After I Transformed, I Still Couldn't Beat Him, Even Though He Was Reborn

For the time being, except for one section, it is not clear whether the male protagonist or the female protagonist is speaking. Need to slow down a bit. Other aspects. Overall, it's above average, no problem. The stylistic proposition is relatively sweet at the moment. Nothing too outrageous about it.

Yes, it's my favorite delicious dish.

At the moment, I feel it's okay. I suggest changing each chapter to more than 2,000 words, so that it will appear that you have updated a lot. It also seems like there are too many chapters. Otherwise, many people might just choose to add bookshelf first after reading only 20 chapters, and then read more. Chapters 18-19 are a bit flawed. In chapter 18, the heroine is targeted and a whole chapter of more than 8,000 words is written. As a result, the male protagonist's counterattack in Chapter 19 was painless, with nothing more than a harsh word. Not happy to see Moreover, the heroine's counterattack in Chapter 18 was almost non-existent. When she already knew that the hero would be 100% on her side, she could have pointed at the three people and scolded them, but the heroine chose the strategy with the most barrages. I can only say that I either write sweet stories or daily stories. If you want to write about business wars and the fights between wealthy families, don't write in such a frustrating way.

It's so beautiful, come on, give you 99 likes

Very good. Come on, author.

It's okay to read it as a little sweet article

Has the male protagonist already traveled through time when he met the female protagonist in his previous life?

Very well written, delicate and soft time, attachment