The story of a Hueco Mundo Arrancar who traveled to Meteor Street and became a ten-year-old kid, and the kid's colorful and happy life in the Hunter World...
I hope to write a story that everyone will like. Feitan male protagonist, long live HE.
I am not good at copywriting. It is my first time to write a text and it is mostly a matter of practicing writing. Please give me some advice.
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This article is being overhauled, or in other words, it is being overturned and rewritten. The parts after the overhaul are placed below the position before the overhaul, so please scroll down the page as far as possible =3=...
As for whether this article will eventually be cheated... Let us follow the guidance of fate!
Reader comments
The witch clan has infiltrated the vampires, and the spy is Kai Ye, who has firmly established himself as one of the vampire leaders.
Eh eh
Joel is Hong Guoguo's revenge~`
In fact, I also liked the previous version... [Especially the interaction between the heroine and Kentooth in Soul Society. What was it? It was so cute~] But after the overhaul, it became more powerful and more like a Hollow, GJ! Well... Chrollo's trip to Xuye Palace will not be deleted... That one is very loving ~ Uncle Lan and Chrollo, the two kings know each other, meet, fall in love and kill each other [Okay, I respect myself] Please don't delete it~
I prefer the one after reconstruction.
I feel like it's a lot more substantial after the repair than before.
God
It turns out that Mr. Flying Carpet is also a good-looking person~
Have you started cultivating jq~~
Hehe...
It turns out that you said a year ago that you would "finish this book during the winter vacation."
Xiaomian, you have told the truth...
... Press the claws, is Nanzhu Tanzi?
Well... Please feel free... = =
Feitan~ must be very black~~
Come on, I will continue to support you
Today I looked back at the article before the revision, and I found that you changed a lot, but they all look very good, Ka Ka
If you don't take action, aren't you afraid of running away?
Therefore, baldness and other things are all disguises of masters.
Ah... Yor-chan is an Arrancar, so why rely on Nian so much?
55555.... I can't climb up anymore. The author's idea is quite good. I can sort it out next time I write the system.
The writing is very true~JJ is so fake now, only people will praise it for its empty articles... Sigh
Really good writing has been buried...
Well
It's really a big change.
However, who is cp and who...
Curious, curious...
The witch clan has infiltrated the vampires, and the spy is Kai Ye, who has firmly established himself as one of the vampire leaders.
Eh eh Joel is Hong Guoguo's revenge~`
In fact, I also liked the previous version... [Especially the interaction between the heroine and Kentooth in Soul Society. What was it? It was so cute~] But after the overhaul, it became more powerful and more like a Hollow, GJ! Well... Chrollo's trip to Xuye Palace will not be deleted... That one is very loving ~ Uncle Lan and Chrollo, the two kings know each other, meet, fall in love and kill each other [Okay, I respect myself] Please don't delete it~
I prefer the one after reconstruction.
I feel like it's a lot more substantial after the repair than before.
God It turns out that Mr. Flying Carpet is also a good-looking person~ Have you started cultivating jq~~ Hehe...
It turns out that you said a year ago that you would "finish this book during the winter vacation."
Xiaomian, you have told the truth...
... Press the claws, is Nanzhu Tanzi?
Well... Please feel free... = =
Feitan~ must be very black~~
Come on, I will continue to support you Today I looked back at the article before the revision, and I found that you changed a lot, but they all look very good, Ka Ka
If you don't take action, aren't you afraid of running away?
Therefore, baldness and other things are all disguises of masters.
Ah... Yor-chan is an Arrancar, so why rely on Nian so much?
55555.... I can't climb up anymore. The author's idea is quite good. I can sort it out next time I write the system.
The writing is very true~JJ is so fake now, only people will praise it for its empty articles... Sigh Really good writing has been buried...
Well It's really a big change. However, who is cp and who... Curious, curious...