Concise copywriting:
Even Hisoka personally confirmed that Chrollo's preference for the new and dislike of the old. Repeated snatching, collecting and selling off items was almost a normal activity in the brigade. So one day, the collected items were no longer dead objects. Chrollo didn't just want to "get" the collected items, but wanted to possess them on a deeper level...
This article describes the story between the collector and the collected.
Literary edition copy:
In life, there are always many ties that cannot be let go.
It is like a lock that restrains humans who cannot survive alone.
However, some ties are time-sensitive.
Once disconnected, the relationship will be destroyed and the two will not meet each other.
──If the fate is too shallow, use a knife to cut it into the flesh and bone.
──If the bond is not deep enough, add a lock that can never be unlocked.
★ The story of this article begins in 1996, which is three years before the original work begins.
★ It is directed to the original work, but the content does not have the original plot description.
★ Not a time-travel heroine, not NP, a story about the group leader from beginning to end.
★ This article is written slowly, trying to keep the characters in shape.
★ It's not a scam but the updates are slow. Please note that it is recommended to eat after fattening up. Welcome to leave a message for advice.
It is expected that four volumes will be completed, and the current progress is on the second volume~
Volume One: Dim Lights
Volume 2 Chu Ge←
Volume 3 Morning and Night
Volume Four Looking Back
Stopping update
Reader comments
Has anyone watched "Naruto Yamabuki"? It feels like this book was plagiarized. There are many places that are very similar! [Fear]
I kept thinking that under her clothes, she was not wearing any clothes, and she was wearing a suit... Chrollo must be taller than her...
Isn't it a deep V on the front of the chest... Poof... Has the loli grown? I heard that he is sixteen, but... He still looks like a child! Spray another can of blood
When can Rhine get rid of that obstructive ring? I also want to see her ability
There is also an update today, Chicken Jelly Bird ~ Be kind to Rhine in the New Year!
My favorite is Grandpa... The words on the front of the clothes...
In fact, uncle and Xiaoyi are very loving...
They are a very loving family...
Who is Cynthia? What is her relationship with Rhine?
Ah... It is indeed her... I don't know if my guess about the following article is correct...
Because the adults only wrote this, my review can only stop here.
Now go back and prepare a long review, which will be published the day after tomorrow at the latest.
Come back and announce before the first review, bow!
The plot is very exciting and very attractive to me...
Sweet noodles come and sprinkle flowers~~~~~~~~~~`
Brother, thank you for including my home address.
The message is so awesome, let's just say Jinjiang got it.
Yes... You won't develop any plot ORZ. .
By the way, I don't read much fan fiction now… I like to read netizens and ancient novels. .
Well written, please do your best, author!
Come on, keep up the good work, look forward to it, hurry up, hurry up. .
Yeah, it's a lovely combination
Hey, CP is a dumpling. We don't talk about cute dumplings. If you pass 8, I still recommend one~
To put it simply, this is a story about two people who have been secretly in love with each other for many years but both realized they were idiots in love.
I really appreciate this one-sentence introduction in the copywriting. It is very concise, but it is what the author wants to say most.
Maybe it's because the plot hasn't unfolded yet, and I still can't understand your black text after chewing it over and over again.
According to my wild guess, there might be some sadomasochism, but they still persisted, carving the bond deeply into their bones. Right?
If you don't have a deep understanding of the plot, I think your copywriting is too artistic, which may put readers off and be full of hesitation, which will not have a good effect in attracting readers. I suggest you think more about the copywriting.
──If the fate is too shallow, use a knife to cut it into the flesh and bone.
The above guesses are almost exclusively analyzed from this sentence.
In addition, the volume label is a bit old-fashioned, which is a bit inconsistent.
Due to the girl's request, we only started discussing the plot settings and bugs this time. I am a plot controller in Tianmianjiang, and the purpose of the review is to put the plot first. As long as the plot is good, everything else can be thrown away.
In addition to the questions I left in my short review, there are three other minor issues that I think were overlooked by the author during the writing process.
First, in Chapter 34, after Spider intercepted the new batch of bodyguards, he was assigned to directly protect the heroine, an important figure, which I felt was slightly inappropriate.
Because the place where the incident happened was the Weapons Development Research Institute of Buck Country. According to the name and the following text, this should be a very confidential place. Just because of a letter of recommendation from a doctor of computer technology in Buck Country, without any investigation, he was appointed as the heroine's bodyguard and D-area patrolman upon arrival. Is it slightly inappropriate to allow spiders to infiltrate the most closely guarded secrets? Usually these important positions require at least a period of testing.
[Quoted from: Chapter 3 Usually the bodyguards in Area D live on the same floor as me] In Chapter 3, Arthur emphasized the name of the heroine, Rhine August, which is not an ordinary name. In fact, she is the most important secret of this institute.
Second, even though the spiders are telepathic, after reading it, it makes people feel that they can come and go freely in the research institute and do not have to work. [Quoted from: chapter08 At this time, the members were either sitting or lying down, and every one of them was in the living room, and not a single spider was performing the side job of a bodyguard. ], Or even sabotaged official duties [Quoted from: chapter08 also let the sofa wear. A big hole opened. No problem.
Tianmianjiang thinks it would be better if you could insert a scene where the knight controls the staff to infiltrate the research institute [cautiously and cautiously].
Secondly, in Chapter 78, the spider suddenly opened its golden fingers. Not only does it ignore any defense system of the base, but the defense alert system of the base is approximately zero.
In Chapter 8, the knight's words: [The disease medical center's host defense is tighter than imagined, with only about 2% of the firewall cracked. The Weapons Development Research Institute is not that difficult to break into. This sentence is talking about the network. The defense of the disease medical center is stronger than that of the weapons development institute. According to this level of strength, and similarly in terms of personnel security, I think the police force of the Disease Medical Center is greater than that of the Weapons Development Research Institute, right?
[Your fingerprints and corneas are required to enter the Disease Medical Research Center] Fingerprints and eyes are required to enter many places, which shows that their research results are actually very confidential.
Thirdly, for the safety of the heroine, Arthur hired all telepathic users, but why did he and his father not even have a single ability user around him?
[Why do you think only bodyguards with telekinesis abilities are placed in Area D? I wonder if I can think of this as saying that only those in Area D have telekinesis abilities?
If Arthur is trying to protect the safety of the heroine, it must be because the heroine is very important. That's why she asked someone with telekinesis abilities to protect her.
Since she knew the danger she would encounter [in the future], why didn't she pay attention to ask some people to be by her side? Generally speaking, one needs to have backup plans. So I think both of them are completely reassured about their safety. You are free to...
[Arthur's father led a group of armed troops into the research laboratory] [All assault rifles pulled the trigger accurately, obviously well-trained]
These two sentences mean that they actually don't think they are completely relieved. Since Arthur can hire people with telekinesis, why not hire a few for himself and his father?
This point of view conflicts with the first question before. The conclusion I got from the article is that they disdain people with telekinesis and think they have enough military capabilities to protect themselves?
[I originally thought it was set up like this for Rhine, but now that I think about it, there are no telepathic users in other areas to protect weapons and materials, which means that the things protected by Area D are much more important than those weapons.
I think this sentence is a little inappropriate. Even though Rhine is the most important secret, as a national weapons research institute, and Arthur and the others are developing such a large project, it is necessary for them to hire telepaths.
I think these three points are what the author needs to consider carefully after reading this review. Although this is not a very important thing when viewed separately, when these three issues are combined, some readers will be confused.
Apart from these three points, I think this is a masterpiece from the bottom of my heart.
It eliminates the inherent plot of the hunter and sublimates it into a very attractive new story with suspense.
Reinterpret this for everyone in the brigade.
I particularly like the two characters Hongye (is it Curt?) And Cynthia [I don't know if they are original]
Hong Ye's jealousy and Cynthia's maternal nature are particularly memorable.
Sweet noodle sauce's nonsense:.
I read this article in one sitting and found it very interesting. I will also collect it personally and look forward to the future plot.
When I started reading the first chapter, I thought it was a science fiction novel. Since I had some ideas about CP, I subconsciously thought that the man was Chrollo and the girl was Rhine. Later it turned out that I was cliche, haha. This is not actually the case, don't be misled by me.
The second chapter is said to be the introduction before the incident begins, but when I read this paragraph, I felt that it was a little watery. Although going deeper, the author wanted to highlight it.
1. Peace has always been synonymous with boredom.
2. New tasks
But it seems that the order is a bit unclear and lacks strength.
The above are just some of my opinions mixed with personal subjective will, and cannot be a complete objective evaluation. However, the writing is written from the bottom of my heart. If there is anything inappropriate, please forgive me.
Please look for it - BALABALA jam jar review by Tianmianjiang
...
As expected...
People who seem to be good to you may not necessarily be good to you, but people who are really good to you cannot use "seeing".
Why don't I feel that many gay hunters have ended up recently... Feeling depressed?
Has anyone watched "Naruto Yamabuki"? It feels like this book was plagiarized. There are many places that are very similar! [Fear]
I kept thinking that under her clothes, she was not wearing any clothes, and she was wearing a suit... Chrollo must be taller than her... Isn't it a deep V on the front of the chest... Poof... Has the loli grown? I heard that he is sixteen, but... He still looks like a child! Spray another can of blood
When can Rhine get rid of that obstructive ring? I also want to see her ability
There is also an update today, Chicken Jelly Bird ~ Be kind to Rhine in the New Year!
My favorite is Grandpa... The words on the front of the clothes... In fact, uncle and Xiaoyi are very loving... They are a very loving family...
Who is Cynthia? What is her relationship with Rhine?
Ah... It is indeed her... I don't know if my guess about the following article is correct... Because the adults only wrote this, my review can only stop here. Now go back and prepare a long review, which will be published the day after tomorrow at the latest. Come back and announce before the first review, bow! The plot is very exciting and very attractive to me...
Sweet noodles come and sprinkle flowers~~~~~~~~~~`
Brother, thank you for including my home address.
The message is so awesome, let's just say Jinjiang got it.
Yes... You won't develop any plot ORZ. . By the way, I don't read much fan fiction now… I like to read netizens and ancient novels. .
Well written, please do your best, author!
Come on, keep up the good work, look forward to it, hurry up, hurry up. .
Yeah, it's a lovely combination
Hey, CP is a dumpling. We don't talk about cute dumplings. If you pass 8, I still recommend one~
To put it simply, this is a story about two people who have been secretly in love with each other for many years but both realized they were idiots in love. I really appreciate this one-sentence introduction in the copywriting. It is very concise, but it is what the author wants to say most. Maybe it's because the plot hasn't unfolded yet, and I still can't understand your black text after chewing it over and over again. According to my wild guess, there might be some sadomasochism, but they still persisted, carving the bond deeply into their bones. Right? If you don't have a deep understanding of the plot, I think your copywriting is too artistic, which may put readers off and be full of hesitation, which will not have a good effect in attracting readers. I suggest you think more about the copywriting. ──If the fate is too shallow, use a knife to cut it into the flesh and bone. The above guesses are almost exclusively analyzed from this sentence. In addition, the volume label is a bit old-fashioned, which is a bit inconsistent. Due to the girl's request, we only started discussing the plot settings and bugs this time. I am a plot controller in Tianmianjiang, and the purpose of the review is to put the plot first. As long as the plot is good, everything else can be thrown away. In addition to the questions I left in my short review, there are three other minor issues that I think were overlooked by the author during the writing process. First, in Chapter 34, after Spider intercepted the new batch of bodyguards, he was assigned to directly protect the heroine, an important figure, which I felt was slightly inappropriate. Because the place where the incident happened was the Weapons Development Research Institute of Buck Country. According to the name and the following text, this should be a very confidential place. Just because of a letter of recommendation from a doctor of computer technology in Buck Country, without any investigation, he was appointed as the heroine's bodyguard and D-area patrolman upon arrival. Is it slightly inappropriate to allow spiders to infiltrate the most closely guarded secrets? Usually these important positions require at least a period of testing. [Quoted from: Chapter 3 Usually the bodyguards in Area D live on the same floor as me] In Chapter 3, Arthur emphasized the name of the heroine, Rhine August, which is not an ordinary name. In fact, she is the most important secret of this institute. Second, even though the spiders are telepathic, after reading it, it makes people feel that they can come and go freely in the research institute and do not have to work. [Quoted from: chapter08 At this time, the members were either sitting or lying down, and every one of them was in the living room, and not a single spider was performing the side job of a bodyguard. ], Or even sabotaged official duties [Quoted from: chapter08 also let the sofa wear. A big hole opened. No problem. Tianmianjiang thinks it would be better if you could insert a scene where the knight controls the staff to infiltrate the research institute [cautiously and cautiously]. Secondly, in Chapter 78, the spider suddenly opened its golden fingers. Not only does it ignore any defense system of the base, but the defense alert system of the base is approximately zero. In Chapter 8, the knight's words: [The disease medical center's host defense is tighter than imagined, with only about 2% of the firewall cracked. The Weapons Development Research Institute is not that difficult to break into. This sentence is talking about the network. The defense of the disease medical center is stronger than that of the weapons development institute. According to this level of strength, and similarly in terms of personnel security, I think the police force of the Disease Medical Center is greater than that of the Weapons Development Research Institute, right? [Your fingerprints and corneas are required to enter the Disease Medical Research Center] Fingerprints and eyes are required to enter many places, which shows that their research results are actually very confidential. Thirdly, for the safety of the heroine, Arthur hired all telepathic users, but why did he and his father not even have a single ability user around him? [Why do you think only bodyguards with telekinesis abilities are placed in Area D? I wonder if I can think of this as saying that only those in Area D have telekinesis abilities? If Arthur is trying to protect the safety of the heroine, it must be because the heroine is very important. That's why she asked someone with telekinesis abilities to protect her. Since she knew the danger she would encounter [in the future], why didn't she pay attention to ask some people to be by her side? Generally speaking, one needs to have backup plans. So I think both of them are completely reassured about their safety. You are free to... [Arthur's father led a group of armed troops into the research laboratory] [All assault rifles pulled the trigger accurately, obviously well-trained] These two sentences mean that they actually don't think they are completely relieved. Since Arthur can hire people with telekinesis, why not hire a few for himself and his father? This point of view conflicts with the first question before. The conclusion I got from the article is that they disdain people with telekinesis and think they have enough military capabilities to protect themselves? [I originally thought it was set up like this for Rhine, but now that I think about it, there are no telepathic users in other areas to protect weapons and materials, which means that the things protected by Area D are much more important than those weapons. I think this sentence is a little inappropriate. Even though Rhine is the most important secret, as a national weapons research institute, and Arthur and the others are developing such a large project, it is necessary for them to hire telepaths. I think these three points are what the author needs to consider carefully after reading this review. Although this is not a very important thing when viewed separately, when these three issues are combined, some readers will be confused. Apart from these three points, I think this is a masterpiece from the bottom of my heart. It eliminates the inherent plot of the hunter and sublimates it into a very attractive new story with suspense. Reinterpret this for everyone in the brigade. I particularly like the two characters Hongye (is it Curt?) And Cynthia [I don't know if they are original] Hong Ye's jealousy and Cynthia's maternal nature are particularly memorable. Sweet noodle sauce's nonsense:. I read this article in one sitting and found it very interesting. I will also collect it personally and look forward to the future plot. When I started reading the first chapter, I thought it was a science fiction novel. Since I had some ideas about CP, I subconsciously thought that the man was Chrollo and the girl was Rhine. Later it turned out that I was cliche, haha. This is not actually the case, don't be misled by me. The second chapter is said to be the introduction before the incident begins, but when I read this paragraph, I felt that it was a little watery. Although going deeper, the author wanted to highlight it. 1. Peace has always been synonymous with boredom. 2. New tasks But it seems that the order is a bit unclear and lacks strength. The above are just some of my opinions mixed with personal subjective will, and cannot be a complete objective evaluation. However, the writing is written from the bottom of my heart. If there is anything inappropriate, please forgive me. Please look for it - BALABALA jam jar review by Tianmianjiang
... As expected... People who seem to be good to you may not necessarily be good to you, but people who are really good to you cannot use "seeing".
Why don't I feel that many gay hunters have ended up recently... Feeling depressed?