I thought the first one was good, the ending was tragic and the logic was clear.
The second one is a bit... Mary Sue? The abuse was okay, but not as brutal as the first one. The heroine ended up with the boy.
I thought the first one was good, the ending was tragic and the logic was clear.
The second one is a bit... Mary Sue? The abuse was okay, but not as brutal as the first one. The heroine ended up with the boy.