The first is the unorthodox text! ! !
Once upon a time, a little penguin sneaked into school
But it's so stupid
I can't even ask for collection.
Everyone gave it a nickname: Are you a silly goose?
It cries so loudly...
Crooked, my name is not Hangee, my name is Qiuqiu, you collect the goose~~
Below is the text of the text! ! !
A cold and dignified person, a secretly inappropriate person, a self-conquering, sinister and powerful official × a princess who looks arrogant but is actually desperate for survival. She really has no other options.
Once the book was written, Su Yiwan just wanted to survive until the end. Things backfired, and the plot deviated from the original text at every turn.
The biggest variable is that the second villain in the original novel was obsessed with power and didn't notice her until her death. He was crazy and paranoid and fell in love with her forcefully.
"Can you please stay away? Wanwan, I will be your dog." He said.
Su Yiwan: I suggest you check it out. It doesn't look like it's his first time being a dog.
Once he was reborn, Xie Ci just wanted to take revenge on the book-wearing girl who relied on the "spoiler" golden finger to make his life's hard work come to nothing, and when he was dying, he humiliated him from above.
But in the end, he discovered that she in this life was not the same as her in the previous life.
He just wants to have her all to himself! Please have mercy on her! Bow down to her!
Later, he had many strange dreams, in which he had countless past lives...
No matter how he plans, it is just a stepping stone to pave the way for the protagonist's love and fame.
And only in this life, Su Yiwan chose herself as her leading actor.
When he has seen her, he has seen the world.
She is his creator god, and also his universe.
…
One night, I took out Su Yiwan's notes and frowned at the "Illustrations of Grafting Techniques": Why is this "grafting" technique so... Touching?
Su Yiwan grabbed the book and shouted angrily: That's grafting! It's easier to live if it's tied tightly!
He chuckled in her ear: But I think planting mulberry seedlings is not as good as planting you. I have a good life if I stay with me every night...
The next day there was a hot discussion on the street: Mr. Xie was whipped by the princess with a mulberry stick!
Finally, there is a pre-collection of "Sneak Window". If you are interested, you can collect it first.
Cold-faced secret guard × dank goblin, double strength
When my ex-husband's Bai Yueguang and I fell into the water together, he abandoned me and ran straight to his Bai Yueguang.
That night, I swapped bodies with him.
From then on, I stirred things up in the court, while he was made to kneel down by the old lady in the courtyard, and made things difficult by Bai Yueguang.
Every time I go back home, I don't even look at him. Just like before, he tramples on my sincerity.
He wanted to restore old friendship with me, but I laughed coldly. Later I left Dayan and followed my bright moon to the end of the world
From now on, the mountains and rivers will never meet each other, and we will not care about the strengths and weaknesses of the old people.
It's just... This newcomer is really annoying.
There was a surprise in Chunfeng Tower. He was dressed in red, pretending to be a woman, and called me "sister" sweetly. I softened my heart for him.
This weakness is a lifelong fall.
——
I, Wen Mo, am the young master of the Miao Territory, and was born to shoulder the important task of revitalizing the Miao Territory.
Before coming to Dayan, I planned every step carefully and planned everything. Unexpectedly, a man in red clothes and sleeves danced with a sword, becoming a variable in the chess game. From then on, my heart was in chaos.
She is obviously a woman, but she is colder and stronger than a man. When he smiles, he is charming, but when he doesn't smile, he is as cold as a skull.
Later, my secret guard told me that she was actually my mortal enemy Yan Shiyi? I have no idea that I am an injustice, Duanxiu!
When I later found out the truth, I just felt jealous. Yan Shiyi married her but didn't know how to cherish her.
Then he thought about it, and realized that his white moonlight was his own creation, and he suddenly felt comfortable.
It turns out that I am working hard every step of the way just for you.
In the early stage, the heroine swaps with her ex-husband, and later they switch back. In this article, the male and female protagonists are sweet and brutally abuse the scumbag.
Purpose: Falling in love is worse than planting mulberries
Reader comments
I understood after reading the second chapter. This horse-washer turned out to be not a groom [covering face and laughing] [covering face and laughing and crying] [covering face and laughing and crying] It is so well written and inspiring. I haven't seen such a good article for a long time. It's a pity that it is still being serialized. I hope the author will not give up.
It's really well written. It's better than many published physical books. The ideas are so attractive. I hope this good book will be published one day. Good luck.
I feel that the description is very good and immersive. I think the first few chapters are very well written, especially Chapter 2 and Chapter 3. Can you not change it a lot? [Crying] Isn't it more interesting that the heroine doesn't know that they are reborn? It's unexpected. The subplot of the female supporting character in the back feels too plain and boring. Although it is well described, I don't feel like I am grinding my teeth with hatred. It's like I'm reading a report. I can't explain it. Instead, the male and female protagonists play against each other in the front, and there is a feeling of a silent contest in the air. It's very interesting that the heroine is mistaken for the hero's maid
1. There are too many useless pens in the first three chapters.
2. The plot advances too slowly. Your book is a cross-book. The first chapter is an introduction frame. The female protagonist Su Yiwan appears, and the male protagonist excuses his appearance and wants her to die (the author later says that he just wants to tease her). This is not about wanting her to die but is integrated into the main plot so that readers can see it. Wouldn't it be better? At this time, Concubine Gao appears. How does her appearance advance the plot? After reading the first chapter, I only know that it is telling the framework and I don't know what the story is going to be about. It cannot retain readers, at least it cannot retain me. The second chapter directly talks about the male protagonist's resignation and the second male protagonist's rebirth. Would it be more interesting if the female protagonist discovered the secret of their twin lives from the perspective of the female protagonist?
The writing is very good. Even the official position of the male protagonist is too funny. Washing the horse in the East Palace? Why is it the groom [dog head][dog head][covering face and laughing and crying][covering face and laughing and crying]
Chapter 7: Let Your Handsome People The word order is also wrong [cover your face and laugh and cry] [cover your face and laugh and cry] [cover your face and laugh and cry] Please adjust it a lot (sorry~ I'm not deliberately looking for trouble [cover your face and laugh and cry] [cover your face and laugh and cry]) I keep re-reading this book. The wrong words and sentences really affect the reading experience.
Big, then I think it would be better if you make the boat girl think that the female protagonist is the male protagonist's concubine [cover your face and laugh and cry] [cover your face and laugh and cry] [cover your face and laugh and cry] That way the male protagonist can tease and take advantage again, what do you think?
Big, it's Qingbai from the first chapter. When I read it, I couldn't help but think of a zombie in official uniform [covering my face and laughing] [covering my face and crying] I no longer feel that discomfort after the modification. Also, something is wrong in the writing of Chapter 6. Didn't I say that everyone regards the heroine as the hero's maid? The hero wears fancy clothes and the heroine wears coarse cloth. Why does the boat girl treat them as a couple? The bed girl can make cakes and her eyes must be good. It feels a bit illogical [dog head] Then in the second chapter, the heroine's name was spelled incorrectly as Su Wan, and then in the chapter about escaping, His Highness and you and I read it for a long time and thought that His Highness was the Crown Prince. Shouldn't it be His Highness and me?
I understood after reading the second chapter. This horse-washer turned out to be not a groom [covering face and laughing] [covering face and laughing and crying] [covering face and laughing and crying] It is so well written and inspiring. I haven't seen such a good article for a long time. It's a pity that it is still being serialized. I hope the author will not give up.
It's really well written. It's better than many published physical books. The ideas are so attractive. I hope this good book will be published one day. Good luck.
I feel that the description is very good and immersive. I think the first few chapters are very well written, especially Chapter 2 and Chapter 3. Can you not change it a lot? [Crying] Isn't it more interesting that the heroine doesn't know that they are reborn? It's unexpected. The subplot of the female supporting character in the back feels too plain and boring. Although it is well described, I don't feel like I am grinding my teeth with hatred. It's like I'm reading a report. I can't explain it. Instead, the male and female protagonists play against each other in the front, and there is a feeling of a silent contest in the air. It's very interesting that the heroine is mistaken for the hero's maid
1. There are too many useless pens in the first three chapters. 2. The plot advances too slowly. Your book is a cross-book. The first chapter is an introduction frame. The female protagonist Su Yiwan appears, and the male protagonist excuses his appearance and wants her to die (the author later says that he just wants to tease her). This is not about wanting her to die but is integrated into the main plot so that readers can see it. Wouldn't it be better? At this time, Concubine Gao appears. How does her appearance advance the plot? After reading the first chapter, I only know that it is telling the framework and I don't know what the story is going to be about. It cannot retain readers, at least it cannot retain me. The second chapter directly talks about the male protagonist's resignation and the second male protagonist's rebirth. Would it be more interesting if the female protagonist discovered the secret of their twin lives from the perspective of the female protagonist?
The writing is very good. Even the official position of the male protagonist is too funny. Washing the horse in the East Palace? Why is it the groom [dog head][dog head][covering face and laughing and crying][covering face and laughing and crying]
Chapter 7: Let Your Handsome People The word order is also wrong [cover your face and laugh and cry] [cover your face and laugh and cry] [cover your face and laugh and cry] Please adjust it a lot (sorry~ I'm not deliberately looking for trouble [cover your face and laugh and cry] [cover your face and laugh and cry]) I keep re-reading this book. The wrong words and sentences really affect the reading experience.
Big, then I think it would be better if you make the boat girl think that the female protagonist is the male protagonist's concubine [cover your face and laugh and cry] [cover your face and laugh and cry] [cover your face and laugh and cry] That way the male protagonist can tease and take advantage again, what do you think?
Big, it's Qingbai from the first chapter. When I read it, I couldn't help but think of a zombie in official uniform [covering my face and laughing] [covering my face and crying] I no longer feel that discomfort after the modification. Also, something is wrong in the writing of Chapter 6. Didn't I say that everyone regards the heroine as the hero's maid? The hero wears fancy clothes and the heroine wears coarse cloth. Why does the boat girl treat them as a couple? The bed girl can make cakes and her eyes must be good. It feels a bit illogical [dog head] Then in the second chapter, the heroine's name was spelled incorrectly as Su Wan, and then in the chapter about escaping, His Highness and you and I read it for a long time and thought that His Highness was the Crown Prince. Shouldn't it be His Highness and me?