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Xiao Xixi, please have a surprise during the holidays! Um? Um? Um?
I didn't expect that I would be locked for two chapters this time. My heart was bleeding like crazy.
This is gone
I thought there was more
It's so gentle but makes me want to cry. After the war, a world will be filled with pain but will be better.
So the white horse is just a light bulb...
Come on... I like it
Good. . As for reminders and so on. . I try my best. . Hey-hey.
I support you! ! ! ! Brothers support it together! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
The second volume... I wrote so much and so diligently. Embrace
Thin? I call this your body shape. You should be thin where you should be, and where there should be flesh, there should be no less.
There is a bird's nest on top of the head, with two sausages hanging below. The dough is black and purple, like a piece of burnt dough. The nose and eyes are submerged in the dough, leaving only a few small dots.
Haha!
= =Okay, here I come.
If Guo Wei doesn't like Toyama and Ye, then I'll kill her. "
It turns out that the heroine is so powerful~~
It's said to be damaging, but actually it's just letting nature take its course.
I thought you would write two more chapters... But it ended inexplicably like this... By the way, you have been really passionate recently, either that or this or this, you know.
What do you mean by adding another one...
Sofa! In fact, it's not bad, not too bad. Compared with Hisoka in our novel, Da Nai's is already quite good. . Well, try harder, we'll wait~
Very cute and warm, and the style is also very unique?
Ah la la, SF is gone again... Even the bench is gone...
Tragedy, are you talking about me?
Then write two and follow me.
Sprinkle flowers~~Spread flowers~~
If He Ye is not original, why wouldn't it match if placed here?
After reading so many articles, I have a very good taste. I am struck by the fact that it is really naive... The relationship between the protagonist and Kaito is too fast... It needs to be improved. In terms of writing, although it does not have to be very good, at least it should be a little bit more... And the protagonist written earlier said that she is not the same Shigesaiye as before. The process was too hasty. I feel really speechless... Can you please edit it after you finish it, at least it will not appear too abrupt... Thank you
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First of all, would you like to congratulate me on the completion?
(Closing fists)
'Congratulations on the completion'
In fact, every time I watch Zi Mo's Wen Zhen, I am pleasantly surprised.
Okay, first of all I admit it.
I especially like ghost animals. This leads me to like 'Chongyuan' who disappears as soon as he shows his face more than the male protagonist Kaito-kun...
(I suddenly felt like I was here to pick a fight...-_-||)
Secondly, life is full of surprises.
Originally, in my opinion, Conan fans are really difficult to write...
First, it's basically just a carrot and a pit...
Whether it's Kudo, Hattori, Kaito or Hakuba, they all have their names.
If by any chance you dismantle a pair of CPs, you might attract someone from the CP party. I remember reading a fan story where the person was forced to have no choice but to look past all the positive characters and extend his claws to Gin...
(I am becoming more and more like a show-off...)
The main purpose of this long review is to spread flowers to celebrate the end of Zi Mo, so I won't say this kind of hateful words...
Maybe it's because I watched too much abuse in the early days, so now I can't help but want to cross my fingers when I see abuse. This sweet article by Zi Mo is still very refreshing to read.
Before writing this long review, I read a few refined reviews, so I reluctantly read them again in an attempt to find errors.
Unfortunately, we really didn't catch the bug.
But the overall article feels too fast.
It's not the progression, it's the characterization.
Many things have passed from generation to generation, and some people cannot understand them.
.........
Here are some of my characterization points.
(This is what I am learning and selling now... —_—||)
First of all, we should focus on the description of the characters' language, expression and environment. Let me give you an example...
"So? If I die, will there be nothing left?" The girl calmed down, her eyes dull. Like a puppet doll.
The expressions and actions after the words can be further drawn.
(To put it bluntly, no matter how long-winded it is, do it with all your heart)
That's what I think anyway
There is this passage in an article written by an author that I think is quite pertinent: Among the taboos in writing:
The fourth taboo is not to be general but to be specific.
No one said it better than the great Russian writer Chekhov about generalizations about writing taboos. In a letter, he warned a writer friend to avoid generalizations and commonplaces: "I believe that a true description of nature should be quite brief and relevant to the subject. You should avoid cliché descriptions such as 'the setting sun bathes in the waves of the black ocean and the purple golden light cascades down' etc. When describing nature, grasp the details and do it to such an extent that even if you close your eyes, you can still see the scene you are describing."
So when you sit down to write, remember not "a drink" but "a martini"; not "a dog" but "a poodle"; not "a bouquet of flowers" but "a bouquet of roses"; not "a skier" but "a budding young girl"; not "a hat" but "a hat"; not "a cat" but "an Abyssinian cat"; not "a gun" but "an o". 44 Caliber automatic pistol" is not "a painting" but a "Manet's 'Olympia'".
Combining the description of the four taboos with Chehefu's golden words we get a rule that all good authors should follow when describing. Be specific!
You need to be able to accurately depict scenes to make the characters believable as they go about their daily tasks with their own senses of sight, hearing, smell, touch, and taste. ——Ravel Spencer.
"How do you make something look real and believable? "When a writer is asked this question, it is actually a compliment to him. If someone further says to him, "I seem to be immersed in the scene and can hear, smell, and feel these places as if I have walked into the pages of a book." Then what he has given the reader is indeed extraordinary. When I was asked the same question, my answer was "With the help of the five senses." Some authors always fail to realize that they should use the five senses of the reader to obtain a sense of reality. It is common to use the reader's visual sense, but how many times do you use the reader's sense of smell, hearing (except in dialogue), touch or taste? I have kept the five words "see, hear, feel, taste, smell" on the wall of my office since I started writing in 1997. Whenever I write, I will consciously write something with a smell. In fact, some disgusting things have a miraculous effect in creating a sense of reality.
This is the so-called characterization of details.
...........
Suddenly I wrote so much, and when I look back...
(Covering face)
The more I write, the more I feel like I am here to cause trouble...
Then I'll stop here.
In fact, I don't necessarily know how good my writing is, but I just like to write long comments on the articles I like. (Tucao: This is the so-called armchair discussion, hindsight, hindsight...) [Tucao, this is not the same thing at all!
But as soon as I write it, it becomes a mess.
(T_TThere is nothing I can do...)
Originally I wanted to write it for Lao Hu's "Eastern Invincible", but looking at it this way, I...
I'd better stop... Don't let all of you come and beat me up...
I have nothing to do today, so I read your The Magician Under the Moonlight again.
I suddenly wanted to write a long review.
It just so happened that I applied for another Jinjiang number [I have a brain twitch, so as long as there is no place that requires one person to have one number, I like to apply for several]
I just jumped up with a lucky mentality.
The final look at the results.
Sure enough... It looks more like a prankster, hey!
Just Jiang Jiang, looking forward to Zimo's Internet King...
Xiao Xixi, please have a surprise during the holidays! Um? Um? Um?
I didn't expect that I would be locked for two chapters this time. My heart was bleeding like crazy.
This is gone I thought there was more
It's so gentle but makes me want to cry. After the war, a world will be filled with pain but will be better.
So the white horse is just a light bulb...
Come on... I like it
Good. . As for reminders and so on. . I try my best. . Hey-hey.
I support you! ! ! ! Brothers support it together! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
The second volume... I wrote so much and so diligently. Embrace
Thin? I call this your body shape. You should be thin where you should be, and where there should be flesh, there should be no less. There is a bird's nest on top of the head, with two sausages hanging below. The dough is black and purple, like a piece of burnt dough. The nose and eyes are submerged in the dough, leaving only a few small dots. Haha!
= =Okay, here I come.
If Guo Wei doesn't like Toyama and Ye, then I'll kill her. " It turns out that the heroine is so powerful~~
It's said to be damaging, but actually it's just letting nature take its course.
I thought you would write two more chapters... But it ended inexplicably like this... By the way, you have been really passionate recently, either that or this or this, you know.
What do you mean by adding another one...
Sofa! In fact, it's not bad, not too bad. Compared with Hisoka in our novel, Da Nai's is already quite good. . Well, try harder, we'll wait~
Very cute and warm, and the style is also very unique?
Ah la la, SF is gone again... Even the bench is gone... Tragedy, are you talking about me?
Then write two and follow me.
Sprinkle flowers~~Spread flowers~~
If He Ye is not original, why wouldn't it match if placed here?
After reading so many articles, I have a very good taste. I am struck by the fact that it is really naive... The relationship between the protagonist and Kaito is too fast... It needs to be improved. In terms of writing, although it does not have to be very good, at least it should be a little bit more... And the protagonist written earlier said that she is not the same Shigesaiye as before. The process was too hasty. I feel really speechless... Can you please edit it after you finish it, at least it will not appear too abrupt... Thank you
Share love First of all, would you like to congratulate me on the completion? (Closing fists) 'Congratulations on the completion' In fact, every time I watch Zi Mo's Wen Zhen, I am pleasantly surprised. Okay, first of all I admit it. I especially like ghost animals. This leads me to like 'Chongyuan' who disappears as soon as he shows his face more than the male protagonist Kaito-kun... (I suddenly felt like I was here to pick a fight...-_-||) Secondly, life is full of surprises. Originally, in my opinion, Conan fans are really difficult to write... First, it's basically just a carrot and a pit... Whether it's Kudo, Hattori, Kaito or Hakuba, they all have their names. If by any chance you dismantle a pair of CPs, you might attract someone from the CP party. I remember reading a fan story where the person was forced to have no choice but to look past all the positive characters and extend his claws to Gin... (I am becoming more and more like a show-off...) The main purpose of this long review is to spread flowers to celebrate the end of Zi Mo, so I won't say this kind of hateful words... Maybe it's because I watched too much abuse in the early days, so now I can't help but want to cross my fingers when I see abuse. This sweet article by Zi Mo is still very refreshing to read. Before writing this long review, I read a few refined reviews, so I reluctantly read them again in an attempt to find errors. Unfortunately, we really didn't catch the bug. But the overall article feels too fast. It's not the progression, it's the characterization. Many things have passed from generation to generation, and some people cannot understand them. ......... Here are some of my characterization points. (This is what I am learning and selling now... —_—||) First of all, we should focus on the description of the characters' language, expression and environment. Let me give you an example... "So? If I die, will there be nothing left?" The girl calmed down, her eyes dull. Like a puppet doll. The expressions and actions after the words can be further drawn. (To put it bluntly, no matter how long-winded it is, do it with all your heart) That's what I think anyway There is this passage in an article written by an author that I think is quite pertinent: Among the taboos in writing: The fourth taboo is not to be general but to be specific. No one said it better than the great Russian writer Chekhov about generalizations about writing taboos. In a letter, he warned a writer friend to avoid generalizations and commonplaces: "I believe that a true description of nature should be quite brief and relevant to the subject. You should avoid cliché descriptions such as 'the setting sun bathes in the waves of the black ocean and the purple golden light cascades down' etc. When describing nature, grasp the details and do it to such an extent that even if you close your eyes, you can still see the scene you are describing." So when you sit down to write, remember not "a drink" but "a martini"; not "a dog" but "a poodle"; not "a bouquet of flowers" but "a bouquet of roses"; not "a skier" but "a budding young girl"; not "a hat" but "a hat"; not "a cat" but "an Abyssinian cat"; not "a gun" but "an o". 44 Caliber automatic pistol" is not "a painting" but a "Manet's 'Olympia'". Combining the description of the four taboos with Chehefu's golden words we get a rule that all good authors should follow when describing. Be specific! You need to be able to accurately depict scenes to make the characters believable as they go about their daily tasks with their own senses of sight, hearing, smell, touch, and taste. ——Ravel Spencer. "How do you make something look real and believable? "When a writer is asked this question, it is actually a compliment to him. If someone further says to him, "I seem to be immersed in the scene and can hear, smell, and feel these places as if I have walked into the pages of a book." Then what he has given the reader is indeed extraordinary. When I was asked the same question, my answer was "With the help of the five senses." Some authors always fail to realize that they should use the five senses of the reader to obtain a sense of reality. It is common to use the reader's visual sense, but how many times do you use the reader's sense of smell, hearing (except in dialogue), touch or taste? I have kept the five words "see, hear, feel, taste, smell" on the wall of my office since I started writing in 1997. Whenever I write, I will consciously write something with a smell. In fact, some disgusting things have a miraculous effect in creating a sense of reality. This is the so-called characterization of details. ........... Suddenly I wrote so much, and when I look back... (Covering face) The more I write, the more I feel like I am here to cause trouble... Then I'll stop here. In fact, I don't necessarily know how good my writing is, but I just like to write long comments on the articles I like. (Tucao: This is the so-called armchair discussion, hindsight, hindsight...) [Tucao, this is not the same thing at all! But as soon as I write it, it becomes a mess. (T_TThere is nothing I can do...) Originally I wanted to write it for Lao Hu's "Eastern Invincible", but looking at it this way, I... I'd better stop... Don't let all of you come and beat me up... I have nothing to do today, so I read your The Magician Under the Moonlight again. I suddenly wanted to write a long review. It just so happened that I applied for another Jinjiang number [I have a brain twitch, so as long as there is no place that requires one person to have one number, I like to apply for several] I just jumped up with a lucky mentality. The final look at the results. Sure enough... It looks more like a prankster, hey! Just Jiang Jiang, looking forward to Zimo's Internet King...