Mushoku Tensei: I Transmigrated and Took Rudeus's Place

Absolute heroism, and the abstraction that comes from it, what taught you about writing fan fiction? 🤤🥰

I feel that the current rhythm is good, that is, in terms of plot, I hope there will be more original plots, such as daily life, interactions with Bai's mother, and later for Alice, when she is a tutor, she can also write more daily life. After all, the most important thing is to read fanfiction. It's about seeing changes, and it doesn't matter if the general direction doesn't change, but it's better to have more of your own originality, and if you can write about the Snake Foot chapter in the future, you can also write more about daily life. After all, the original Rudy's daily life is indeed a bit less, and the Snake Foot chapter is the most, which is not enough to read. Also, the current protagonist talks too much in his heart, but that's okay. I think it's good to be a time traveler and play with some jokes😏You should talk more😏. According to this writing, I am looking forward to the subsequent exchanges with the CS of Human God, and the subsequent encounter with Boss Long. Should I directly become a subordinate, or should I follow the original plot? In addition to the original white, blue and red heroines, depending on the author's intention, it seems that Ariel will also be included. In short, it is a new book with great potential and must be kept alive.

A good author has to write like this. The original work made me so uncomfortable when I was young. I am curious about whose brain circuit can write this. In my case, the author's writing is better than the original work and it is in line with my taste. This is the correct way to open up to a different world🤤🤤🤤

At present, the protagonist has no problem with being a son or a student. I hope the protagonist will be better than the original Fat Man in dealing with family and friends. I see that the author has also included jokes from the short video content, hoping that the protagonist can bring the traditional Chinese culture from his previous life to a different world (such as children's songs, idioms and allusions, etc., And toys such as the fireworks set off by Rudy in the original work can be mass-produced harmlessly, as well as kite tops and the like).

Four and a half stars, not bad, but it feels the same as watching the original work again. In summary, Rudy Pro max (not as sexy as Rudy)

It's so red😋, overall it's a good read, and it's probably a pretty good work as well. It's a little wordy in some cases, but the emotional line and the father-son line are all handled well. Recommended reading for unemployed fans. Except for the setting of the protagonist, there is not much OOC. The author is very familiar with the main and side plots of the original work, and it is very comfortable to read. By the way, the author still loves Bai TV. The 10086 days of persecuting Mama Bai, the Dragon God and the Human God have not come out yet. I look forward to the follow-up plot. Where is Alice? A lot of changes have been made to the original line It's too slow to leave Buye Village yet. Please update me soon😢

Attributing all Rudy's talent to the Laplace factor, belittling the original Rudy, and reciting poems, I really couldn't stand it. Purebred Jiahao. Putting aside these shortcomings, it's okay. There are too few mainly non-job-reincarnated fics, and even fewer in the third person. It's still watchable.

Judging from the current plot, I personally think it's good. This is the character that a real protagonist should have. He has a lustful heart but doesn't show it. He knows that having too many skills is not too overwhelming!

I just finished watching the anime. The content, like the title, is the PRO version of normal Rudy. After the celestial traveler defeated Rudy, what was born was - [The Ultimate King of Rolls] [The Family Man who awakened in advance] [The self-proclaimed Son of God]. So far, there are no poisonous points. The only poisonous point is that there are too few, which is not enough to watch. 😢😢 Then it is a pity that the Luo Qixi religion is probably gone, but normal people will not enshrine underwear as sacred relics, haha. However, the main plot is still in the novice village. I still look forward to the plot of going to the lord's house to meet Alice. I wonder if the tsundere kitten will be greeted by a Chinese education, haha. But if you go to the lord's house again, you may not just be a tutor. After all, judging from the protagonist's inventions, saving money for college should no longer be a problem. Personally, I feel that it is either because you are going to Alice's house as a proton, or to prepare for the subsequent big transfer event. After all, it happened in the territory of Alice's family. In short, I still look forward to a wave of arrangements from the author.

You can see, he is not mentally retarded, he is a natural scroller🥰👍