the house that collapsed are becoming increasingly unsustainable...
Ps: Hui Chang Hui is always grateful to Miss Moer (Yi Mo Ge) for painting the cover of Nujia with her own hands. Hui Chang is grateful~~~~~
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It's over so soon, let's have some sweet extras after the wedding.
So awesome! ! Xiaoqi, can you kill your unscrupulous stepmother by the way?
I had promised to marry Haiyun before, so I decided to let today's update go back to my parents' home~
This is the first heroine article I have read (I have never read the heroine OTL because it is easy to envy, jealousy, resentment, and hatred towards the heroine...), And I read it at first, not because of personal preference, but to understand the five top husbands in Haiyunqin =-=... When I first accepted Haiyunqin's character design, I just took it for granted, and ended up painting the awkward and arrogant Lie Qi as a pure man... I can't bear to look back... But then Haiyunqin was willing to ask me to draw the cover! ! Tears well up! ! So, in order to repay Mr. Haiyun's trust, I drew five beautiful men with different styles (won't they be disabled in the end =-=), and I started chasing the first heroine in my life (Hey! Please make up the word count!)...
In order to understand the characteristics of the five beautiful men, I have been watching them one after another, and with most of the day today, I finally caught up with the progress. After sorting out my thoughts, I came up with this review (complaint?!).
The opening wedge is a very classic pre-travel memory, WELL, I can already see Dabao GN's desire for beautiful men... Haiyunqin's writing style is reflected very quickly. After one chapter, it has basically settled on a lighter tone (although there are a lot of sadistic stories in the back...), Although it is not amazing, but at least you won't click X directly after reading the wedge...
Regarding the time-travel aspect of the article, it entered very quickly without any feeling of procrastination. This is already a very good start (those who once reviewed QDNP's time-travel article were very happy to express their joy...), And the encounter with the first male protagonist, Young Master, was also very natural - although the fact that Liu Chen appeared first made me a little surprised. In terms of plot, the scene where the heroine helps the hero in trouble is not new, but what is rare is that Haiyun used his own writing to write an old story with a sour and warm feeling, which requires a lot of writing power. But one thing I want to complain about is that Dabao GN came to another world for the first time and took the initiative to help Liu Chen when he saw his situation. This was no problem, but Qin Haiyun suddenly said: "It wasn't until he entered "Qingbi City" and saw almost all female walkers on the street that Yun Dabao finally completely accepted from his heart that this is a society where women are respected." Well, in this way, before entering Qingbi City, Dabao was entangled with his own time travel, but once he arrived in the city, this entanglement disappeared? This... Is it the road leading to Qingbi City that is so magical or is it that the female walkers in the city make Dabao so happy...
I think Haiyunqin's intention is to highlight Dabao's adaptability so that the story can enter the next stage, but the logical disconnect here is a bit abrupt. How the protagonist accepts the fact that he has time traveled is also a key point in time travel stories, so I'm a little confused~~~
The written plot is relatively smooth. The male protagonists appear one after another and have intersections and entanglements with Dabao. Although, as a netizen commented below, the relationship between the characters is too convoluted, looks a bit messy and a bit long-winded, but I think this is because the emotional structure laid out by Haiyun is relatively large. In fact, one of the outstanding features of the article is that Hai Yunqin dares to let multiple relationships revolve around the heroine at the same time (people who are incompetent in this regard look up to him...). This way it does not read as thin and childish as the script (personal preference, please don't criticize), but it also creates the flaw of messy emotional lines. Well, there is still room for improvement for everyone, and this is also Haiyunqin's first female protagonist. It is already great to be able to handle it to this level. Just pay attention to this aspect in the next writing.
Another thing I want to complain about is the relationship between the male protagonists and the female protagonists. This seems to be a common flaw in this type of novel, that is, the male protagonists seem to like the female protagonist because she is a female protagonist. Well, I confess, this point... Was often the reason why I flipped my desk during the week of painting the cover OTL... Of course, it can be seen that Haiyunqin has tried his best to weaken this sense of incongruity. For example, Liu Chen's feelings for Dabao were described in a more natural way, and Shen Yuan's struggle was also well written. Even though the reasons for the male protagonists' feelings were still lacking, in the subsequent development of the relationship, Haiyunqin's remedies were very effective. Well, I'm a little bit fussy... So I'd better bring it up~
Let's spread flowers next~
It can be said that this article made me have a big change in my view of female deities. There is not much difficulty in reading it (although when it comes to men having children, I... Look to the sky...), And I am very fond of the sadistic part! ! ! I am a control over text and sadness! ! (Being whipped away) and meaty control! (Hey!!!) So dear Haiyun, you know... Hehehehe~~~~~~
Finally, I wish Haiyunqin's articles become more and more prosperous~ The more I write, the happier I am~ And I give my highest respect to Nai for sticking to her promise~~~~ (This word count should be enough, right? I have only written a 500-word long review of QD, which means it is very stressful...)
If you have time to complain here, why not hurry up and update Wenwen~! Be careful with me~~hem~~
You really won't give up, right?
Anger, not like this, so many foreshadowings
How could it end like this? ! It can't be like this.
I only discovered this article recently and I really think it is well written. Why didn't the author pick it up and continue writing it for so long? At least there are many people who are looking forward to it and hope not to disappoint us. I read the comments and the author said that he would write a second part. Although it has been a long time now, I still believe in it. After all, I promised that I will continue to believe in it. The only pity is that it took so long to find this article.
Damn it, ahhhhhhh, I want Shen Yuan, ahhhhhh, sit down and come back and write for me! ! ! ! I knew you were trying to trick me, but I jumped down and watched it and gave you two points. Please come back.
I like it very much and have been looking forward to the author coming back to continue finishing it.
Why is it over? 5555, Author, why don't you bully people like this...
This is the end of the first part, there should be a second part, right? !
It's over so soon, let's have some sweet extras after the wedding.
So awesome! ! Xiaoqi, can you kill your unscrupulous stepmother by the way?
I had promised to marry Haiyun before, so I decided to let today's update go back to my parents' home~ This is the first heroine article I have read (I have never read the heroine OTL because it is easy to envy, jealousy, resentment, and hatred towards the heroine...), And I read it at first, not because of personal preference, but to understand the five top husbands in Haiyunqin =-=... When I first accepted Haiyunqin's character design, I just took it for granted, and ended up painting the awkward and arrogant Lie Qi as a pure man... I can't bear to look back... But then Haiyunqin was willing to ask me to draw the cover! ! Tears well up! ! So, in order to repay Mr. Haiyun's trust, I drew five beautiful men with different styles (won't they be disabled in the end =-=), and I started chasing the first heroine in my life (Hey! Please make up the word count!)... In order to understand the characteristics of the five beautiful men, I have been watching them one after another, and with most of the day today, I finally caught up with the progress. After sorting out my thoughts, I came up with this review (complaint?!). The opening wedge is a very classic pre-travel memory, WELL, I can already see Dabao GN's desire for beautiful men... Haiyunqin's writing style is reflected very quickly. After one chapter, it has basically settled on a lighter tone (although there are a lot of sadistic stories in the back...), Although it is not amazing, but at least you won't click X directly after reading the wedge... Regarding the time-travel aspect of the article, it entered very quickly without any feeling of procrastination. This is already a very good start (those who once reviewed QDNP's time-travel article were very happy to express their joy...), And the encounter with the first male protagonist, Young Master, was also very natural - although the fact that Liu Chen appeared first made me a little surprised. In terms of plot, the scene where the heroine helps the hero in trouble is not new, but what is rare is that Haiyun used his own writing to write an old story with a sour and warm feeling, which requires a lot of writing power. But one thing I want to complain about is that Dabao GN came to another world for the first time and took the initiative to help Liu Chen when he saw his situation. This was no problem, but Qin Haiyun suddenly said: "It wasn't until he entered "Qingbi City" and saw almost all female walkers on the street that Yun Dabao finally completely accepted from his heart that this is a society where women are respected." Well, in this way, before entering Qingbi City, Dabao was entangled with his own time travel, but once he arrived in the city, this entanglement disappeared? This... Is it the road leading to Qingbi City that is so magical or is it that the female walkers in the city make Dabao so happy... I think Haiyunqin's intention is to highlight Dabao's adaptability so that the story can enter the next stage, but the logical disconnect here is a bit abrupt. How the protagonist accepts the fact that he has time traveled is also a key point in time travel stories, so I'm a little confused~~~ The written plot is relatively smooth. The male protagonists appear one after another and have intersections and entanglements with Dabao. Although, as a netizen commented below, the relationship between the characters is too convoluted, looks a bit messy and a bit long-winded, but I think this is because the emotional structure laid out by Haiyun is relatively large. In fact, one of the outstanding features of the article is that Hai Yunqin dares to let multiple relationships revolve around the heroine at the same time (people who are incompetent in this regard look up to him...). This way it does not read as thin and childish as the script (personal preference, please don't criticize), but it also creates the flaw of messy emotional lines. Well, there is still room for improvement for everyone, and this is also Haiyunqin's first female protagonist. It is already great to be able to handle it to this level. Just pay attention to this aspect in the next writing. Another thing I want to complain about is the relationship between the male protagonists and the female protagonists. This seems to be a common flaw in this type of novel, that is, the male protagonists seem to like the female protagonist because she is a female protagonist. Well, I confess, this point... Was often the reason why I flipped my desk during the week of painting the cover OTL... Of course, it can be seen that Haiyunqin has tried his best to weaken this sense of incongruity. For example, Liu Chen's feelings for Dabao were described in a more natural way, and Shen Yuan's struggle was also well written. Even though the reasons for the male protagonists' feelings were still lacking, in the subsequent development of the relationship, Haiyunqin's remedies were very effective. Well, I'm a little bit fussy... So I'd better bring it up~ Let's spread flowers next~ It can be said that this article made me have a big change in my view of female deities. There is not much difficulty in reading it (although when it comes to men having children, I... Look to the sky...), And I am very fond of the sadistic part! ! ! I am a control over text and sadness! ! (Being whipped away) and meaty control! (Hey!!!) So dear Haiyun, you know... Hehehehe~~~~~~ Finally, I wish Haiyunqin's articles become more and more prosperous~ The more I write, the happier I am~ And I give my highest respect to Nai for sticking to her promise~~~~ (This word count should be enough, right? I have only written a 500-word long review of QD, which means it is very stressful...)
If you have time to complain here, why not hurry up and update Wenwen~! Be careful with me~~hem~~
You really won't give up, right?
Anger, not like this, so many foreshadowings
How could it end like this? ! It can't be like this.
I only discovered this article recently and I really think it is well written. Why didn't the author pick it up and continue writing it for so long? At least there are many people who are looking forward to it and hope not to disappoint us. I read the comments and the author said that he would write a second part. Although it has been a long time now, I still believe in it. After all, I promised that I will continue to believe in it. The only pity is that it took so long to find this article.
Damn it, ahhhhhhh, I want Shen Yuan, ahhhhhh, sit down and come back and write for me! ! ! ! I knew you were trying to trick me, but I jumped down and watched it and gave you two points. Please come back.
I like it very much and have been looking forward to the author coming back to continue finishing it.
Why is it over? 5555, Author, why don't you bully people like this...
This is the end of the first part, there should be a second part, right? !
I was shocked... Why did it become the end? !