I want to read a book like "Redemption Failed and the Female Villain Became My Sick Girlfriend". Not brainless, unsystematic, single female protagonist
At first, I feel that Lin Zhitong's portrayal is really too deliberate. It feels a bit just to promote the plot. It is said that the country is beautiful and fragrant. There should be no shortage of people around the goddess level to lick. It shouldn't be because the male protagonist is obsessed with it. It can be portrayed from the side that only the male protagonist can lick. Ordinary licking dogs can't do things, such as For example, during the menstrual period, there was no brown sugar water for the male protagonist to take care of, and small details such as making porridge in the room when she was sick were used to describe Lin Zhitong missing a treasure boy who once had eyes for her. Of course, it cannot be ruled out that the author wrote this purely for the sake of pleasure, and I support it. After all, there are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand readers. The second is that the male protagonist does not ask the female protagonist any family matters or reasons for accepting and pursuing the female protagonist, which is understandable, but apart from knowing the name Sun Yuxiao, the male protagonist has no understanding of the female protagonist, hobbies, previous experiences, and even age, birthdays, and small holidays. He remembers blessings and gifts. What about birthdays? I have some doubts, but when these are not clear, it is not something that a soul in his thirties can do. He has been portraying the sophistication and mature rationality of the male protagonist. I think it cannot be explained by the sentence of being abandoned before, so when he met a girl who looked at him, he was completely immersed in it. This development is not as good as writing a reverse redemption. After the female protagonist dies in the parallel world, she sees the painful life of the male protagonist, and then returns to the male protagonist, running in both directions? Third, is it just because we have such a deep emotional foundation after being pen pals for five years? The male protagonist unexpectedly became the only light for the heroine's depression. The heroine used to have so many followers, but the content of the letter was just a close friend. It's not that bad. Is it because the heroine saw the hero and her condition gradually improved, and the hero took care of her, and the heroine's emotions changed completely? This can only be explained, but the author should have hinted that the heroine's portrayal in the diary written by the heroine herself has a basis, but it is difficult to say about the male protagonist. Later, in order to let the child see the heroine's appearance, Li Ziyan was arranged. I feel that it was to make the writing more enjoyable, but again, it was excessive and deliberate. This is purely a personal opinion. I have only seen the New Year gift chapter so far. If you have different opinions, please discuss them rationally. Above.