Now that I have seen about one-sixth of the way through, let me share my feelings. (I know he's finished, I know, no need to remind me) Although I usually read books at a glance, I read them very quickly and not seriously, but this is the first time I've skipped chapters in reading this book. It's not that the writing is not good, the atmosphere and descriptions are quite comfortable. I just felt that the plot was a bit draggy. For example, I watched it for a long time while thinking about it. "Wow, so many things have happened. It must have been a few months." As a result, it turned out that it was not even two days. The details are well described, and the sweet spots are easy to appreciate, but I think the novel must have a certain degree of relaxation and be appropriately detailed and comprehensive. It cannot be written in earnest every day after being in the capital for several months. Although the author has good intentions, he will really lose a lot of readers by doing this. After all, it's really refreshing to see a family laughing and having fun for the first time, but after seeing it too much, it gets boring. So I think it can be slightly improved in terms of detail.