The soul of another world is frightened across the sea, and the fairy road is stained with blood in the autumn of the old mountain.
Thousands of opportunities and hundreds of battles, protected by frost robes, dragon blood is rewarded by life and death on the same journey.
The situation of grievances and grievances is in trouble and evil, and the Taoist heart is full of sorrow.
Xing Lei's old oath finally became a prophecy, and Lei Ting was locked in a catastrophe of the same heart.
It took a lot of courage to overturn and rewrite everything, but I'm glad I did. Although it's very silly, I was very happy to write it... The idea I had a few years ago was shelved because of Carvin. It's a pity now that I think about it, but now that I've overturned everything and rewritten it, everything will be fine (/ω＼)
This beginning is one that I changed five or six times. I'm sorry that for the sake of the integrity of the article, I still couldn't write a stunning beginning that would attract everyone to read on. This article is just a whim that came to my mind when I was in high school. I wrote it just to fulfill a beautiful dream that I had imagined. If you are lucky enough to be read, I would be very grateful.
Purpose: A warrior of pure love has nothing to fear... Right?
Reader comments
[Dog head][dog head][dog head]groodgrrod
"Wow, who are you in the sky with..." This is a big bug for the author~
I feel like this smell is strangely familiar.
Maybe it would read more smoothly? [Hug]
"Liu Qingxi was stunned for a moment and lowered his head..." This is a big bug for the author~
Teacher, I don't quite understand this little suggestion, no offense intended.
Writing should probably allow readers to feel the protagonist's mood for themselves, rather than informing readers as a bystander.
For example, "My heart suddenly felt soft" might as well be changed to "I feel like + action/adjective + supplement"
[Dog head][dog head][dog head]groodgrrod
"Wow, who are you in the sky with..." This is a big bug for the author~ I feel like this smell is strangely familiar. Maybe it would read more smoothly? [Hug]
"Liu Qingxi was stunned for a moment and lowered his head..." This is a big bug for the author~ Teacher, I don't quite understand this little suggestion, no offense intended. Writing should probably allow readers to feel the protagonist's mood for themselves, rather than informing readers as a bystander. For example, "My heart suddenly felt soft" might as well be changed to "I feel like + action/adjective + supplement"