Double academic master
Gentle academic master Lin Baichuan & Jiangnan elegant academic master Chen Jiaxuan
Lin Baichuan moved to Suzhou for his parents' reasons and met Chen Jiaxuan, who was sitting at the same table with them. Two people are first in one grade and one is second in grade. Move while playing basketball. The two became aware of each other and gradually tested each other. Understand. They fell in love with each other, but because Chen Jiaxuan's parents divorced and moved away, they were reluctant to leave, and they agreed to take the Soochow University exam together. They met under the sycamore tree on the first day of school. Ling Baichuan looked at his lover with a bouquet of violets in his arms. The two met exactly. (There is a past life in the extra)
There is also a pair of deputy CPs Shen Guxia & Gu Jin. Let's wait until I write the extra story about the two of them.
Purpose: I hope to record a good life and give everyone positivity
Reader comments
Come on, the teacher's atmosphere is well written, but it's a little stiff, and the plot is a bit ordinary (no malice, I just want to give the teacher some suggestions, although my writing is not very good) Don't have too many characters in the first chapter. If there are too many people, I won't be able to remember them (although I have no experience [heartbreak]) Teacher, can you write more details in the next chapter (maybe I am stupid and can't understand) Come on [like]
Author, don't sleep, please update
Okay, the writing is quite good, but the plot may be a little bit stiff, so please do your best!
Teacher, are you still taking a break?
Teacher, I think your article has a little too many words in one paragraph. It can be divided into more paragraphs and there can be more paragraphs.
The writing feels a bit strange (emm, I don't know how to write, but I just want to express my opinion. It feels a bit essayistic but not). Maybe it's too stiff? Is this just a feeling (no malicious intent [please]) or can you see for yourself? (Maybe I'm the only one who thinks it's weird?) Looking forward to the next post [Glasses]
The teacher's writing is very beautiful, but I feel that the emotional line is not smooth, and I may have coded too quickly, and there are some typos, but the teacher's writing is very good! ! ! [Spread flowers]
Come on, the teacher's atmosphere is well written, but it's a little stiff, and the plot is a bit ordinary (no malice, I just want to give the teacher some suggestions, although my writing is not very good) Don't have too many characters in the first chapter. If there are too many people, I won't be able to remember them (although I have no experience [heartbreak]) Teacher, can you write more details in the next chapter (maybe I am stupid and can't understand) Come on [like]
Author, don't sleep, please update
Okay, the writing is quite good, but the plot may be a little bit stiff, so please do your best!
Teacher, are you still taking a break?
Teacher, I think your article has a little too many words in one paragraph. It can be divided into more paragraphs and there can be more paragraphs.
The writing feels a bit strange (emm, I don't know how to write, but I just want to express my opinion. It feels a bit essayistic but not). Maybe it's too stiff? Is this just a feeling (no malicious intent [please]) or can you see for yourself? (Maybe I'm the only one who thinks it's weird?) Looking forward to the next post [Glasses]
The teacher's writing is very beautiful, but I feel that the emotional line is not smooth, and I may have coded too quickly, and there are some typos, but the teacher's writing is very good! ! ! [Spread flowers]