National Destiny Game: Starting from the Siheyuan

The story you wrote is quite good, but you have ideas but the plot is a bit dry. You are always willing to summarize what happened before and after, and you always talk about the value to yourself. In fact, readers don't care about your thoughts or your values. As long as the plot is good, everything can be discussed. You can add some plots to make the whole story more smooth, add some dialogues to be more humane, add some funny plots or other things to enrich the plot and make the characters more in-depth and more like a human being. The other differences don't matter!

The author still has a lot of potential in his writing skills, but I'm enjoying the current plot.

It's the first time I've seen Siheyuan + Guoyun. It's a bit interesting.

The book is good. Good luck to the author. I hope the author will write better and better!

👍👍👍Very novel theme

It's very interesting, a brand new way of writing, the author will update quickly, come on!

I give myself a five-star rating for the book I wrote. I don't use AI and I support myself. It's only natural.

This is the first time I have seen someone lead the Siheyuan to achieve national success!

The same style as always😂😂😂

Worthy of five-star praise