I Transmigrated Into a Book as a Fake Heiress, but Raised the Heroine into a Yandere?

Finally, it's not the same routine of bullying the heroine first and then trying to apologize. [Please update]

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Generally speaking, it is very good-looking, there are no big poisonous points, and there is no traditional cliché that the sister is a second-week player. Some of the descriptions are slightly lacking, but they can be improved. If I keep writing, I believe I can achieve good results (I hope the yandere line can be done not for the sake of being sick)

I think you can take a look at it. There is a small typo in the name, so it is not AI (I can only rely on this identification due to lack of ability). I will not comment on other things. Maybe the emotional changes are still not clear. The main reason is that the protagonist is not clear. Is he just trying to survive? Or just as a sister? Still in love? It seems that there is no process. Of course there is a sexual dream plot, and it should be a two-way journey; the heroine has low self-esteem, will it be like this if her adoptive parents have enough love? I don't know much about psychology. Is it a trigger for yandere? I will be provoked by myself in another world, but I have a good impression of myself anyway. As for myself in another world, is I a initiator of yandere? Those who can borrow strength and are hostile to the people they cherish will most likely be thrown away by their elbows. There is something like the devil, maybe the knife excites the yandere. Anyway, the author seems to be more active. If you have any shortcomings, you can tell the author yourself. Also, don't keep books (except for the student party who are forced to keep them). The author's previous book was cut in half because there is no data. Chat with the author in the comment area.

I'm a bit clueless in some setting descriptions and supplements, but at least there are no poisonous points so far. If I keep writing steadily, as long as I don't get messed up by Tomato's push mechanism, then the score will basically be stable at around eight points🍉 emmmmmmm, come on anyway🍉

Okay, okay, I want to ask how to deal with the other Elena. I hope you don't accept it too. Although the setting is all about one person, it really shouldn't be like this. From the current look, it feels like the other one is also dependent on the protagonist.

It's really good, but I feel like there are more and more characters. I hope it won't turn into the Queen of Ten Thousand Females. That's not to say that this is bad, but since there is only one sister for the younger sister, of course the only one for the older sister is the younger sister.

It's so cool, I have to read it in class. It's not poisonous at all and is very palatable. The writing is smooth and awesome👍

I've read Chapter 51, so far it's okay. There is a small point at the front. The height and age of the two people are not clearly marked. There is no clear picture of the reader's imagination when they interact. I hope it can be filled in. The beginning is also very novel. It is different from others. Although the character description and specific details are not very good, it is awesome for newbies to do this. But it is a pity that most of these themes only have about 150 chapters. I hope I can write more.

Shocking and delicious 🤤, the author writes very sweet little sweet articles, daily life + battle, the characters are well drawn, and the supporting roles are also good